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Thank you for replying.
This is 【***名前】from 【＊＊＊会社名】who has contacted you.

I would like to buy ten 【＊＊＊商品名】s.
My shipping address is 【**************住所**********】.

Please contact me about the total price and paying methods.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for replying.
This is 【***名前】from 【＊＊＊会社名】who has contacted you the other day.

We would like to order ten quantities of 【＊＊＊商品名】.
My shipping address is 【**************住所**********】.

Please contact me about the quote and payment methods.
Thank you very much.

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Deaer Mr/Mrs ●●

Thank you very much for purchasing.

We are having a sale right now!!

We would like you to give a comment on our shipping service.
You would be able to receive a a gift card of 5 dollars from us, if you could give us a full score on customers valuation.

2. Just for now! Free shipping is available in the sales period.

3. Thank you for giving us comments.
A five dollar gift card will be sent on a PDF file.
Gift Card Number:

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Dear Mr/Ms ●●

Thank you very much for purchasing from us.

We are having a special sale right now!!

We would like you to give a comment on our shipping service.
You will be able to receive a gift card of five dollars from us, if you could give us a full score on customers valuation.

2. Just for now! Free shipping is available in the sales period.

3. Thank you for giving us comments.
A five dollar gift card will be sent on a PDF file.
Gift Card Number: