Nicchi (nicchi) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
125-0041であなたに電話しましたが、応答がありませんでした。

まず始めに、バイヤーへの返金について、前回説明した内容を修正します。

バイヤーが返品と返金を希望した場合に限り、返金するまえに、まずは品物を受け取ってください。
今回はバイヤーが品物を受け取っていないにも関わらず、返金を希望しています。この場合、バイヤー側には問題はないとして
返金するようにしたほうがよいでしょう。
A-Zクレームに書き込まれるのを防ぐためです。

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125-0041であなたに電話しましたが、応答がありませんでした。

まず始めに、バイヤーへの返金について、前回説明した内容を修正します。

バイヤーが返品と返金を希望した場合に限り、まず品物を受け取ってから返金してください。
今回はバイヤーが品物を受け取っておらず、返金を希望しています。この場合、バイヤー側には問題はないとして
返金するようにしたほうがよいでしょう。
バイヤーがA-Zクレームを申し立てるのを防ぐためです。

元の翻訳
I received a negative rating from my buyer. For me it seems a one-sided claim which says this person has not received the order yet even if scheduled delivery date is from February 20 to March 13.
Is it possible to delete this rating? The package has already arrived in the US.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I received a negative rating from my buyer. For me it seems a one-sided complaint which says this person has not received the order yet even if scheduled delivery date is from February 20 to March 13.
Is it possible to delete this rating? The package has already arrived in the US.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
How to use free Wi-Fi
・Download will be requested when you start application first, install it as instructed.
(In case you cancel, you can do it again using menu on the application.)
・Switch on the connection set-up of the smart phone
・Select 'JSTO_WiFi' in the list of WiFi view
・Tap the button of Wifi shown on the right side, higher part on the top page of the application.
If you connect successfully, the button on the top page will turn red, then you can use free internet connection.

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How to use free Wi-Fi
・Download will be requested when you start application first, install it as instructed.
(In case you cancel, you can do it again using a menu on the application.)
・Switch on the connection set-up of the smart phone
・Select 'JSTO_WiFi' in the list of WiFi view
・Tap the button of Wifi shown on the right side, higher part on the top page of the application.
If you connect successfully, the button on the top page will turn red, then you can use the free internet connection.

元の翻訳
Five associations have organized ↵
new-year celebration which held at Gakushi-kaikan, Chiyoda-ku, Tokyo on January 26.

Junji Narita, Chairman and director of Japan Association for the Promotion of Creative Events （JACE) made a strong speech as follows. 'Tokyo Olympic within five year, unforgettable Tohoku reconstruction, region revival of Abe ministry, regarding tourism, foreign travelers were more than 13 million last year, event become more active. All of us involved will collaborate each other'.

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Five associations organized a new-year celebration held at Gakushi-kaikan, Chiyoda-ku, Tokyo on January 26.

Junji Narita, Chairman and director of Japan Association for the Promotion of Creative Events （JACE) made a strong speech as follows: 'Tokyo Olympics in five years, unforgettable Tohoku reconstruction, region revival of Abe ministry, regarding tourism, foreign travelers were more than 13 million last year, events become more active. All of us involved will collaborate each other'.

元の翻訳
Please re-product 53 pieces.
Shipping cost for this should be on your side as we are not responsible for it.
I have received ○○○emblems on 15 January,
53 mistakes were found in them, rest I am not satisfied either.
If I don't use the rest I have too little emblem to use.
Please instruct them to work with care.

Regarding these 53 pieces, please make sure that work with the utmost care.

I have already paid on 29th but payment is suspended for this order.

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Please re-product [parts of speech confusion: product is a noun] 53 pieces.
Shipping cost for this should be on your side as we are not responsible for it [different from the original: it doesn't say anything about responsibility].
I received ○○○emblems on 15 January,
53 mistakes [usage] were found in them, [comma splice] rest [inverted word order: awkward] I am not satisfied with either.
If I don't use the rest I have too little [usage] emblems [countable noun] to use.
Please instruct them to work with care.

Regarding these 53 pieces, please make sure that work with the utmost care.

I paid on the 29th but payment is suspended for this order.

元の翻訳
It can't be helped shipping delay but as you promised before, please dispatch today.
After dispatching, please notify me the tracking number.

If you use DHL, it may take about 2 weeks from London to Japan but if there were delay↵
caused by customs, it would take longer.

As I take a trip from 20th February, the package should be arrived before 20th February, if there were delay of the shipment, I can not receive my package so please make sure that you dispatch today.

I appreciate your cooperation.

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It can't be helped that shipping has been delayed, but as you promised before, please dispatch my order today.
After dispatching it, please notify me of the tracking number.

If you use DHL, it takes about 2 weeks from London to Japan, but it may take longer if there is a delay caused by customs.

As I leave on a trip on February 20, if the package doesn't arrive before that, I may not able to receive it. So please make sure that you dispatch it today.

I appreciate your cooperation.