syc (syc333) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
※當日的交通費・留宿費等會由客人自己承擔。另外，活動中止・延期的情況，將不會補償旅費等費用。
不跟隨指示的話，可能會被拒絕參加。因不跟隨指示而造成的結果、混腌、事故，↵
組織者不承擔任何責任。
※當選權利禁止轉讓給其他人／拍賣等、一切理由(急病、工作等理由)。

修正後
※當日的交通費・住宿費等由參加者自行承擔。另外，若活動中止・延期，不會補償旅費等費用。
若不聽從指示，主辦單位有權利拒絕參加。此外，若不從指示造成混亂、事故發生，主辦單位不承擔任何責任。
※無論有任何理由(包含急病、工作等)，中獎權利皆嚴禁轉讓及拍賣給他人。

元の翻訳
※圖片A,B的收錄内容是一樣的。
※MUSIC CARD是以智能手機（Android、iPhone）與PC訪問卡內記載的專用網站，然後輸入PIN CODE，馬上就可以下載並享受音樂。
http://musicard.jp/
※下載期間是2015年7月31日為止。

修正後
※圖片A,B的收錄内容是一樣的。
※MUSIC CARD是用智慧型手機（Android、iPhone）與電腦，進入卡片背後記載的專用網站，然後輸入PIN CODE，馬上就可以下載並享受音樂。
http://musicard.jp/
※下載期間至2015年7月31日為止。

元の翻訳
The description of the product's condition is
"With feeling of second hand product. The disk don't have flaw. The one who care about finely condition please refrain.".

The domestic shipping fee in Japan is 510 YEN.
Although it is selling by auction, can I pay 8500 YEN for it in order to get it?
Since there are 4 days left, the price may rise.

Another product which is in exhibition is 11000YEN, accept prompt decision.
That is free shipping and the condition is good.

修正後
The description of the product's condition is
"With feeling of secondhand product. The disk don't [s-v agreement] have flaw. The one who care [s-v agreement] about condition should refrain.".

The domestic shipping fee in Japan is 510 yen.
Although it is selling by auction, can I pay 8,500 yen for it in order to get it [mistranslation]?
Since there are 4 days left, the price may rise.

Another product is 11,000 yen, accept [s-v agreement] prompt decision.
That is free shipping and the condition is good.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
This time we had make a mistake on the delivery country, you must be waiting for the goods painful, and we are really sorry and apologies for it.
However, the goods arrived safely which may at least help.
As this time it is our mistake, it cannot help even if we have corresponding feedback.
We are really apologies for it.

If you are using electronics like cardiac pacemaker, there is a risk of malfunction, please don't use it.

Please contact doctor when using it.

修正後
Thank you for your contact.
This time we shipped to the wrong country, [comma splice] you must be waiting [tense confusion] for the goods painful [awkward], and we are really sorry and apologies [parts of speech confusion] for it.
However, the goods arrived safely, which may at least help [whom?].
As this time it is our mistake, it cannot help even if we have corresponding feedback [awkward, unclear].
We are really apologies [awkward] for it.

If you are using electronics such as a cardiac pacemaker, there is a risk of malfunction, so please don't use it.

Please contact [article missing] doctor when using it.

元の翻訳
- T Shirt (S/M/L/XL) 3100yen each (including tax)
- happy new year panda netsuki 2015 1000yen (including tax)

★「We Love AAA exhibition」original goods★
- T Shirt (S/M/L) 3292yen each
- Sweat(Kid size) 3909yen
- Sweat(Adult size) 5657yen
- WeLove e~panda memorial doll 3086yen

修正後
- T Shirt (S/M/L/XL) 3100yen each (including tax)
- happy new year panda netsuke2015 1000yen (including tax)

★"We Love AAA exhibition" original goods★
- T Shirt (S/M/L) 3292yen each
- Sweatshirt (Kid size) 3909yen
- Sweatshirt (Adult size) 5657yen
- WeLove e~panda memorial doll 3086yen

元の翻訳
Long time no see.
How are you?

In fact, I think you have already heard about that, I will quit my job on 7th November. And I will start to do what I want.

After quitting my job, I will return back to Kyoto and get off to a good start. Of course, I will still play music with SHUN. Although Kyoto maybe a bit faraway from OKinawa, just come and have fun together!

Until now, we had a lot of precious memories. Many thanks!! Hope SHUN can enjoy you life in Okinawa.

修正後
Long time no see.
How are you?

In fact, I think you have already heard about that, I will quit my job on 7th November. And I will start to do what I want.

After quitting my job, I will return back to Kyoto and get off to a good start. Of course, I will still want to play music with SHUN. Although Kyoto is maybe a bit faraway from OKinawa, just come and have fun together!

Until now, we had a lot of precious memories. Many thanks!! Hope SHUN can enjoy your life in Okinawa.