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元の翻訳
Once again, this is Yamada from A, Limited Company.
Thank you very much for your inquiry to our products.

The unit price of A is $16.5, minimum order is 30 pieces per lot.
The delivery fee may change according to quantities, so please let us know your order quantity, then we can check the delivery fee.
We will ship the goods directly from Japan within 2 to 3 business days after we check your payment.
We are going to send them by UPS, after the delivery, it will arrive approximately 5 to 7 days if there isn't any problem with costoms.
Please note, the customs duty is at your cost.
You can pay by PAYPAL or if you are an American company, ACH(Automated Clearing House) or direct remittance are also acceptable.

修正後
Once again, this is Yamada from A, Limited Company.
Thank you very much for your inquiry to our products.

The unit price of A is $16.5, minimum order is 30 pieces per lot.
The delivery fee may change according to quantities, so please let us know your order quantity, then we can check the delivery fee.
We will ship the goods directly from Japan within 2 to 3 business days after we confirm your payment.
We are going to send them by UPS, after the dispatching, they will arrive in approximately 5 to 7 days if there are not any problems with costoms.
Please note, the customs duty is at your cost.
You can pay by PAYPAL or if you are an American company, ACH(Automated Clearing House) or direct remittance are also acceptable.

元の翻訳
We would　like　you　to　ship　this　items　as　soon　as　possible.　The　manufacturer　accepted　to　give　us　discounted price if we place an order quantity more than a hundred.
I choose the items and place an order from the catalog.
We are allowed to sell the size XL in discounted price from the executive.
We are considering to sell the items for Spring and Summer, so please let us know your shipping schedule.
After we check the delivery date, we would like to confirm our order if there isn't any problems.
Please let us now the delivery date since we have to extend a period of use of the warehouse.

修正後
We would　like　you　to　ship　this　items　as　soon　as　possible.　The　manufacturer　accepted　to　give　us　discounted price if we place an order quantity more than a hundred.
I choose the items and place an order from the catalog.
We are allowed to sell the size XL in discounted price from the executive.
We are considering to sell the items for Spring and Summer, so please let us know your shipping schedule.
After we check the delivery date, we would like to confirm our order if there are not any problems.
Please let us now the delivery date since we have to extend a period of use of the warehouse.

元の翻訳
I cancelled this order, but I received delivery.
After I cancelled, the order was delivered.
I want to return the goods.
Can I return it without paying shipping costs, can't I?
I need to know how to return the goods and how to receive refund.
The web site of this brand says that they accept return goods within 30 days after the delivery.
Therefore, I can return the goods without any problem.
Why can I not return the goods?
Can I return if I pay the delivery fee ?
I need your reply as soon as possible.

修正後
I cancelled this order, but I received delivery.
After I had cancelled, the order was delivered.
I want to return the goods.
Can I return it without paying shipping cost, can't I?
I need to know how to return the goods and how to receive refund.
The web site of this brand says that they accept return goods within 30 days after the delivery.
Therefore, I can return the goods without any problem.
Why can I not return the goods?
Can I return if I pay the delivery fee ?
I need your reply as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
御社のバイヤーの内の1社から最近返品依頼を受けられた旨、承っております。幸い当社の合理化した返送プロセスにより、以前に比べ返送手続きが容易で効率的になりました。

修正後
御社のバイヤーの内の1社から最近返品依頼を受けられた旨、承っております。幸い当社の合理化された返送プロセスにより、以前に比べ返送手続きが容易で効率的になりました。

元の翻訳
The razor you purchased is authentic for sure.

The brand name of Cross Arrow came from SUZUKI founded in 1930s.
The two arrows originated from the family emblem of the founder Suzuki.

Therefore, the razor you purchased has excellent value.

Actually, there is Cross Arrow made in China, but it imitated Japanese brand.

Under normal circumstances, it worth more than $1000, however some customer may think this is a Chinese product, so I sold it as bargain-basement without profit.

If you do not like it, you can return.

修正後
The razor you purchased is authentic for sure.

The brand name of Cross Arrow came from SUZUKI founded in the 1930s.
The two arrows originated from the family emblem of the founder Suzuki.

Therefore, the razor you purchased has excellent value.

Actually, there is Cross Arrow made in China, but it imitated Japanese brand.

Under normal circumstances, it worth more than $1000, however some customer may think this is a Chinese product, so I sold it as bargain-basement without profit.

If you do not like it, you can return.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for sending photos.
We took contact with XX earlier, XX decided to replace YY to a new one.
We have asked XX to deliver the new one to your address on Day, Month. When you receive that, please exchange YY for the new one.
We are sorry to trouble you, but please return the goods by Day, Month to our address with tracking number.
Of course we will refund the shipping cost through PayPal as long as you send us the receipt.
Our address is as follows.
Again, we apologize for the inconvenience, but appreciate your kind understanding.

修正後
Thank you very much for sending the photos.
We contacted XX earlier, and XX decided to replace YY with a new one.
We asked XX to deliver the new one to your address on Day, Month. When you receive that, please exchange YY for the new one [illogical: see the following sentence]
We are sorry to trouble you, but please return the goods by Day, Month to our address with a tracking number.
Of course we will refund the shipping cost through PayPal as long as you send us the receipt.
Our address is as follows.
Again, we apologize for the inconvenience, but appreciate your kind understanding.