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Kayoko Kimata (rose29tei) — もらったレビュー

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10年以上前
Kanagawa Ken
英語 日本語 (ネイティブ)

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jaysa66 この翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語
2013/11/04 18:13:04

元の翻訳
We would like to start make-a-face game as one of our attractions from now.
As our rule, all of you will be divided into three groups. One representative in each group will participate in a game.
Please divide into each group. (They are in grouping)
Please select a representative person. (They are choosing a representative person).
If you decide a representative person, we would like that person go to on stage.
(A representative person is going on a stage)

修正後
We would like to start a "make-a-face" game as one of our attractions from now.
As our rule, all of you will be divided into three groups. One representative in each group will participate in the game.
Please divide into the three groups. (They are in grouping)
Please select a representative person. (They are choosing a representative person).
If you decide a representative person, we would like that person to go up to the stage.
(The representative person is going up to the stage)