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The rice ”Uonuma Koshihikari" is surprisingly distinct in its taste and texture from the ordinary rice you buy from Wall-Mart.
"Nishiki-goi" are carps that are also called "Swimming Gems"
"Nihon-syu", or Sake that matured in deep snow.
"Hanabi-Taikai (Firework Festivals)" that launch 48-inch gunpowder-balls to the sky.
"Matsunoyama-Onsen" is counted as one of three most famous medicinal hot-springs in Japan.
We are from Niigata Prefecture in japan with these various attractions.
We can ship you many products that can only be found in Japan with careful wrappings.
The fact that you have ordered these products all the way from Japan, will certainly makes you proud too!

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The rice brand ”Uonuma Koshihikari" is incomparably distinct in its taste and texture from the ordinary rice you buy from Wall-Mart.
"Nishiki-goi" are carps referenced as "Swimming Gems".
"Nihon-syu", or Sake are matured in deep snow.
"Hanabi-Taikai (Firework Festivals)" launch 48-inch gunpowder-balls to the sky.
"Matsunoyama-Onsen" is counted as one of three most famous medicinal hot-springs in Japan.
We are from the Niigata Prefecture in Japan which embraces these fascinations.
We can ship you many products that can only be found in Japan packaged with care.
The fact that you have ordered these products all the way from Japan will certainly be something to be proud of!

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"TOHOSHINKI" means "Eastern(TOHO) gods(SHIN) is getting up(KI)", and they were named as a group that can expand their name from across Asia to the world.
As soon as they debut in Korea in Februay 2004, the five members of TOHOSHINKI, YUNHO, CHANGMIN, JEJUNG, JUNSU, YUCHUN immediately received greatest support as a teenage chorus group.

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"TOHOSHINKI" means "Eastern(TOHO) god(SHIN) arises(KI)", and they were named as a group that can expand their name from across Asia to the world.
Soon after their debut in Korea in Februay 2004, the five members of TOHOSHINKI, YUNHO, CHANGMIN, JEJUNG, JUNSU, and YUCHUN immediately collected great popularity as a teenage chorus group.

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The last request I did was asking for sending an e-mail

The other day I cancelled my account and the money was overdue.
I did my best to offer good things to the customers, but because of the frozen account there was a fund shortage.
It looks that I have to accept things according to the Japanese legal regulation.

I eagerly hope that you can stop the money freezing.
I have a lot of selling money. And if next time the payment doesn’t occur, I’ll have to liquidate the company.

I think it’s an exception of an exception. So I’m asking you to send an e-mail at any costs.

Kind regards.

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This is regarding the last request I sent by e-mail.

The other day my account was cancelled, and am now unable to pay for overdue money.
I did my best to offer good things to the customers, but because of the frozen account there was a fund shortage.
It looks that I have to accept things according to the Japanese legal regulation.

I eagerly hope that you can stop the money freezing.
I have a lot of selling money. And if the payment doesn’t occur next time, I’ll have to liquidate my company.

I understand this will be a huge exception you must make. This was an e-mail I had to send at any cost.

Kind regards.

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I bought a house. I am leaving Tokyo where I was raised and moving to live in Yokohama. It is a good environment full of greens. The photo is the forest park near the new house.

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I purchased a house. I am leaving Tokyo where I was raised and moving to live in Yokohama. It is a good environment full with nature. The photo is of the forest park near our new house.

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英0340
返品理由：もう必要ではない/もう欲しくない
購入者のコメント：配送に時間とお金がかかりすぎる

英2770
私が注文した物は、1月25日までに届けられると言われました。もう2月13日なのに、まだ届きません。いつ来ると思っていればよいのでしょうか？

イタリ
そうすると、これは犬の像に含まれていた説明ですよね。

加えて、再び見つかった部分的な税金のための追加の関税を支払った後であなたに連絡をとるかわりに、あなたの輸送方針を見たところ、価格が課税されないと（イタリアでは控除率は20,00ユーロ/25,00ドル/2500円）配送の前に報告することはよくないようでしょうか。
EUの外から持ち込まれる商品への、イタリアにおける現在の関税が、申告された価格の約25%に達するという事実に、あなたが気付いているかどうか、私にはわかりません。

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英0340
返品理由：もう必要ではない/もう欲しくない
購入者のコメント：配送に時間とお金がかかりすぎる

英2770
私が注文した物は、1月25日までに届けられると言われました。もう2月13日なのに、まだ届きません。いつ来ると思っていればよいのでしょうか？

イタリ
そうすると、これは犬の像が含まれているバージョンですよね。

加えて、再び見つかった部分的な税金のための追加の関税を支払った後であなたに連絡をとるかわりに、あなたの輸送方針を見たところ、価格が課税されないと（イタリアでは控除率は20,00ユーロ/25,00ドル/2500円）配送の前に報告することはよくないようでしょうか。
EUの外から持ち込まれる商品への、イタリアにおける現在の関税が、申告された価格の約25%に達するという事実に、あなたが気付いているかどうか、私にはわかりません。

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The custom duty check is unfair and very wired system.
I can’t make a shipment without writing the contents of the package and price in detail, so it is difficult for me to ship the item stating only “gift”.
I stated a gift on the check of the document for the delivery, not a commercial item, though.

Do you send me the comic in French? Then I want ○!
I like both the picture and story by the author because they’re cute.
Though I’ve read the comic in English, but never read in French.

For the strategy for the customhouse, I will state the price of the retailed price of ◇ on the invoice, not the bid price.
Be sure to understand that the custom duty should be paid by the buyer. ↵

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The customs checking system is such an unfair and weird system.
I can’t make a shipment without writing the contents of the package and price in detail, so it is difficult for me to ship the item by only stating it as a “gift”.
On the other hand, I always send check documents as gifts instead of as a commercial item.

Are you going to send me a French comic book? Then I want ○!
I like both the picture and story by the author because they’re cute.
Though I’ve read English comics before, I've never read French ones in the past.

To avoid problems with customs, I will state the retail price of the ◇ on the invoice, not the bid price.
Please understand this because custom fees must be paid by the buyer.

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How to use the fountain pen
When you use a fountain pen after purchase, fill the pen with the special ink. When you insert the cartridge for the first time, remove the pile and direct the nib downward, slowly turn it right and insert the cartridge in depth until the stainless ball at the edge falls into the ink.
From the next time, direct the nib upward and insert it. As for the cartridge, use the platinum cartridge ink SPSQ-400 ( 10 per one box ) or SPN-100A ( 2 per one box).↵

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How to use the fountain pen
Upon use of the fountain pen after purchase, enter the attached ink to the pen. When you insert the cartridge for the first time, remove the barrel and direct the nib downward, slowly turn the ink cartridge to the right and insert deeply until the stainless ball at the edge falls into the ink. Wait until the ink infiltrates and you can write in a smooth fashion.
From the next time, direct the nib upward and insert it. As for the cartridge, use the platinum cartridge ink SPSQ-400 ( 10 per one box ) or SPN-100A ( 2 per one box).

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ph35308

▼Was also used as a pet name by gold medallist Ryoko Tani.
Quote: "Just call me Yawara-chan." (when asked by a reporter if it was alright not to address her by her real name)

Bamboo Blade [Subject: Kendo]

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ph35308

▼Was also used as a nickname by gold medallist Ryoko Tani.
Quote: "Just call me Yawara-chan." (when asked by a reporter if it was alright not being addressed by her real name)

Bamboo Blade [Subject: Kendo]

元の翻訳
Registered American Express Card for payment method.
But, 30%OFF is not reflected.
Please clarify.
Please adjust the discount.

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I registered the American Express Card for the payment method.
However, the 30% discount is not reflected.
Please clarify the reason for this.
Please adjust the discount.

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What did "specific packages" indicate?
I did not understand what you meant.
I was just about to inquire with you as the shipping was so delayed.

I have checked what was interrupting export to find nothing that would be against the law.

Could it be the "military strap", which is the band of the watch? Just in case, I attach the invoice for your reference.

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What did "specific packages" indicate?
I do not understand what you mean by that.
I was just about to inquire with you as the shipping was so delayed.

I have checked what was interrupting export to find nothing that would be against the law.

Could it be the "military strap", which is the band of the watch? ↵
I have attached the invoice for your reference; please review.

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- By adding music and narration, we can add various way of joining and expressions. It led the Live Festival that we could collaborate with hip-hop artists, rakugo peformers, video makers and so on, by ad-lib recording and editing. In the next time, the way of making will be added into our work, and also doing at mikkedojo's party, art center or sombody's living room.
- This program is inspired by looking again to my hometown.

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- By adding music and narration, we can add variety in the way of joining and expressing ourselves. This led to the Live Festival as we were able to collaborate with hip-hop artists, rakugo peformers, video makers and so on, through ad-lib recording and editing. In our upcoming projects, we will incorporate this into our work, and also use it at mikkedojo's party, art center or sombody's living room in Madrid.
- This program was inspired through looking back to my hometown.