YY (yurochel) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Zahlung wurde bereits geleistet, allerdings ist sie bei Ihnen noch nicht eingegangen.
Ich bitte Sie so bald wie möglich um die Überpfürung Ihrer Einstellungen.

修正後
Zahlung wurde bereits geleistet, allerdings ist sie bei Ihnen noch nicht eingegangen. ["...allerdings wurde sie von Ihnen noch nicht angenommen"?]
Ich bitte Sie so bald wie möglich um die Überprüfung Ihrer Einstellungen.

元の翻訳
1. Haben Sie bereits die Ware versendet?
2. Bezahlung funktioniert irgendwie nicht. Könnten Sie bitte erneut die Rechnung senden?

修正後
1. Haben Sie bereits die Ware versendet?
2. Bezahlung funktioniert irgendwie nicht ["irgendwie" ist sehr umgangssprachlich, besser weglassen]. Könnten Sie bitte erneut die Rechnung senden?

元の翻訳
ドイツ

こんにちは、もう一度私です…

まずは、どうもどうもありがとう…あなたが連絡してくれるなんて思っていませんでしたよ^^
とても嬉しいです…あなたが言った通り、税関の請求書を添付します。
この件に関してお手数をおかけしますが、どうぞよろしくお願い致します。
またあなたのところで注文できればと思います^^
どうもありがとうございました
敬具　Fräßle(人名)

修正後
ドイツ

こんにちは、もう一度私です…

まずは、本当にどうもありがとう…あなたが連絡してくれるなんて思っていませんでしたよ^^
とても嬉しいです…あなたが言った通り、税関の請求書を添付します。
この件に関してお手数をおかけしますが、どうぞよろしくお願い致します。
またあなたのところで注文できればと思います^^
どうもありがとうございました
敬具　Fräßle(人名)

元の翻訳
Certainly you can purchase the item.
Since you've already ordered, you can buy it after I send you an invoice.
As soon as payment is received and confirmed, I'll send you the package.

The item is sent by EMS.
It costs 15 USD.
The total amount is 125 USD.

It takes a little time due to shipment from Japan.
That's why we'll send the package by EMS, so that you can receive it as soon as possible.

By the way, would you do me a favor and could you please change your feedback?

修正後
Certainly you can purchase the item.
Since you've already ordered, you can buy it after I send you an invoice.
As soon as payment is received and confirmed, I'll send you the package.

The item is sent by EMS.
It costs 15 USD.
The total amount is 125 USD.

It takes a little time due to shipment from Japan.
That's why we'll send the package by EMS, so that you can receive it as soon as possible.

By the way, could you do me a favor and please change your feedback?

元の翻訳
Certainly you can purchase the item.
Since you've already ordered, you can buy it after I send you an invoice.
As soon as payment is received and confirmed, I'll send you the package.

The item is sent by EMS.
It costs 15 USD.
The total amount is 125 USD.

It takes a little time due to shipment from Japan.
That's why we'll send the package by EMS, so that you can receive it as soon as possible.

By the way, would you do me a favor and could you please change your feedback?

修正後
Certainly you can purchase the item.
Since you've already ordered, you can buy it after I send you an invoice.
As soon as payment is received and confirmed, I'll send you the package.

The item is sent by EMS.
It costs 15 USD.
The total amount is 125 USD.

It takes a little time due to shipment from Japan.
That's why we'll send the package by EMS, so that you can receive it as soon as possible.

By the way, would you do me a favor by changing your feedback?

元の翻訳
I'm very sorry for asking many things.
I have one more question.

I'd prefer to change settings to censor some keywords (e.g. "abc") and words that includes banned keywords (e.g. "abcde").

For example:
no-go word: abc
written word: abcde
effect: ***de

Which source do I have to change?

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I'd also like to change sentences quoted from aaa.com into an another language. Which source do I have to change?

修正後
I'm very sorry for asking so many questions.
I have one more question.

I would like the change the settings so that when I register the word "abc" to the exclusion list, a string "abcde" would be excluded as well.

For example:
word to be excluded: abc
input: abcde
result: ***de

Whwere in the source code should I modify?

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I'd also like to change the sentences quoted from aaa.com into another language. Which source do I have to change?