LilacWonder (lilacwonder) — もらったレビュー

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Thanks for your advice on the bulletin board.
As far as the concern you have raised goes, while it would be a problem in English, it would not be much of an issue in Japanese.

I would appreciate it if you could take care of this. I apologize for my repeated requests.

The source has been partially modified to accommodate the Japanese language. Please see attached.
Please share with us the file where the English source has been modified in case you're having difficulties verifying the behavior.

I would appreciate your attention to this matter. I am very grateful, would like to give you a five-star feedback.

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Thanks for your advice on the bulletin board.
As far as the concern you have raised goes, while it would be a problem in English, it would not be much of an issue in Japanese.

I would appreciate it if you could take care of this. I apologize for my repeated requests.

The source has been partially modified to accommodate the Japanese language. Please see attached.
Please share with us the file where the English source has been modified in case you're having difficulties verifying the behavior.

I would appreciate your attention to this matter. I am very grateful and would like to give you a five-star feedback.

元の翻訳
Looking forward to receiving your reply. Very happy to do business with you.

We are interested in carrying X. A similar product, Gopro is fairly well known in Japan and is being sold with much success.

With its price advantage, we believe that X also has a good chance to succeed as well and would love to test the market by selling a few of them. Would you please let me know its price?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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Looking forward to receiving your reply. Very happy to do business with you.

We are interested in handling X. A similar product, Gopro is fairly well known in Japan and is being sold with much success.

With its price advantage, we believe that X also has a good chance to succeed as well and would love to test the market by selling a few of them. Would you please let me know its price?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
As you mentioned "A" is a product that is quite popular in Japan as well. We are glad to hear that you are satisfied with it.

Please feel free to contact us next time you are looking for a product. In case the product you wish to purchase is not available on Amazon, we will be sure to make it available so that you can purhcase it.
I would like to put up for sale an item which does not have a JAN code (a handmade product by a craftsman). Please advise on I can register the product.

What is the best way to increase our revenue by two or three fold within the next few months? Any advice as you review my postings?

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As you mentioned "A" is a product that is quite popular in Japan as well. We are glad to hear that you are satisfied with it.

Please feel free to contact us next time you are looking for a product. In case the product you wish to purchase is not available on Amazon, we will be sure to make it available so that you can purchase it.
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I would like to put up for sale an item which does not have a JAN code (a handmade product by a craftsman). Please advise on what should I do to register the product.

What is the best way to increase our revenue by two or three fold within the next few months? Any advice as you review my postings?

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We have reviewed your estimate. We are currently in the process of negotiating with other vendors as well. Would it be possible for you to offer at the same price by using PayPal for payment?

We are slightly concerned about the quality, too. It appears that the goods delivered are of poorer quality ever since the new person is in charge. We would appreciate it if you could improve on the quality.

Thanks in advance.

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We have reviewed your estimate. We are currently in the process of negotiating with other vendors as well. Would it be possible for you to offer at the same price by using PayPal for payment?

We are slightly concerned about the quality, too. It appears that the goods delivered are of poorer quality ever since the new person is in charge. We would appreciate it if you could improve on the quality.

We are looking forward to your reply.

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We have been informed by DHL Japan today that the package cannot clear the customs because the invoice is missing. Would you please email me the invoice of the order ID TC-00002005?

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We have been informed by DHL Japan today that the package cannot clear customs because the invoice is missing. Would you please email me the invoice of the order ID TC-00002005?