Robert Baranowski (robbaran) — もらったレビュー

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Social media, through its structure, has made it easier for word of mouth to break out and for information to spread. Also, with concrete behavior such as "likes" (e.g. on facebook), the effect has been to promote more feelings of loyalty to a brand or goods and services.

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Social media, through its structure, has made it easier for word of mouth to break out and for information to spread. Also, with concrete behavior such as "likes" (e.g. on Facebook), the effect has been to promote more feelings of loyalty to a brand or goods and services.

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My favorite relative is my uncle on my mother's side. My uncle lost his father to an atomic bomb when he was little, and is a wise man who had to live with his mother and siblings. After graduating from junior college, while working as a company employee, he took and passed the exam to become a certified public accountant. What I like about my uncle is that he is gentle and kind to others. One thing he said remains in my mind even now: "There are hardships in life, but if, at the end, you can say that it was a good life, that is all you need." I would like to live my life so that I can think it was good at the end, despite the tough times.

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My favorite relative is my uncle on my mother's side. My uncle lost his father to the atomic bomb when he was little, and is a wise man who had to live with his mother and siblings. After graduating from junior college, while working as a company employee, he took and passed the exam to become a certified public accountant. What I like about my uncle is that he is gentle and kind to others. One thing he said remains in my mind even now: "There are hardships in life, but if, at the end, you can say that it was a good life, that is all you need." I would like to live my life so that I can think it was good at the end, despite the tough times.

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The Japan Management Association is holding a seminar on [Increasing PB/OEM Product Sales and Cultivating Markets] on September 13 at the JSPMI (Japan Society for the Promotion of Machine Industry) building (in Tokyo's Harbor Ward). The seminar is aimed at packaging and printing businesses and manufacturers of foodstuffs, daily necessities, beauty/healthcare products etc..
The Japan Management Association is sponsoring a specialized exhibit on PB/OEM development called [International PB/OEM Development]. It will explain in simple terms the proposal and development of products that will meet and exceed buyers' expectations, introduce real examples of buyers' motivations, and the [How-to-Subcontract Method] that buyers want clients to know.

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On September 13, the Japan Management Association is holding a seminar on "Increasing PB/OEM Product Sales and Cultivating Markets" at the Japan Society for the Promotion of Machine Industry (JSPMI) building (in Tokyo's Harbor Ward). The seminar is aimed at packaging and printing businesses and manufacturers of food, daily necessities, beauty/healthcare products, etc.↵

The Japan Management Association is sponsoring a specialized exhibit on PB/OEM development, called "International PB/OEM Development." It will explain in simple terms the proposal and development of products that meet and exceed buyers' expectations, introduce real examples of buyers' motivations, and the subcontracting method that buyers want clients to know.

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Implementing Effective Event Planning through a MICE Expert's Point of View

A feature titled "How to build a 'place' that strengthens a business" in the general monthly September issue took up the topics of in-house training, anniversary events, intra-company events, and MICE.
In the article, our own [Exhibition and MICE Magazine] editor Tanaka was interviewed.
He explained how to apply the MICE viewpoint and event-planning know-how to invigorate business more effectively through internal company functions.

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Implementing Effective Event Planning through a MICE Expert's Point of View

A feature titled "How to build a 'place' that strengthens a business" in the general monthly September issue took up the topics of in-house training, anniversary events, intra-company events, and MICE.
In the article, our own [Exhibition and MICE Magazine] editor Tanaka was interviewed.
He explained how to apply the MICE viewpoint and event-planning know-how to invigorate business more effectively through internal company functions. He also discussed cost reduction and ROI methods.

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I report on the progress of your request for an item search.

After our correrspondence, I asked several shops that deal in the item to confirm whether they have it in stock. But, all of the shops that replied that they had it in stock are shops from which you cannot likely buy a legitimate article.

The auction price is currently $1024USD without a tag.

I will search for the same item within your budget, but please let me know if you have any more items you would like to me to find, as I will look for them at the same time.

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I am reporting on the progress of your item search request.

After our correspondence, I tried contacting several shops that deal in the item to confirm their stock. However, all of the shops that replied that they had stock are shops from which you likely cannot buy a legitimate article.

The auction price is currently $1024USD without a product tag.

I will keep searching for the same item within your budget, but please let me know if you have any more items you would like to me to find, as I will look for them at the same time.

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When you register your lessons at T7, your lessons can appear on the results page of a route or station search.
What's more, this function isn't just for station searches, but also works with the notification email.
When you register lessons at T7, T7 automatically determines a station and notifies the students looking for lessons in that neighborhood through direct mail. With your registration on T7, you can advertise your lessons on many pages for free.

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When you register your lessons at T7, your lessons will appear on the results page of a route or station search.
Furthermore, this function isn't just a station lesson search function, but also supports the lesson notification email.
When you register lessons at T7, T7 automatically determines a station and notifies the students looking for lessons in that neighborhood through direct mail. With your registration on T7, you can advertise your lessons on many pages for free.

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Lesson Search from Map Function has been added in T7.

When you register lessons with T7, your lessons are displayed on a map, allowing you to advertise lessons to even more students.
You can publish information about lessons for which you want to recruit for free on T7, and accept reservations from students.
There is absolutely no usage fee. You can register lessons that are taking new students anytime.

Well, let's try to register some lessons!

Those who do not wish to receive email from T7, please follow the link below.

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The Lesson Search function from the Map has been added in T7.

When you register lessons with T7, your lessons are displayed on a map, allowing you to advertise lessons to even more students.
You can publish information about lessons, where you want to take in students, for free on T7, and accept reservations from students.
There is absolutely no usage fee. You can register lessons that are taking in new students anytime.

Well, let's try to register some lessons!

Those who do not wish to receive email from T7, please follow the link below.