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この翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました日本語 → 英語 2024/03/07 12:02:45
コメント This is a very good translation.

この翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました日本語 → 英語 2023/10/04 09:18:41
コメントまず、第2文の主語はyouにすべきです。「完成を待ち望んで」いる人物と「完成を急」いでいる人物はともに「友人」のはずですが、主語が「I」になってしまっています。

この翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語

2023/08/19 21:07:27

元の翻訳
We would like to inform you of our technical views as follows.

We assume that the data you gave is the component detected at different irradiation spots (*) in A, and that the difference is the difference in the component data.
* (wire surface vs. wire surface precipitates?)

The total amount of ingredients is as shown in the grades, and I believe the difference in values is due to the difference in irradiation spots.
We believe that the B component is uncontrollable by changing the sintering conditions.

Also, We received a PO from your EDI, but the quantity is one.
What is this? Please confirm.

修正後
We would like to inform you of our technical views as follows.

We assume that the data you gave is the component detected at different irradiation spots (*) in A, and that the difference is the difference in the component data.
* (wire surface vs. wire surface precipitates?)

The total amount of ingredients is as shown in the grades, and I believe the difference in values is due to the difference in irradiation spots.
We believe that the B component is uncontrollable by changing the sintering conditions.

We also received a PO from your EDI, but the quantity is one.
What is this? Please confirm.