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Aは美しく優しい曲だと思いました。夕焼けと言うタイトル通り、美しい景色が広がるような感じがします。
Bは最後を飾るのにふさわしい名曲ですね！
バンドの演奏と、XさんとYさんのボーカルが混ざり合って、まるでハッピーエンドの映画を見終わった後のような気持ちになりました！
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プロフィールはレーベルのウェブサイトにも書いてあるのですが、
今の状況に合わせて修正した方が良いかも知れないと思ったのと、
あなたに書いてもらった方が、より、自然な英語になると思ったのでお願いしたいと思いました。
評価
52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2015/11/29 06:39:25に投稿されました
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I thought that A was a beautiful and gentle piece. As described by the title, Sunset, I felt as if I could see the beautiful scenery in front of me.
B is a masterpiece that is perfect for a finale.
The play by the band and the vocals of X and Y blend so nicely that I had the feeling as if I just watched a happy ending movie!
2
Though your profile is on the website of your label, I thought that it should be updated. Also I thought that it would be better for you to write it since it would be more natural English.
hskm224さんはこの翻訳を気に入りました
I thought that A was a beautiful and gentle piece. As described by the title, Sunset, I felt as if I could see the beautiful scenery in front of me.
B is a masterpiece that is perfect for a finale.
The play by the band and the vocals of X and Y blend so nicely that I had the feeling as if I just watched a happy ending movie!
2
Though your profile is on the website of your label, I thought that it should be updated. Also I thought that it would be better for you to write it since it would be more natural English.
評価
50
翻訳 / 英語
- 2015/11/29 07:17:58に投稿されました
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I think that A is a beautiful and gentle song.
As the title "sunset"says, it makes feel feeling like spread beautiful scenery to me.
I think B is a masterpiece suits to perform the last!
I felt like after I had finished watching a movie of happy ending as
it was intermingled that the band performance and vocal of X's and Y's,
2
The profile is written on the label web site but,
I thought it is better to modify to suit the current situation.
It might better that if you wrote it to be more natural English.
hskm224さんはこの翻訳を気に入りました
I think that A is a beautiful and gentle song.
As the title "sunset"says, it makes feel feeling like spread beautiful scenery to me.
I think B is a masterpiece suits to perform the last!
I felt like after I had finished watching a movie of happy ending as
it was intermingled that the band performance and vocal of X's and Y's,
2
The profile is written on the label web site but,
I thought it is better to modify to suit the current situation.
It might better that if you wrote it to be more natural English.
