Yae Kasama (viviking_1) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
May J. And Chris Heart Summer Live 2014

*Date: August 24 (sun)
*Venue: Tsugaru Global Village Ampitheater ( Aomori Prefecture Tsugaru city Tamura Tokomai Fujiyama.
*Time: Venue open at 4pm and the Show will start at 5:30pm

*Ticket fee
Designated block ¥6500(tax included) A-D Block
Appointed Day ticket ¥7500(tax included)- you can buy tickets on then venue
Parking ticket ¥1000(tax included) =( ticket Pia)↵
Avaible at Tsugaru Global Village only

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May J. And Chris Heart Summer Live 2014

*Date: August 24 (sun)
*Venue: Tsugaru Global Village Ampitheater ( Aomori Prefecture Tsugaru city Tamura Tokomai Fujiyama.
*Time: Venue open at 4pm and the Show will start at 5:30pm

*Ticket fee
Designated block ¥6500(tax included) A-D Block
Door ticket ¥7500(tax included)- Door tickets will be sold at the theatre
Parking ticket ¥1000(tax included) =Avaible at Ticket Pia and Tsugaru Global Village only

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A live viewing of ayumi hamasaki PREMIUM SHOWCASE ～Feel the love～ is decided!!

Ayumi Hamasaki's Premium Showcase live concert will be broadcasted in theaters all across the country!
The「ayumi hamasaki PREMIUM SHOWCASE ～Feel the love～」, occurring on 6 July 2014 in the first gymnasium of Yoyogi National Gymnasium, has been set to also be available for live viewing in theaters.

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A live viewing of Ayumi Hamasaki PREMIUM SHOWCASE ～Feel the love～ is decided!!

Ayumi Hamasaki's Premium Showcase live concert will be broadcasted in movie theaters all across the country!
The「Ayumi Hamasaki PREMIUM SHOWCASE ～Feel the love～」, occurring on 6 July 2014 in the first gymnasium of Yoyogi National Gymnasium, has been set to also be available for live viewing in theaters.

元の翻訳
*Day exchange tickets
Place: Osaka Cstle hall "Day exchange tickets Sale Counter"
Time: from one hour before the doors open

*Please note that you cannot choose the seat.↵
*You may not be able to get the seats next to each other if you get more than two. Please understand it in advance.
*We will stop the sale as soon as the number of tickets sold reaches the expected amount.

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*Door tickets
Place: Osaka Castle hall "Door tickets Sale Counter"
Time: Starts from one hour before the doors open

*You may not be able to get the serial number seats. Please understand it in advance.↵
*Please note that you will not be able to choose the seat.
*We will stop the sale as soon as the number of tickets are sold when it reaches the expected amount.

元の翻訳
私たちはすべてのお客様に配達された衣服のタグをとり、包装を廃棄する前によく衣服を確認されることをお勧めします。商品を返品されるには、未着用、未洗浄、未使用でタグが付いたままである必要があります。
履物はもともと入っていた箱の中の保護梱包箱の内側に戻してください。
靴下は開封されていないパッケージのまま返品されなければなりません。下着は服の上から来てみてください。
私達はお客様に商品は配送の間の緩衝材を入れた送られてきた箱に入れて返品していただくようにお願いいたします。
返品された商品は無料のコレクションサービスにおける配送コストを除いて、返金されます。

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私たちは商品到着時にすべてのお客様に配達された衣服に付いているタグを取らず、包装を廃棄する前によく衣服を確認されることをお勧めします。商品を返品なさる場合、未着用、未洗浄、未使用でタグが付いたままでなければなりません。
履物はもともと入っていた箱の中の保護梱包箱の内側に戻してください。
靴下は未開封のパッケージのまま返品されなければなりません。下着の試着はお手持ちの下着の上からに限ります。
私達はお客様に商品は配送の間の緩衝材を入れた送られてきた箱に入れて返品していただくようにお願いいたしております。
無料のコレクションサービスをご利用の場合返品された商品は配送料金を除いて返金されます。

元の翻訳
こんにちは、

初版ナムコミュージアムVol.3にとても興味があります。

http://www.amazon.com/Namco-Museum-Japan-Import-PlayStation1-PlayStation2/dp/B000069S9E/ref=sr_1_2?m=A1U1INAUV1DHEY&s=merchant-items&ie=UTF8&qid=1393941385&sr=1-2&keywords=namco+museum

二つ質問があります。
こちらの商品は初版ですか？（プレイステーションザベスト版ではないですよね。）
スピンカード付ですか？

有難うございます。
マルコ

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こんにちは、

中古の初版ナムコミュージアムVol.3にとても興味があります。

http://www.amazon.com/Namco-Museum-Japan-Import-PlayStation1-PlayStation2/dp/B000069S9E/ref=sr_1_2?m=A1U1INAUV1DHEY&s=merchant-items&ie=UTF8&qid=1393941385&sr=1-2&keywords=namco+museum

二つ質問があります。
こちらの商品は初版ですか？（プレイステーションザベスト版ではないですよね。）
スピンカード付ですか？

有難うございます。
マルコ

元の翻訳
Aren't you hurt, painful, being with me? I'd rather to ask Takuma.

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Don't you feel pain or suffering, being with me?↵
I wanted to ask especially Takuma.

元の翻訳
Halloween

For Disneyland outing!
Your nails are totally ready for World of Disney.

For Disneyland on Halloween Season!
Matching with the Halloween decorations at Disneyland.

For Paris trip

For UK trip
Little details but big impression to show that we are from Japan.

Fictional Characters
Japanese people love fictional characters. And Japanese people are good at detailed task and great at their hands.
These character nails are easily made.

Pocket Monsters

So Adorable!

M&M'S®
Love to grab some real M&M'S with this!

Hello Kitty and My Melody

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Halloween

For Disneyland outing!
Your nails are totally ready for World of Disney.

For Disneyland on Halloween Season!
Matching with the Halloween decorations at Disneyland.

For Paris trip

For UK trip
Give impressions in a casual way as Japanese tourists.

Fictional Characters
Japanese people love fictional characters. Furthermore, Japanese people are good at detailed works and are clever at their hands.
These character nails are easily made.

Pocket Monsters

So Adorable!

M&M'S®
Love to grab some real M&M'S with this!

Hello Kitty and My Melody

元の翻訳
Let's try the Minoo's speciality which is unfamiliar for Japanese too!

Tempura of Momiji

Speaking of souvenir from Minoo, tempura of Momiji comes first.
Momiji (maole leaf) are flied surprisingly!
Its taste differs from the one we always eat. It tastes sweet and sesame seeds are put in.
We call it "Tempura," but it can also be a kind of Japanese sweets used Momiji.

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Let's try the Minoo's speciality which even Japanese will be surprised!

Tempura of Momiji

Speaking of souvenir from Minoo, tempura of Momiji comes first.
Momiji (maole leaf) are flied surprisingly!
Its taste differs from the one we always eat. It tastes sweet and sesame seeds are put in.
We call it "Tempura," but it can also be a kind of Japanese sweets used Momiji.

元の翻訳
In the case of purchasing high ticket items, the payment will be divided into 2 times for tariff avoidance.

If the price is $3200, $20 will be required at the first time and the left $3180 will be required following.

The price will be written as $20 on the invoice for shipping to UK. Please show the receipt of $20 to customs officer if it's required.

You can find my website by searching SUZU online. Please send us E-mail through there for further enquiries.

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In the case of purchasing high ticket items, the payment shall be divided into twice for tariff avoidance.

If the price is $3200, $20 will be required for the first payment and the left amount $3180 shall be required later.

The price shall be written as $20 on the invoice for shipping to UK. In case the custom officer indicated th price,　please show the receipt of $20 to customs officer if it's required。

You can find my website by searching SUZU online. Please send us E-mail through there for further enquiries. ↵
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The satisfactions of the tip of razor and the sharpen type, shall be felt differently by the individuals↵

元の翻訳
Ibaflez氏は、医療費は毎年高騰しており、多くの人々は既に健康的なライフスタイルの開始している、と説明する。これは、「ここ最近、病気になったとしても誰も医療費を払えないからです」と彼は付け加えた。

深夜はほとんどの店は開いておらず、健康食品のオプションを探すことは困難である。

健康的なロールアウト。

メトロプレートは軽いランチをメインに調達するRice Labsと、今月末前を目標に契約を結んだ。

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Ibaflez氏は、医療費は毎年高騰しており、多くの人々は既に健康的なライフスタイルを実践している、と説明する。これは、「ここ最近、病気になったとしても誰も医療費を払えないからです」と彼は付け加えた。

深夜にはほとんどの店は開いておらず、健康食品を選択することは困難である。

健康的な本格展開。

手始めにMetroPlateは健康的な食事を調達するRice Labsと食料の主な供給者として今月末前を目標に契約を結んだ。

元の翻訳
December 12th, at the Lifelong Learning Center of Yamato city, Kanagawa, the "Exhibitions Seminar" opened. Organizer is the Industrial Activity Division of the Citizens Economics Department of Yamato City.

In Yamato, a project for "Industrial Technological Training", aimed at small and medium enterprises and small shop managers with the goal to better their capacity at technological development and management, is being carried out, this year, it is a series of exhibitions and other events titled "Exhibitions Seminar", about client acquisition and market expansion, targeting exhibiting industrials, and offering the know-how to guide the exhibition to success. It's the first time such a subject is offered.

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December 12th, at the Lifelong Learning Center of Yamato city, Kanagawa, the "Exhibitions Seminar" was held. Organizer is the Industrial Activity Division of the Citizens Economics Department of Yamato City.

In Yamato, a project for "Industrial Technological Training", aimed at small and medium enterprises and small shop managers with the goal to better their capacity at technological development and management, is being carried out, this year, it is a series of exhibitions and other events titled "Exhibitions Seminar", about client acquisition and market expansion, targeting exhibiting industrial, and offering the know-how to guide the exhibition to success. It's the first time such a subject is offered.

元の翻訳
The largest Christmas tree in Japan as high as 14.5 meters, which looks as if snow accumulated outside that is covered with snow, appeared.
By sparkling light at mirror ball on the floor, particle of light shines as if snow fell from ceiling along wall.

Pants of shilhouete that both men and women can wear.
Product for unisex.↵
Point of usual parker is long length where we wear.

It covers whole body where it is good for going outside and it can be used for relaxing.↵
We have no problem by wearing it at both front and back at our discretion.

No problem when hip is at face and front is at face.

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One of a largest Christmas tree in Japan appeared as high as 14.5 meters, which looks like coated by snow that was fallen outside.
By sparkling light at mirror ball on the floor, particle of light shines as if snow falls from ceiling along wall.

Pants of silhouette that both men and women can wear.
Product for unisex / standard parka's significant point of longer length.

As it covers whole body that is good for both going outside or as a room wear for relaxing / and you can wear it without checking front or back.

It's no problem if hip is at face and front is at face.

元の翻訳
#will
I understood. In addition, please contact me if you have the item I want.

#golf-xcess
Please suggest a price for Japanese customers if it is available.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but it would be helpful if you can confirm whether or not it is a product which I can order.
Thank you in advance.

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#will
I understood. In addition to say I will contact you if you have the item I want.

#golf-xcess
Please suggest a price for Japanese customers if it is available.
I'm sorry for bothering you, but it would be helpful if you can confirm whether or not it is a product which I can order.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Alibabaのe-ウォレットのユーザ数が100万人に近づき、独立ブランドになるだろう

中国独身者の日のセールが落ち着いた後、eコマースの巨人Alibabaのサードパーティ決済システムであるAlipayは、スマートフォンのe-ウォレットアプリユーザ数が現在ほぼ1億人であると発表した。それは今ある程度の勢いを保っており、TechwebによるとAlibabaはe-ウォレットを独立ブランドとしてスピンオフするだろう。

AlipayのスポークスマンであるFan Zhiming によると、Alipay Walletは近々大規模な全国ブランディングキャンペーンを開始する予定だという。

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Alibabaのe-ウォレットのユーザ数が1億人に近づき、独立ブランドになるであろう

中国独身者の日のセールが落ち着いた後、eコマースの巨人Alibabaのサードパーティ決済システムであるAlipayは、スマートフォンのe-ウォレットアプリユーザ数が現在ほぼ1億人であると発表した。それは今ある程度の勢いを保っており、TechwebによるとAlibabaはe-ウォレットを独立ブランドとしてスピンオフするとのこと。

AlipayのスポークスマンであるFan Zhiming によると、Alipay Walletは近々大規模な全国ブランディングキャンペーンを開始する予定だという。