翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/06/12 20:46:35

ayamipoyoyo
ayamipoyoyo 50 単身留学経験あり
日本語

■当日券
販売場所: 大阪城ホール 当日券売り場
販売時間: 開場1時間前~

※お席は、連番にならない可能性がございます。
※座席は、お選び頂けませんので予めご了承ください。
※予定枚数に達し次第、販売を終了いたします。予めご了承下さい。

英語

*Day exchange tickets
Place: Osaka Cstle hall "Day exchange tickets Sale Counter"
Time: from one hour before the doors open

*Please note that you cannot choose the seat.
*You may not be able to get the seats next to each other if you get more than two. Please understand it in advance.
*We will stop the sale as soon as the number of tickets sold reaches the expected amount.

レビュー ( 1 )

viviking_1 50 I have been in translation between Ja...
viviking_1はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/13 20:54:48

元の翻訳
*Day exchange tickets
Place: Osaka Cstle hall "Day exchange tickets Sale Counter"
Time: from one hour before the doors open

*Please note that you cannot choose the seat.
*You may not be able to get the seats next to each other if you get more than two. Please understand it in advance.
*We will stop the sale as soon as the number of tickets sold reaches the expected amount.

修正後
*Door tickets
Place: Osaka Castle hall "Door tickets Sale Counter"
Time: Starts from one hour before the doors open

*You may not be able to get the serial number seats. Please understand it in advance.
*Please note that you will not be able to choose the seat.
*We will stop the sale as soon as the number of tickets are sold when it reaches the expected amount.

当日券はDoor Ticketが一般的です。訳順がずれていたものも修正してみました。

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