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We have received your return request.
It will usually take around 3 to 10 days for arrival of the goods.
The date indicated in Amazon might be longer than usual just in case.
If you still want to return the goods, please contuct us again.
Meanwhile, we will refund you $23.56 which deducted $16.85 of the actual shipping charge.
When the goods arrives, please refuse to take it so that return charge won't be charged.

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We have received your return request.
It will regularly take around 3 to 10 days for arrival of the goods.
Amazon indicated the default date and it might be longer than usual just in case.
If you still want to return the goods, please contact us again.
Meanwhile, we will refund you $23.56 which is deducted $16.85 of the actual shipping charge.
When the goods arrives, please refuse to receive it so that you'll have no return charged.

元の翻訳
For me, it'll be perfect if we had another 1 hour to look around War Memorial. Further point, I enjoyed the tour fully.
You may think that JSA tour is dangerous because you need to sign a consent form, but basically it is safe and very rare tour in the sense that you can feel the history by going each place.
Every tour company is a same situation since in the area of JSA you are monitored by Korea military.
I wanted to defuse a risk of miss my tour bus and hated a tight schedule, If you also want to go out at night the day before the tour and wake up late next morning, you should definitely apply for the tour at KTB.

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For me, it would be perfect if we could have had another 1 hour to look around War Memorial. Further point, I enjoyed the tour fully.
You may think that JSA tour is dangerous because you need to sign a consent form, but basically it is safe and very rare tour in the sense that you can feel the history by going each place.
Every tour company is a same situation since in the area of JSA you are monitored by Korea military.
I wanted to defuse a risk of miss my tour bus and hated a tight schedule, If you also want to go out at night the day before the tour and wake up late next morning, you should definitely apply for the tour at KTB.

元の翻訳
<We enjoyed it !>

I joined the tour with my husband because he said that he wanted to join so badly !
As other tour member said, it was so good for us because we've watched the movie "JSA" before we joined the tour.
When we were at the place used as the stage of the movie, it was very exciting.
This tour is very good tour for people like us who are not interested in Korean cosmetics or shopping at high-end brands.

We recommend to watch the movie "JSA" before you join the tour, if you are thinking about joining.
It was almost like a tour around filming sites of the movie.

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<I am glad we participated!>

I joined the tour with my husband because he said that he definitely wanted to participate!
As the others said, it was so good for us because we've watched the movie "JSA" beforehand.
When we were at the place used as the stage of the movie, it was very exciting.
It is a very good tour for people who aren't interested in Korean cosmetics or shopping for brands.

We recommend you to watch the movie "JSA" beforehand, if you are going to join.
It was almost like a tour around the filming sites of the movie.

元の翻訳
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アマゾンから私の注文したZippo Antique Crest3/2BIBW-ACDRに対するフィードバックを残しませんかというメッセージが届きましたが、まだ注文した商品を受け取っていません。配送されてから32日もたっているので、注文した商品の追跡情報があれば配送状況を確認できるのですが。

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よろしくお願いします。

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ＡＭＥ4229
アマゾンから私の注文したZippo Antique Crest3/2BIBW-ACDRに対するフィードバックを残しませんかというメッセージが届きましたが、まだ注文した商品を受け取っていません。配送されてから32日もたっているので、注文した商品の追跡情報があれば配送状況を確認できるのですが。

ＩＧＩ3101
質問に対してご対応いただきありがとうございます。ご提案いただいたとおりにしてみて経過をご連絡します。その間にも荷物が届くことを期待しています。
よろしくお願いします。