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元の翻訳
I received you cancellation. Please send the product back to the address below. As soon as I receive the product, I will refund the amount through paypal after deducting the shipping cost. Thank you.

修正後
I received you cancellation. Please send the product back to the address below. As soon as I receive it, I will refund the amount through paypal after deducting the shipping cost. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Since your company have never sent an invoice that we have been requested since last month and your address and phone number are unknown,
there is no way but we ask for refund!
I telephoned the company A and told that your company had no relation with A.
We purchased the products not from A but from your company, so we needed your information.
The parcel company also contacted A, but there are no record of any purchases under my name, so we could not get any information.
We cannot wait anymore, so we start the procedure of refund with PayPal.
Please contact the parcel company if you have any solutions.

修正後
Since your company has never sent an invoice that we have been requesting since last month and your address and phone number are unknown,
there is no way but to ask for a refund!
I telephoned company A and told that your company had no relations with A.
We purchased the products not from A but from your company, so we needed your information.
The parcel company also contacted A, but there are no records of any purchases under my name, so we could not get any information.
We cannot wait anymore, so we start the procedure of refund with PayPal.
Please contact the parcel company if you have any solutions.

元の翻訳
そもそもそこまでアリババは急いで事業拡大する必要があったのか。なぜ中国にとどまれなかったのか。

MG: 多くの人々が中流階級へと生活水準を向上していく中、アリババは中国国内だけでも充分な成長が見込めた事でしょう。ただアリババにもGoogleやFacebookと同じく世界的な成功への思いもあり、すでに東南アジアでの地位は確立していました。

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そもそもそこまでAlibabaは急いで事業拡大する必要があったのか。なぜ中国にとどまれなかったのか。

MG: 多くの人々が中流階級へと生活水準を向上していく中、Alibabaは中国国内だけでも充分な成長が見込めた事でしょう。ただAlibabaにもGoogleやFacebookと同じく世界的な成功への思いもあり、すでに東南アジアでの地位は確立していました。

元の翻訳
以下の商品について：

MOQ 20～100個
価格：30USドル×20＝600USドル＋35USドル（DHLもしくはTNTエクスプレス）＋20USドル（手数料）＝総合計655USドル

在庫はあります。一度支払いが完了すると、翌営業日までに発送します。
支払いはPaypalが利用可能です。Paypal口座のメールアドレスをお知らせいただければ、Paypalで「代金のリクエスト」をお送りします。

その他ご質問などありましたらお気軽にお問合せください。
良いお返事をお待ちしています。

修正後
以下の商品について：

MOQ（最低注文数量） 20～100個
価格：30USドル×20＝600USドル＋35USドル（DHLもしくはTNTエクスプレス）＋20USドル（手数料）＝総合計655USドル

在庫は十分あります。お支払い完了後、翌営業日までに発送します。
支払いはPaypalが利用可能です。Paypal口座のメールアドレスをお知らせいただければ、Paypalで「代金のリクエスト」をお送りします。

その他ご質問などありましたらお気軽にお問合せください。
良いお返事をお待ちしています。

元の翻訳
以下の商品について：

MOQ 20～100個
価格：30USドル×20＝600USドル＋35USドル（DHLもしくはTNTエクスプレス）＋20USドル（手数料）＝総合計655USドル

在庫はあります。一度支払いが完了すると、翌営業日までに発送します。
支払いはPaypalが利用可能です。Paypal口座のメールアドレスをお知らせいただければ、Paypalで「代金のリクエスト」をお送りします。

その他ご質問などありましたらお気軽にお問合せください。
良いお返事をお待ちしています。

修正後
以下の商品について：

MOQ 20～100個
価格：30USドル×20＝600USドル＋35USドル（DHLもしくはTNTエクスプレス）＋20USドル（手数料）＝総合計655USドル

在庫はあります。支払いが完了すると、翌営業日に発送します。
支払いはPaypalが利用可能です。Paypal口座のメールアドレスをお知らせいただければ、Paypalで「代金のリクエスト」をお送りします。

その他ご質問などありましたらお気軽にお問合せください。
良いお返事をお待ちしています。

元の翻訳
以下の商品について：

MOQ 20～100個
価格：30USドル×20＝600USドル＋35USドル（DHLもしくはTNTエクスプレス）＋20USドル（手数料）＝総合計655USドル

在庫はあります。一度支払いが完了すると、翌営業日までに発送します。
支払いはPaypalが利用可能です。Paypal口座のメールアドレスをお知らせいただければ、Paypalで「代金のリクエスト」をお送りします。

その他ご質問などありましたらお気軽にお問合せください。
良いお返事をお待ちしています。

修正後
以下の商品について：

最低注文数量 (MOQ) 20～100個
価格：30USドル×20＝600USドル＋35USドル（DHLもしくはTNTエクスプレス）＋20USドル（手数料）＝総合計655USドル

在庫はあります。支払いが完了すると、翌営業日に発送します。
支払いはPaypalが利用可能です。Paypal口座のメールアドレスをお知らせいただければ、Paypalで「代金のリクエスト」をお送りします。

その他ご質問などありましたらお気軽にお問合せください。
良いお返事をお待ちしています。

元の翻訳
We would like to apologize for our late reply.

We are glad to hear that you are interested in purchasing the sword.

Please let us let you know a few things.

- Your order needs special requirements for us, the costs start from at least $20,000 to produce the sword.
- It takes about 5 to 6 months to produce and deliver it to you.
- Please send us some photos how you would like the sword to be.

修正後
We would like to apologize for our late reply.

We are glad to hear that you are interested in purchasing the sword.

Please allow us to make sure a few things.

- Your order is quite specific for us to work on; therefore, the cost start from at least $20,000 in order to produce the sword.
- It takes about 5 to 6 months to produce and deliver it to you.
- Please send us some photos how you would like the sword to be.

元の翻訳
As the grill was not what I expected and I would like to return it, please let me know the procedure.

修正後
As the grill was not what I had expected so, please let me know the return procedure.

元の翻訳
As the grill was not what I expected and I would like to return it, please let me know the procedure.

修正後
As the grill was different from what I expected, I would like to return it, please let me know the procedure.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your reply.
On which date would I be able to receive the two products?

修正後
Thank you very much for your reply.
When will I be able to receive the two products?

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you very much for your inquiry.
The product expires in roughly 3 years.
We will send you the product as a gift as you requested.
I would like to apologize in advance; since it is very popular in Japan, it may take some time before we will be able to send it out.
We will send it as soon as we are ready.
Thank you very much for your patience and please wait for a while until we ship the product.
Thank you very much again for choosing our shop.

修正後
Hello.
Thank you very much for your inquiry.
The term of validity for this product is about 3 years.
We will ship you the product as a gift as you requested.
However, I would like to apologize in advance that since this product is very popular in Japan right now, shipment may be delayed.
We will ship it as soon as we get it ready.
Thank you very much for your patience and please wait for a while until we ship the product.
Thank you very much again for choosing our shop.

元の翻訳
I have no idea why the items have not being shipped from your warehouse. I cannot wait further more since I still do not know when you are ready to ship the items. I cannot sell them until I know when I will receive them, so I have no amount sales. As a result, I do not have enough amount to pay out the next arrival items. Our priority request is to have the same amount we sent refunded. Otherwise, please ship out the items for the amount we paid from your warehouse as soon as possible.

修正後
I have no idea why the items have not been prepared for shipment from your warehouse. I cannot wait further more since I still do not know when you are ready to ship the items. I cannot sell them until I know when I will receive them, so I have no amount sales. As a result, I do not have enough amount to pay out the next arrival items. Our priority request is to have the same amount we sent refunded. Otherwise, please ship out the items for the amount we paid from your warehouse as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
After that, we have the item returned, but the clock of the item itself did not work and a part was damaged.
We wanted to refund the customer after we repaired the item, but the customer requests a full refund although the item is in a damaged condition.
Therefore, there has been little progress in the talks.
-The item is returned only for the customer's own convenience (i.e. mistaken size)
-The item is returned dammaged.
For the above 2 reasons, we would like to refund the price by deducting the repair cost.

修正後
After that, we have the item returned, but the clock of the item itself did not work and a part was damaged.
We wanted to refund the customer after we repaired the item, but the customer requests a full refund although the item is in a damaged condition.
Therefore, there has been little progress in the talks.
-The item is returned only for the customer's own convenience (i.e. mistaken size)
-The item is returned damaged.
For the above 2 reasons, we would like to refund the price by deducting the repair cost.

元の翻訳
Shinjiro Atae of AAA is confirmed to appear at "AGESTOCK2014 in Waseda Festival"!

The Outline:
<Title>
"AGESTOCK2014 in Waseda Festival Age x Shinjiro Atae of AAA"

<Date>
Saturday November 2nd
Open: 15:30 / Start 16:00

<Location>
Room 402, Building No. 15, Waseda Campus, Waseda University

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Shinjiro Atae of AAA is confirmed to appear at "AGESTOCK2014 in Waseda Festival"!

The Outline:
<Title>
"AGESTOCK2014 in Waseda Festival Age with Shinjiro Atae of AAA"

<Date>
Saturday November 2nd
Open: 15:30 / Start 16:00

<Location>
Room 402, Building No. 15, Waseda Campus, Waseda University