Michaela (michaela88) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I apologize for the miscommunication due to my limited English command. What I wanted to say is that, if you ship two orders no. 3246794 and no. 3249912 together, they are likely to be stopped by Japanese customs due to the product property of Nightvision, so I was asking you to ship the orders separately on diffetent dates. Since you told me that the order no. 3246794 was already shipped on May 27, can you please ship the order no. 3249912 on June 2? Thank you in advance for consideration.

修正後
I apologize for the miscommunication due to my limited English ability. What I wanted to say is that, if you ship two orders no. 3246794 and no. 3249912 together, they are likely to be stopped by Japanese customs due to the nature of the product Nightvision, so I was asking you to ship the orders separately on diffetent dates. Since you told me that the order no. 3246794 was already shipped on May 27, can you please ship the order no. 3249912 on June 2? Thank you in advance for your consideration.

元の翻訳
I called you earlier but seems like you were busy.

In my previous email, I have requested for price negotiation with you. As for my part I knew it'd be rude asking such a favour to an amazing craftman like you.
Please accept my sincere apologies if I have ever offended you on this.
Despite the fact we have come thus far having made such a great business relationship with you, ending it without going nowhere is truly reluctant to us.
Would you please give us a chance to discuss with you on this matter?
If nothing else, please email us at least.
I will follow your direction accordingly.

修正後
I called you earlier but seems like you were busy.

In my previous email, I had requested a price negotiation with you. As for my part, I knew it'd be rude asking such a favour of an amazing craftman like you.
Please accept my sincerest apologies if I have offended you.
Especially since we have come to build such a great business relationship with you, it is not our intention to discontinue it this way.
Would you please give us a chance to discuss with you on this matter?
If nothing else, please email us at least.
I will follow your direction accordingly.