yamak — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I checked the stock. No.36 blade is sold out already.
We refund that you paid $30.↵
Please check your Paypal account.

When the blade of No.36 will arrived next, we notice you prior to another customer.
Good luck.

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今回、商品の到着が遅れていますことをお詫びいたします。
あなたに送った商品は、カナダの郵便局のミスで日本に
返送されてきましたので、私は本日、再発送いたしました。
到着まであと1週間ほどかかりますのでしばらくお待ちください

修正後
I checked the stock. No.36 blade is sold out already [choppy: should be in one sentence].
We refund [tense confusion] that you paid $30 [awkward], so please check your Paypal account.

When the blade No.36 will arrived [tense confusion] next, we notice you prior to other customers.
Good luck [different from the original].

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今回、商品の到着が遅れていますことをお詫びいたします。
あなたに送った商品は、カナダの郵便局のミスで日本に
返送されてきましたので、私は本日、再発送いたしました。
到着まであと1週間ほどかかりますのでしばらくお待ちください

元の翻訳
However I´ve been went Saijo mitake and towe of Himeyuri I joined it again with a guide to here explanation.
Tour charge is less expensive as 900yen and I wasn´t berieve it but I was get on the bus. First we visit the Saijo mitake and next I choose them Nihara beach or Okinawa world. I chooseed Okinawa world because I wanted to go Tamasendo.
Next we visitd the tower of Himeyuri and airport and finally we broke up at Palette Kumojimae on 13：20.

修正後
However I´ve been went Saijo mitake and towe [spelling] of Himeyuri I joined it again with a guide to here [word confusion] explanation.
Tour charge is less expensive as 900yen and I wasn´t berieve [spelling] it but I was get [grammar] on the bus. First we visit the Saijo mitake and next I choose them Nihara beach or Okinawa world. I chooseed [spelling] Okinawa world because I wanted to go Tamasendo.
Next we visitd [spelling] the tower of Himeyuri and airport and finally we broke up at Palette Kumojimae on 13：20.