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I am looking for women's watch with a diver's extension.↵
Please let me know the model number of those with a diver's adjuster.

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I am looking for a women's watch with a diver adjuster mechanism.↵
If there are any models with the diver adjuster mechanism, please let me know the model number.

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Is it true that if I purchase 10 items at once, the total price is discounted to $340? $340 for 10 items? Not $680?

If I purchase 10 items, are they packaged divided into two boxes (5 items for each) or just in one box? I prefer to get the items divided into two boxes. Could you do that for me?

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Is it true that if I purchase 10 items at once, the total price is discounted to $340? $340 for 10 items? Not $680?

If I purchase 10 items, are they packaged divided into two boxes (5 items for each) or 10 items all in one box? I prefer to get the items divided into two boxes of 5 items each. Could you do that for me?

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In preparation for Christmas, I am planning to order 5 additional 「WRAP」's next week. However, because the yen is increasingly become weaker compared to the US dollar, the cost to purchase is going up. I would like to blame the high pricing in Japan, however, compared to the US, Japan's economy isn't doing very well so it is difficult to blame the pricing. Therefore, I wanted to ask if you could perhaps provide me a discount? Please consider this positively, I would like to continue doing business with you in the future. Thank you very much.

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In preparation for Christmas, I am planning to order 5 additional "WRAP"s next week. However, because the yen is increasingly become weaker compared to the US dollar, the cost to purchase is going up. I would like to change the payment condition to the retail cost in Japan, however, compared to the US, Japan's economy isn't doing very well so it is difficult to shift to the retail cost. Therefore, I wanted to ask if you could perhaps provide me a discount? Please consider this positively, I would like to continue doing business with you in the future. Thank you very much.

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I think I ordered Black Size XS of HOODIE WITH PRINT MFMK, but if I ordered Gray Size, I would like to cancel it and I would like to change the gray one for the black one.
Please confirm the color. Thank you for your kindness.

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I think I ordered Black Size XS of HOODIE WITH PRINT MFMK, but if I ordered it in Gray, I would like to cancel the order or I would like to change the order for a black one.
Please confirm the color.

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The exchange product has been delivered.
However, the size was wrong.
The tag was XS size but the actual item was S size.

I want to have the item sooner.
I hope you could deliver the item now.

1. I make a new purchase for the same item.
The product I have in hand will be returned, and please refund to me upon receiving the item.

2. If refund is not possible, please send me the correct item upon receiving the returned item.

I appreciate the first choice as I hope you could deliver the product sooner.
I look forward to receiving your reply.

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The exchange product has been received.
However, the size was wrong.
The tag was XS size but the actual item was S size.

I want to have the item sooner.
I hope you could deliver the item now.

1. I make a new purchase for the same item.
The product I have in hand will be returned, and please refund to me upon receiving the item.

2. If refund is not possible, please send me the correct item upon receiving the returned item.

I appreciate the first choice as I hope you could deliver the product sooner.
I look forward to receiving your reply.

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I order 50,000 pieces of 2 milliliters vial bottle.
Please tell me how to arrange them and when you are going to deliver them.

Could you support sending them to Japan?
If you can, I would like to know the approximate shipping charge.

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I am ordering 50,000 pieces of 2 milliliters vial bottle.
Please tell me how to arrange for them and when you are going to deliver them.

Could you support sending them to Japan?
If you can, I would like to know the approximate shipping charge.

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This is a very popular photo collection of a French actress, from when she was age 15, during the summer of 1982.

Ghibli Image Board Collection Original Work

It is a portfolio from when before Miyazaki Hayao began animation, when he was still developing his ideas. A very different story from the animation is being told.

Hello.

I'm so sorry my response was so late. On September 9th, through the O-Desk, I have sent an email to you all but I am not sure if you had noticed.

You may believe that the amount of work we are displaying is a bit small, however, this is so there is no mistakes in the exhibit.

I will be waiting for your response.

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This is a very popular photo collection of a French actress, from when she was age 15, during the summer of 1982.

Ghibli Image Board Collection Original Work

It is a portfolio from when before Miyazaki Hayao began animation, when he was still developing his ideas. A very different story from the animation is being told.

Hello.

I'm so sorry my response was so late. On September 29th, through the O-Desk, I have sent an email to you all but I am not sure if you had noticed.

You may believe that the amount of work we are displaying is a bit small, however, this is so there is no mistakes in the exhibit.

I will be waiting for your response.

元の翻訳
As you say, each of the four seasons has the positive charcteristics of its own.
I would probably favor the Spring and the Fall because I personally like the weather to be neither overly hot or cold.
I want to live on the pacific island for that it is where I have never been. I somehow believe that people world live longer by living in the South rather than the North.

Yes, you should really try them.
There are places that serve the highballs with a variety of flavor to choose from such as the plum and the green apple flavor, though you might like the standard taste for this drink the best.

You have that many siblings!?
I wish I had more brothers myself.

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As you say, each of the four seasons has the positive characteristics of its own.
I would probably favor Spring and Fall because I personally like the weather to be neither overly hot or cold.
I want to live on the pacific island for that it is where I have never been. I somehow believe that people would live longer by living in the South rather than the North.

Yes, you should really try them.
There are places that serve the highballs with a variety of flavors to choose from such as the plum and the green apple flavor, though you might like the standard taste for this drink the best.

You have that many siblings!?
I wish I had more brothers myself.

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Thank you for your reply.

I'll ansewer your inquieries.

I originally woked as a distrubuter of the watchs and sold them many foreigners who often came to buy them.

That is one of the reasons for using amazon to sell items overseas.

The monthly sales target is 1-1.5 million yen.
In Japan, I sell the items in the Yahoo shop and the Yahoo Auction.

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Thank you for your reply.

I'll answer your inquiries.

I originally worked as a distributor of the watches and sold them to many foreigners who often came to buy them.

That is one of the reasons for using amazon to sell items overseas.

The monthly sales target is 1-1.5 million yen.
In Japan, I sell the items in the Yahoo shop and the Yahoo Auction.

元の翻訳
I travelled Tokyo with the request of my friend who is transferred overseas for long term.
The weather was great and the feeling of whirling wind while sitting in the SKY HOP bus made me felt comfortable.
Although I live in Tokyo, but I've found a new Tokyo with the guide.
My mood turned better by travelling, shopping and having lunch.
A date makes me happy even it's with family.
We chose one from three course and we want to enjoy other courses next time!

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I traveled to Tokyo at the request of my friend who will be transferred overseas for long term.
The weather was great and the feeling of whirling wind while sitting in the SKY HOP bus felt comfortable.
Although I live in Tokyo, but I've found a new Tokyo with the guide.
My mood turned better by sightseeing, shopping and having lunch.
I think it would be enjoyable whether it is a date or it is with family.
We chose one from three courses today, but I want to enjoy other courses next time!

元の翻訳
①I have listened to this song too but it may has been the classic version so it sounded different. I haven't listened to the full version but i wonder if it's still available on YouTube?
②I haven't watched it until the end yet.
③She won't show any sign of fatigue in front of the children. She's always trying to make us feel comfortable while smiling herself.
④I m looking at pictures in which my children are smiling when I m tired or depressed. strangely it makes my tiredness dissappear and
⑤I have never seen it.
⑥I still working

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①I have listened to this song too but it may has been the classic version so it sounded different. I haven't listened to the full version but i wonder if it's still available on YouTube?
②I haven't watched it until the end yet.
③She won't show any sign of fatigue in front of the children. She's always trying to make us feel comfortable while smiling herself.
④I’m looking at pictures in which my children are smiling when I’m tired or depressed. strangely it makes my tiredness dissappear and
⑤I have never seen it.
⑥I am still working