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元の翻訳
Hello,
Your purchased item was returned to us as it seems you had refused to receive.
If you wish them to be sent to you once again, please bear delivery fee of $10.
We will invoice you via PayPal for the moment.
If you do not need to receive this again, we will refund your payment deducting $15 that consist of the shipping cost $10 and our handling fee $5.
We look forward to hearing from you.

Hello,
Thank you for your purchasing our product that you made reservation for.
We are planning to ship this on October 31.
Once it is shipped, we will inform you its tracking number.
Thank you again for your business with us.

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Hello,
Your purchased item was returned to us as it seems you had refused to receive.
If you wish them to be sent to you once again, please bear a delivery fee of $10.
We will invoice you via PayPal for the moment.
If you do not need to receive this again, we will refund your payment deducting $15 that consist of the shipping cost $10 and our handling fee $5.
We look forward to hearing from you.

Hello,
Thank you for your purchasing our product that you made reservation for.
We are planning to ship this on October 31.
Once it is shipped, we will inform you its tracking number.
Thank you again for your business with us.

元の翻訳
Hello
The item was returned due to your refusal.
If you want to resend it, please bear the shipping cost of $10.
I'll send the invoice via Paypal tentatively.
If you don't need it, I'll refund the amount of money less shipping fee "$10" + eBay charge "$5" (total $15).
Thanks in advance.


Hello
Thank you for your buying layaway merchandise.
I'll ship it on October 31st.
As soon as when I ship, I'll let you know the tracking number.
Thanks in advance.

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Hello
The item was returned due to your refusal.
If you want to resend it, please bear the shipping cost of $10.
I'll send the invoice via Paypal tentatively.
If you don't need it, I'll refund the amount of money less shipping fee "$10" + eBay charge "$5" (total $15).
Thanks in advance.


Hello
Thank you for your buying layaway merchandise.
I'll ship it on October 31st.
As soon as I ship, I'll let you know the tracking number.
Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
I am deeply sorry for the inconvenience it has caused you. Thank you for sending the photo of the receipt. I will reimburse you $191 as for the repair cost. I understand that in addition to that, you need the repair for the second time to insert new tapes, in case the original tapes in the machine causes the unit to wear away. I should be glad to pay for it as well. Could you please send me the receipt for the second repair, as with Paypal I need to reimburse you all in one time. I promise to return both of the repair costs once I receive the receipt.

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I am deeply sorry for the inconvenience it has caused you. Thank you for sending the photo of the receipt. I will reimburse you $191 as for the repair cost. I understand that in addition to that, you need the repair for the second time to insert new tapes, in case the original tapes in the machine causes the unit to wear away. I should be glad to pay for it as well. Could you please send me the receipt for the second repair, as with Paypal I need to reimburse you all in one time. I promise to return both of the repair costs instantly once I receive the receipt.

元の翻訳
As it is listed in description of the item, we send items without setting a tracking number at items.
The reason is that many customers say that "they would like us to send at as low price as possible without the tracking number.

For this reason, we can sell the items at low price, and they are satisfied with us.
However, the items arrive behind schedule once in a while.

If your item arrives behind schedule, may we ask you a patience?
If you do not like it, I recommend that you set registered mail to the item.

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As it is listed in description of the item, we send items without setting a tracking number at items.
The reason is that many customers say that "they would like us to send at as low price as possible without the tracking number.

For this reason, we can sell the items at low prices, and they are satisfied with us.
However, the items can arrive behind schedule once in a while.

If your item arrives behind the schedule, may we ask you a patience?
If you do not like it, I recommend that you set a registered mail to the item.

元の翻訳
As written in the product description, we are shipping our goods without tracking number.
The reason for this is that there are customers who says
"I don't need tracking number and please make the price cheaper as much as possible"

So, we are selling our goods cheaper price and making our customers happy.

However, sometimes the arrival of goods delay.

If your goods were delayed, can you patiently wait for it to arrive?
If you do not wish to wait, then we recommend to add register mail.

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As written in the product description, we ship our goods without tracking number.
The reason for this is that there are customers who say
"I don't need tracking number and please make the price as cheap as possible"

So, we are selling our goods for cheaper price and making our customers happy.

However, sometimes the arrival of goods delays.

If your goods are delayed, can you patiently wait for it to arrive?
If you do not wish to wait, then we recommend to have the mail registered.

元の翻訳
If you have tracking number you can identify whereabouts of your goods.

You need $4 more for the registered mail. Of that I will pay $1 .
So please pay only $3.

If you agree, please reply.
I will send you an additional invoice

Of course the goods will reach you without the tracking number.
If you do not need the tracking number please do not reply to this email.

Thank you for your consideration.

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If you have the tracking number you can identify whereabouts of your goods.

You need $4 more for the registered mail. Of that I will pay $1 .
So please pay only $3.

If you agree, please reply.
I will send you an additional invoice

Of course the goods will reach you without the tracking number.
If you do not need the tracking number please do not reply to this email.

Thank you for your consideration.

元の翻訳
I can confirm the current location of the post with the tracking number.

For registered mail they require extra $4. So I suggest I pay $1 and I would like to ask you to pay extra $3 only.

Please reply to me if this suits you.
I will then send you an additional invoice.

The post will reach you even without the tracking number, and if you do not need the number, there is no need for the reply.

Thank you in advance for your consideration.

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I can confirm the current location of the post with the tracking number.

For a registered mail they require extra $4. So I suggest I pay $1 and I would like to ask you to pay extra $3 only.

Please reply to me if this suits you.
I will then send you an additional invoice.

The post will reach you even without the tracking number, and if you do not need the number, there is no need for the reply.

Thank you in advance for your consideration.

元の翻訳
If we have a tracking number, we can check location of the item.
The fee of the registered mail is 4 dollars additionally, but I will pay for 1 dollar.
So would you pay for only 3 dollars?

If you agree to it, please let me know.
I will send an additional invoice.

Of course, you will receive the item without tracking number.
If you do not need a tracking number, you do not have to reply this e-mail.
I appreciate your consideration for my idea.

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If we have a tracking number, we can check the location of the item.
The fee of the registered mail is 4 dollars additionally, but I will pay for 1 dollar.
So would you pay for only 3 dollars?

If you agree to it, please let me know.
I will send an additional invoice.

Of course, you will receive the item without a tracking number.
If you do not need a tracking number, you do not have to reply this e-mail.
I appreciate your consideration for my idea.

元の翻訳
The buyer returned the product, but it has not arrived here, because the transportation company misplaced it.
When I looked up the tracking number, I saw that the package had stopped at the transportation company for months.

Since who returned it was the buyer, I cannot do anything from here.

Previously, when I received the A-to-z Guarantee claims and Chargeback claims, I told Amazon the whole story and had the tracking number verified. After that, you withdrew this claim.

So, do I need to refund the buyer, even if I have not received the product back?

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The buyer returned the product, but it has not arrived here, because the transportation company misplaced it.
When I looked up the tracking number, I saw that the package had stopped at the transportation company for months.

Since who returned it was the buyer, I cannot do anything from here.

Previously, when I received the A-to-z Guarantee claims and Chargeback claims, I told Amazon the whole story and had the tracking number verified. After that, they withdrew this claim.

So, do I need to refund the buyer, even if I have not received the product back?

元の翻訳
I meant to write you today, too!
We can make a reservation for aaa from today.
It costs $●. How do you like it?

I can't find the Halloween items of bbb and ccc yet.
I can show you the items of ddd.
I send some photos of new items instead. Do you have anything you like?

I'm very sorry.
I shipped only one item even you had ordered two.
It's my fault. I will send the other one ASAP today.
I'll tell you the tracking number when I sent it, too.
Thank you for your patience.

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I meant to write you today, too!
You can make a reservation for aaa from today.
It costs $●. How do you like it?

I can't find the Halloween items of bbb and ccc yet.
I can show you the items of ddd.
I send some photos of new items instead. Do you have anything you like?

I'm very sorry.
I shipped only one item even you had ordered two.
It's my fault. I will send the other one ASAP today.
I'll tell you the tracking number when I sent it, too.
Thank you for your patience.

元の翻訳
I was thinking about contacting you today!
Today, the reservation of aaa started.
The price is $●. Would you like?

I still have not found the Halloween items bbb and ccc.
I can introduce the ddd item.
Instead, I will send you a picture of a new product. Do you have any preference?

I am terribly sorry.
You ordered 2 units, but I shipped only 1.
This is totally my mistake. I will send the other one today.
Also, as soon as I ship it, I will inform you the tracking number.
Thank you very much.

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I was thinking about contacting you today!
Today, the reservation of aaa has started.
The price is $●. Would you like?

I still have not found the Halloween items bbb and ccc.
I can introduce the ddd item.
Instead, I will send you a picture of a new product. Do you have any preference?

I am terribly sorry.
You ordered 2 units, but I shipped only 1.
This is totally my mistake. I will send the other one today.
Also, as soon as I ship it, I will inform you the tracking number.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I am just about to email you today!
The reservation of aaa has begun from today.
The price is $●. What do you think?

I have been unable to find the Halloween items, bbb and ccc.
An item, ddd, is available.
Instead, I have attached a picture of a new product. Is there any of these that interest you?

I am very sorry.
You ordered two items, but I have sent out one item only.
It is my fault. I will send the other one soon today.
I will let you know a tracking number after I send it to you.
Thank you.

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I was just about to email you today!
The reservation of aaa has begun from today.
The price is $●. What do you think?

I have been unable to find the Halloween items, bbb and ccc.
An item, ddd, is available.
Instead, I have attached a picture of a new product. Is there any of these that interests you?

I am very sorry.
You ordered two items, but I have sent out one item only.
It is my fault. I will send the other one soon today.
I will let you know a tracking number after I send it to you.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Because it is very expensive, I would like to consider the cooperation with your Chinese partners.
In addition, since I can't speak English nor Chinese, I am writing this text with the help of a translator.
So, please understand that it might occur some inconveniences.

Thank you for the documents.

I am also aware of Pete Shirey 's matter.

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Because it is very expensive, I would like to consider the cooperation with your Chinese partners.
In addition, since I can't speak English nor Chinese, I am writing this text with the help of a translator.
So, please understand that it might occur some inconveniences.

Thank you for the documents.

I am also aware of the Pete Shirey's matter.

元の翻訳
It seems to cost a lot so I would like to consider the cooperation with your company China partner.
I write this letter through a translator so please understand if you have some inconvenience in communication between us. I cannot speak both English and Chinese.

Thank you for your documents.

I understood about Mr. Pete Shirey.

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It seems to cost a lot so I would like to consider the cooperation with your partner in China.
I write this letter through a translator so please understand if you have some inconveniences in communication between us. I cannot speak both English and Chinese.

Thank you for your documents.

I understood about Mr. Pete Shirey.

元の翻訳
It seems that it will cost very much, so I would like to consider partnering with your company in China.
As I don’t speak English or Chinese, I am writing my email with the help of a translator.
Please understand it may cause you any inconvenience because of this.

Thank you for the documents.

I understand about Pete Shirey.

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It seems that it will cost very much, so I would like to consider partnering with your company in China.
As I don’t speak English or Chinese, I am writing my email with the help of a translator.
Please understand it may cause you any inconveniences because of this.

Thank you for the documents.

I understand about Pete Shirey.

元の翻訳
As it seems that the cost is very high, I would like to consider working with your partner in China. I am not good at English or Chinese and I am using translators to write the sentences here. Sorry in advance for any inconvenience caused by this.

Thank you for sending the documents.

I understand about the role of Mr. Pete Shirey.

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As it seems that the cost is very high, I would like to consider working with your partner in China. I am not good at English or Chinese and I am using translators to write the sentences here. Sorry in advance for any inconveniences caused by this.

Thank you for sending the documents.

I understand about the matter of Mr. Pete Shirey.

元の翻訳
I'd like to consider our working with your partner in China, because of its huge cost.
I can't speak English and Chinese, so I hire a translator to write this message.
So, please note that it might be inconvenient to you.

Thank you for your documents and so on.

I understood the matter for Mr. Pete Shirey.

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I'd like to consider working with your partner in China, because of its huge cost.
I can't speak English and Chinese, so I hire a translator to write this message.
So, please note that it might be inconvenient to you.

Thank you for your documents and so on.

I understood the matter for Mr. Pete Shirey.

元の翻訳
I am emailing you because I have good news for you.
I had an inquiry and “a” that was sold out was canceled.
So, I am able to sell it to you.

Before that, I have a question for you. The weight of “a” is about 3kg and it is made of relatively light material.
I recommend this because it is in very good condition.

The price is $95 (the max price on eBay)+$3(shipping cost) = $98 (grand total)
But if you can directly reply to this email, I can give you more discounts.
I can sell it at $90, which is the total price after $5 is deducted from the price of the unit plus free shipping.

I will list it again. Please understand if it is sold out

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I am emailing you because I have good news for you.
I had an inquiry and “a” that was sold out was canceled.
So, I am able to sell it to you.

Before that, I have answers for you. The weight of “a” is about 3kg and it is made of relatively light material.
I recommend this because it is in a very good condition.

The price is $95 (the max price on eBay)+$3(shipping cost) = $98 (grand total)
But if you can directly reply to this email, I can give you more discounts.
I can sell it at $90, which is the total price after $5 is deducted from the price of the unit plus free shipping.

I will list it again. Please understand if it is sold out.

元の翻訳
I am contacting you to give you a good news.
I received an inquiry, and the sold-out "a" has been canceled.
Therefore, I can sell it to you.

But I would like to answer your question first. "a"'s weight is about 3Kg; it is made of a lightweight material.
I strongly recommend this, as it is in a very good condition.

The price limit in eBay would be $95 + postage ($3), a total of $98.
But if you buy directly by replying this e-mail, I can give you a further discount.
I can deduct $5 from the product + free shipping, totaling $90.

I am auctioning for the second time. Please forgive me if it sells out.

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I am contacting you to give you a good news.
I received an inquiry, and the sold-out "a" has been canceled.
Therefore, I can sell it to you.

But I would like to answer your question first. "a"'s weight is about 3Kg; it is made of a lightweight material.
I strongly recommend this, as it is in a very good condition.

The price limit in eBay would be $95 + postage ($3), a total of $98.
But if you buy directly by replying this e-mail, I can give you a further discount.
I can deduct $5 from the product + free shipping, totaling $90.

I am auctioning it for the second time. Please forgive me if it sells out.

元の翻訳
I'm afraid say this but we found out that the recommendation we sent to you was incomplete. We are sending you a corrected version.
If it's too long or if there's any issue with the recommendation, please let us know.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I am afraid to say this but we found out that the recommendation we sent to you was incomplete. We are sending you a corrected version.
If it is too long or if there is any issue with the recommendation, please let us know.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for you inconvenience.
I'll send revised commendation, because there was a lack of it.
If there are any problems like "it is too long", please let me know.
Thanks in advance.

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I'm sorry for you inconvenience.
I'll send a revised recommendation, because there were some parts missing.
If there are any problems like "it is too long", please let me know.
Thank you very much in advance.

元の翻訳
The product that you ordered was already sent to the designated postal address on September 15th.
There is no tracking number due to sending by Yu-mail.
Address: 〒xxx-xxxx

As you told that the product does not reach yet, I checked the reason why it does not reach, I know that your postal address is to "jshoppers.com" and you seem to be a forwarding company.

And now I called "jshoppers.com" and confirmed that the postal address you designated was not correct.

If the product was returned to me, I will contact to you again.

Best regards,

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The product that you ordered was already sent to the designated postal address on September 15th.
There is no tracking number as it was sent by Yu-mail.
Address: 〒xxx-xxxx

As you told that the product does not reach yet, I checked the reason why it does not reach, I know that your postal address is to "jshoppers.com" and it seems to be a forwarding company.

And now I called "jshoppers.com" and confirmed that the postal address you designated was not correct.

If the product was returned to me, I will contact you again.

Best regards,