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元の翻訳
We are very sorry, but the below order number is not dealt at our store.
Would you please double check to see if it was of other store purchase or with the wrong order number.
Sorry to trouble you.
116-5260178-6601054

We are sorry, but reshipment service is not available.
Nevertheless, we would like to refund $3 compensating for the trouble.
Thank you and best regards.

修正後
We are very sorry, but the below order number our store does not carry.
Would you please double check to see if it was purchased from another store or is it the wrong order number?
Sorry to trouble you.
116-5260178-6601054

We are sorry, but reshipment service is not available.
Nevertheless, we would like to refund $3 compensating for the inconvenience.
Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
Please accept our sincere apologies.
We have shipped the wrong item due to our miss.
Your correct item has already been shipped, so it should be at your door soon.
As for the wrong item we shipped to you, you may either keep it or get rid of it upon arrival.
Thank you and best regards.

Thank you for the message.
We are sorry to inform you, but this item has been sold with a wrong price due to our miss in the price adjustment.
We have addressed the refund immediately, thank you for your kind regards.

修正後
Please accept our sincere apologies.
We shipped the wrong item due to our error.
Your correct item has already been shipped, so it should be at your door soon.
As for the wrong item we shipped to you, you may either keep it or get rid of it upon arrival [illogical -- the customer has already received it].
Thank you and best regards.

Thank you for the message.
We are sorry to inform you, but this item has been sold with a wrong price due to our error in the price adjustment.
We issued a refund immediately, [comma splice] thank you for your kind regards.

元の翻訳
いくつかのルートからガラス製のものを注文しなければならないようですが、ほとんど全部到着してしまいました。6月16日月曜日に到着予定のものがもう1つあります。この注文だけにからんでＨＤ1201が1ペア足りないという連絡をうけました。ＨＤ800やＨＤ801であれば余剰在庫があるので、この注文を完了させるための代替のペアということで可能であればそのようにしたいと思いますがいかがでしょうか？

それから、弊社の昔のバックオーダー分がついに供給元から月曜日に発送されるとのこと。その1セットのグラスぶんの代替として対応可のうであればご連絡ください。現状残っている注文を全て来週月曜日までに完了させたいと考えています。

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いくつかのルートからメガネを注文しなければならなかったようですが、ほとんど全部到着してしまいました。6月16日月曜日に到着予定のものがもう1つあります。この注文だけにからんでＨＤ1201が1ペア足りないという連絡をうけました。ＨＤ800やＨＤ801であれば余剰在庫があるので、この注文を完了させるための代替のペアということで可能であればそのようにしたいと思いますがいかがでしょうか？

それから、弊社の昔のバックオーダー分がついに供給元から月曜日に発送されるとのこと。その1セットのメガネぶんの代替として対応可のうであればご連絡ください。現状残っている注文を全て来週月曜日までに完了させたいと考えています。

元の翻訳
2週間前、税関の担当から輸入手続きに入ったというお知らせを受け取りました。今日、また連絡がきてこの処理を完了させるためにＵＳ＄204の請求が来ました。商品コストの50％近くに相当する金額を払うなど到底受け入れられません。

p.s. 入札の段階でこういった関税の費用がかかるということをあなたは何も教えてくれませんでした。

先ほどこの商品をあなたから購入しましたが、それは「AI」モデルで「AI-S」ではありませんでした。商品発送前に注文をキャンセルします。申し訳ありませんがよろしくお願いします。

修正後
2週間前、税関業者から輸入手続きに入ったというお知らせを受け取りました。今日、また連絡がきてこの処理を完了させるためにＵＳ＄204の請求が来ました。商品コストの50％近くに相当する金額を払うなど到底受け入れられません。

p.s. 入札の段階でこういった関税の費用がかかるということをあなたは何も教えてくれませんでした。

先ほどこの商品をあなたから購入しましたが、それは「AI」モデルで「AI-S」ではありませんでした。商品発送前に注文をキャンセルします。申し訳ありませんがよろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
First, please accept my apologies. I could not reach you since my PC died on me. Simultaneously, those data saved for this application season was lost, so I am in the middle of reproducing it.

Please give me a week before handing in the data to you.

I will give you the instruction again upon giving it to you.

Please list this file data to the commerce following the manual.

Depending on the result, I will further provide you new instruction depending on your current ability/performance.

Please be sure to give me a prior notice if you plan to take a week off.

修正後
First, please accept my apologies. I could not reach you since my PC died on me. Simultaneously, those data saved for this application season was lost, so I am in the middle of reproducing it.

Please give me a week before handing in the data to you.

I will give you the instruction again upon giving it to you.

Please list this file data to the commerce following the manual.

Depending on the result, I will further provide you new instruction depending on your current ability/performance.

Please be sure to give me a prior notice if you plan to take days of for a week or longer.

元の翻訳
It says, the account registration was completed on June 7th from Japan... but I receive no approval notice. What is going on? Please RSVP ASAP. My e-mail address is xxx.

修正後
My name is ..., I have registered for my account from Japan on June 7th, but I still have not received approval notice. What is going on? Please RSVP ASAP. My e-mail address is xxx.

元の翻訳
It says, the account registration was completed on June 7th from Japan... but I receive no approval notice. What is going on? Please RSVP ASAP. My e-mail address is xxx.

修正後
Hello, this is (...). I had registered my account from Japan on June 7th, but I haven't received any approval notice. What is going on? Please RSVP ASAP. My e-mail address is xxx.

元の翻訳
To conclude with this investigation, our significant finding has identified that "iBeacon has reached as far as 69 meters to notify!".

修正後
To conclude with our research, the most significant finding is "iBeacon has reached as far as 69 meters to notify!".

元の翻訳
New Hire
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Mid Hire
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*Please confirm the respective company information from the list of locations.

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New graduates recruitment
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Mid-career recruitment
Please refer to the details with a selection of your preferred work location.
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元の翻訳
I am sorry for my belated reply. According to the wholesale dealer, the item should arrive sometime. I will let you know once I hear the news.

So you learn the tea ceremony? That sounds fantastic.
When I was a high schooler, I used to do the tea ceremony as a club activity. However it has been so long ago and my memory is ambiguous...
I remember I was once served with a Ayu fish shaped Japanese sweet at one of those ceremonies held in this season.
The sweet (gyu-hi) wrapped with a chewy texture is called AYU, and it is my favourite.
I will try my best to introduce as cute items as possible. Kind regards,

修正後
I am sorry for the late reply. According to the wholesale dealer, the item should arrive sometime. I will let you know once I hear any further news.

So you learn the about tea ceremony? That sounds fantastic.
When I was a high school student, I did the tea ceremony as a club activity. However it has been so long that I don't remember it very well...
I do remember I was once served an Ayu fish shaped Japanese sweet at one of those ceremonies held during this season.
The sweet (gyu-hi) wrapped with a chewy texture is called AYU, and it is my favourite.
I will try my best to introduce as many cute items as possible. Kind regards.

元の翻訳
この結果、300製品しか手元（御社の倉庫）にないとしても、合計で 300+50=350 が全ての販路に対する販売用に用意ができます。ですので販売が急速に行われると販売過多という状況にもなりかねません。
これは在庫のお手玉によるトレードオフです。販売過多というリスクが増大することに対する代償として御社の製品に対する需要がより高まることになります。チャネルの数量ページはこれらのリスクを発見し告知する目的で使用することが出来ます。そして分配やバッファー数、迅速な供給を通じて軽減することが出来るのです。

修正後
結果として、製品が300個しか手元（御社の倉庫）にないにも関わらず［or手持ちの（在庫の）製品数が300であるにのも関わらず］、依然として300+50=350個 が全チャネル［or全販路］上で販売中［or売出し中］と記載されており、従って販売が急速に進んだ場合［or一気に商品が売れた場合］、販売過多［or過剰販売］となる可能性があります。
これは在庫詐欺の［or在庫数のごまかしによる］取引であり、販売過多というリスクの増大の代償として御社の製品の危険状態が拡大します。Channel Quantity（販売チャネル数）のページがこれらのリスクを確認、特定するのに役立ち、また（同ページで）分配［or割当］数、バッファー数により、あるいは迅速な供給［or調達］によってリスクを軽減できます。