David Diaz (lapalomatokyo) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello.

We have received a bad review from a customer who has cancelled his/her order because we ran out of stock of the product that he/she wished to purchase.

We would like to sincerely apologize to the said customer for the trouble that the issue has caused.

We would like to contact the said customer that we will offer him/her money back and apologize if he/she will not pursue with giving us a bad review. Will this be a breach to the contract?

Please let us know if you have a better advice.
We are hoping for a prompt reply.

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Hello.

We have received a bad review from a customer who has cancelled his/her order because we ran out of stock of the product that he/she wished to purchase.

We would like to sincerely apologize to said customer for the trouble that the issue has caused.

We would like to contact said customer explaining that we will offer him/her money back and apologize if he/she will remove their bad review. Will this be a breach of the contract?

Please let us know if you have better advice.
We are hoping for a prompt reply.

元の翻訳
I will dispatch CPT tomorrow.
After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number.

My last order arrived, but I found that HDMI cable was not enclosed with A.
Please send it together with my order this time.

Payment is to be made on 29th with a credit card.

The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference.
Please refer to the place circled in blue.

The model number of B is RPMQ90, isn’t it?

I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct?

Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?

修正後
I will dispatch CPT tomorrow.
After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number.

My last order arrived, but I found that THE HDMI cable was not enclosed with A.
Please send it together with my order this time.

Payment is to be made on THE 29th with a credit card.

The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference.
Please refer to the place circled in blue.

The model number of B is RPMQ90--is THAT CORRECT?

I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct?

Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your question!!

I'm sorry, this item is only available in Japanese.

I'm sorry the shipment was delayed.

I'm shipping the item soon.

I'm shipping by EMS, which is the fastest way so that you can get it very soon after dispatch.

Please look forward to the item to reach you.

Thank you!!

修正後
Thank you very much for your question!!

I'm sorry, this item is only available in Japanese.

I'm sorry the shipment was delayed.

I'm shipping the item soon.

I'm shipping by EMS, which is the fastest way so that you can get it very soon after dispatch.

Please look forward to the item's arrival.

Thank you!!