Kushani Narangoda (kushani311) — 付けたレビュー

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I was called by xx.
For the one who dealing with this phone, I was told that they want to get in touch by e-mail.

We have a small bicycle shop in Japan and sell the bicycle parts.
We sell online too.

We would like to be stocked up for $3000 in a month.
And we plan to buy more than $7000 in month sooner.

How much the discount rate will be?
Because I attached you the list, could you please give me an estimation?

Could you please issue the invoice?

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I called xx.
And the person who answered the phone told me to contact through this e-mail.

We have a small bicycle shop in Japan and sell the bicycle parts.
We sell online too.

We would like to purchase about $3000 in a month.
And eventually we plan to purchase up to $7000 per month.

How much the discount rate will be?
I have attached a list herewith, please give me an estimation based on that.

Could you please issue the invoice?

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Sale time: 14:00 (planned)

[Goods]
· Muffler Towel ¥ 1,500 (tax included)
· Shoulder strap ¥ 1,000 (tax included)
· Date glasses ¥ 2,000 (tax included)
· Les Gale Bracelet ¥ 1,500 (tax included)
· Oda San's stickers ¥ 500 (tax included)
· Oda San's mascot strap ¥ 1,500 (tax included)
· 【TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE】♪ Cap♪ ¥ 2,900 (tax included)
· 【TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE】♪ button badge set¥ 1,000 (tax included)
· 【TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE】♪ Notes ¥ 500 (tax included)
· 【TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE】♪ Mug cup ¥ 1,000 (tax included)

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Sale time: 14:00 (planned)

[Goods]
· Muffler Towel ¥ 1,500 (tax included)
· Shoulder strap ¥ 1,000 (tax included)
· Date glasses ¥ 2,000 (tax included)
· Les Gale Bracelet ¥ 1,500 (tax included)
· Otasuke stickers ¥ 500 (tax included)
· Otasuke mascot strap ¥ 1,500 (tax included)
· 【TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE】♪ Cap♪ ¥ 2,900 (tax included)
· 【TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE】♪ button badge set¥ 1,000 (tax included)
· 【TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE】♪ Notes ¥ 500 (tax included)
· 【TOKYO GIRL'S STYLE】♪ Mug cup ¥ 1,000 (tax included)

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We are terribly sorry for the great deal of inconvenience we have caused your company and the buyer. I was not able to to maintain the 1%< unfulfilled order rate (ODR). I deeply apologize for this.
The problem's cause was the "Negative Feedback Rate" and "Filed A-to-Z Claim Rate" both fell below client expectations and they were not satisfied.
All of the orders from XX/XX up until now have been all completely processed.



This is the "Negative Feedback Rate" from the time of the implementation of my new selling plan.

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We are terribly sorry for the great deal of inconvenience we have caused your company and the buyer. I was not able to to maintain the 1%< unfulfilled order rate (ODR). I deeply apologize for this.
The cause of the problem is reduced level of satisfaction of buyers in the occurrence of Filed A-to-z Claim Rate and Negative Feedback Rate.
All of the orders from XX/XX up until now have been all completely processed.



This is the "Negative Feedback Rate" from the time of the implementation of my new selling plan.

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This order has been placed to L size already.
Please confirm the purchase order because it was changed by adding L size.
We want to add the orders for the following parts. Can you check stock? I hope it can be sent together with the goods to ship out next.
Please also let me know the approximate delivery time if those are out of stock.
I do not know the distinction of color of red and orange for the picture. Would you please prepare information of the color swatch of the material?

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This order has been placed to L size already.
Please confirm the purchase order because it was changed by adding L size.
We want to add the orders for the following items. Can you check stock? I hope it can be sent together with the goods that are due to be shipped out.
Please also let me know the approximate delivery time if those are out of stock.
I can not understand the distinction of color of red and orange for the picture. Would you please prepare information of the color swatch of the material?

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We study the Information Technology file to make a quality of life even better and support the telecommunication industries.
Wi-Sun that the next generation wireless communication standard with low power consumption.
Cognitive radio that select a better network route under any circumstances.
The M2M Cloud that communicate the data between machines automatically.
Big Data that analyse massive amounts of data immediately to bring the effective business and service to companies.↵

With our new ideas to bring those technologies into one of network and make good use of them, We aim at creating new businesses and developing the communication technologies.

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We are supporting the information and communication related research and industry to improve the lives of people.
Wi-Sun is a next generation wireless communication standard with low power consumption.
Cognitive communication selects a network path that is appropriate for the situation.
M2M cloud platform is capable of performing automatic information exchange between machines.
Big data that provides useful businesses and services to the society by analyzing diverse and high-capacity data immediately.
As a new attempt, by integrating and utilizing these technologies in a single network, we are aiming at the creation of new industries and development of information and communication technology.

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ph55501

Which girl do you want to bump? There is the girl running with a pain de mie in her mouth. There are 10 girls with which we can be acquainted by chance.

We don't know since when, but the bread began to appear on the breakfast, and it became typical food in the morning in Japan. In the world of anime, in the morning a girl running to school for not being late with a pain de mie in her mouth became typical scene. We introduce this time the beautiful girls with a pain de mie in their mouth. Which girl do you want to bump?

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ph55501

Which girl do you want to bump into? There is a girl running with a bread in her mouth. There are 10 girls with which we can be acquainted by chance.

Somewhere down the line, bread began to appear in the breakfast and today it has become a typical item for breakfast in Japan. A girl running to school in the morning with a bread in her mouth to avoid being late, became a typical scene in the world of Anime. This time we introduce such beautiful girls with pain de mie in their mouths. So, which girl do you want to bump into?

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例：出品者パフォーマンスのこの通知は、プロモーション版のメディアを販売している（Amazon.deでは禁止されています）ことが理由であなたのアカウントが停止または閉鎖されたことを意味します。商品リストと商品の仕入れ過程を見直してください。仕入れ業者が商品の中にプロモーション用ＣＤを含めていることに気づくでしょう。あなたは、それらの商品をリストから直ちに削除し、今後定期的にリストを見直しプロモーション用メディアを削除することを保証（約束）すると良いでしょう。

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例：出品者パフォーマンスの通知は（Amazon.deで禁止されている）プロモーション版のメディアを販売したため、あなたのアカウントが停止または閉鎖されたことを意味します。商品リストと商品の仕入れ過程を見直してください。仕入れ業者が商品の中にプロモーション用ＣＤを含めていることに気づくでしょう。あなたは、それらの商品をリストから直ちに削除し、プロモーション用メディアを削除するために定期的にリストを見直すことを保証（約束）すると良いでしょう。

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al62802
Also known as “Mana-Sama (You majesty Mana)”. She is very fond of Gothic And Lolita. This leads her to establish the fashion brand “Moi-même-Moitié” and to design and produce for the brand.
The brand represents Mana-Sama’s world image.
Since it has the men’s size, there are also a lot of male buyers.
ATELIER BOZ
The brand pursues the Classic European and Gothic fashion of the good old days.
The style makes the typical prince look with a jacket and half-pants.

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al62802
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Popular as "Mana-Sama". She is very fond of Gothic And Lolita. This led her to establish the fashion brand “Moi-même-Moitié” and to design and produce for the brand.
↵
The brand represents Mana-Sama’s world image.
↵
Since there are men’s sizes as well, male buyers are also abundant.
↵
ATELIER BOZ
The brand pursues the Classic European and Gothic fashion of the good old days.
Jacket and the half-pant create typical Prince charming style with royalty.

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Thank you for choosing it for your daughter.
I also gave birth to a baby last summer.
Sincerely I hope your daughter will safely give birth to a pretty child.
You also have 2 cats, don’t you?
I’m sure they are cool as their names.
May you have healthy and happy days from now on too!
Thank you for everything, too.

As my informal gratitude, I will attach a small Maneki-Neko welcoming cat.
I think that will be OK, but please let me know if they are broken while delivery.

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Thank you for choosing it as a present for your daughter.
I also gave birth to a baby last summer.
I sincerely wish your daughter will safely give birth to a pretty baby.
You also have 2 cats, don’t you?
I’m sure they are as cool as their names.
May the coming days be healthy and happy for your family !
I am really thankful for everything.

I am sending you a small Maneki-Neko "Welcoming cat" as a token of gratitude.
I hope it will be fine but in case if of a damage during transportation, please let me know.

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Well, being multifaceted, and not one-sided, is proof that it is a masterpiece. (^^)

This is a clear synopsis of the story, to awaken interest.
However, from here on, there will be story spoilers...

It is the story of a lonely boy, a self.styled alien and a fishing prince, who become friends, and go fishing together with a strange (25 years old) transfer student...

Shall we leave the explanation at that?..♪

That much alone indicates that, being about youth, it contains plenty of fun and heart-rending elements.
There is plenty to excite and move the heart.

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Well, even this,↵
masterpiece is an evidence for being made of multidimensional things, not single dimensional (^^)

This is an interesting synopsis but its quite clear.
However, in this case, there will be story spoilers...

It is the story of a lonely boy who makes friends with a self proclaimed alien, fishing prince and a strange (25 years old) transfer student, and go fishing in four,

Shall we leave the explanation up to that?..♪

Let it alone,↵
being about youth, there are enough fun fun and heart-rending elements.
Exciting and well enough to move the hearts.

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7
“Mobile Police Patlabor the Movie” 1989
It is known as the film with high degree of perfection among fans.

“Mobile Police Patlabor 2 the Movie” 1993

There are many addicted followers even now and the writer thinks that “no film ranked with this film has never been released” in the world anime film industry even in Japan.

This film is on of the best film among Oshi’s anime.

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7
“Patlabor: The Movie” 1989
It is known as a film with high degree of perfection among fans.

“Patlabor 2: The Movie” 1993

There are many addicted followers even now and the writer thinks that “no film that can compete with this has been released ” not only in Japan but also in world's SF animation industry.

This film is on of the best even among Oshi’s anime.

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Q. Where will the download address be shown?

A. If you would pay with PayPal or credit card, you can download the products from following link ( which is shown on the image). When you would pay through a bank transfer, we would let you know the download address by email as soon as we confirm the payment.

You can also redownload our products from Order History in My Account if you purchase the products after logging in to your account.

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Q. Where will the download address be shown?

A. If you would pay with PayPal or credit card, you can download the products from following link ( which is shown on the image). When you would pay through a bank transfer, we would let you know the download address by email as soon as we confirm the payment.

You can also download the products you ordered after logging in to your account, from Order History in My Account.

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Q) Where will the address for download be displayed?
A) If you chose payment via PayPal or a credit card, the products can be downloaded from the link below (at the location of the image). If you to pay by bank transfer, we will let you know the address for download as soon as we confirm the receipt of payment.

In addition, you can download the product once ordered as signed-in from your history of purchase in your account.

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Q) Where will the address for download be displayed?
A) If you chose to pay via PayPal or a credit card, the products can be downloaded from the link below (at the location of the image). If you to pay by bank transfer, we will let you know the address for download as soon as we confirm the receipt of payment.

In addition, you can download the product once ordered as signed-in from your history of purchase in your account.

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Where is Q) download address displayed?
A)Paypal・ If you are considering a credit card transaction, the items can be downloaded from the link below(image's position). As for a bank payment, we can inform you a download address via e-mail short after we confirm the payment.

Also, you can download the items you logged in and bought from your past order history.

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Q) Where download address is displayed?
A) If you are considering a Paypal or credit card transaction, the items can be downloaded from the link below(image's position). As for a bank payment, we can inform you a download address via e-mail soon after we confirm the payment.

Also, you can download the items you logged in and ordered from your past order history.

元の翻訳
Q) Where is the download link?
A) In case of payment done via PayPal or credit card, you can download the item using the following link (where the image is). If you use bank account, the download link will be informed via email as soon as the payment is confirmed.

Also, for items already ordered, you can log in and scroll down order history in your account to download as well.

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Q) Where is the download link?
A) In case of payment done via PayPal or credit card, you can download the item using the following link (where the image is). If you use bank account, the download link will be informed via email as soon as the payment is confirmed.

Also, for items ordered after logging in, scroll down the order history in your account to download as well.

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Q:別のコンペティションで受賞した画像をエントリーしても良いですか？
A:別のコンペティションで受賞した画像や別のコンペティションに提出され現在審査中の画像はエントリーできません。

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Q:別のコンペティションで受賞した画像をエントリーしても良いですか？
A:別のコンペティションで受賞した画像や別のコンペティションに提出され現在審査中の画像はエントリーできます。

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Q：私は、他の競技に勝った画像を入力することはできますか？
A ：他の大会で賞を獲得しているか、他のコンペティションに応募されたことを画像は、現在進行中の対象となります。

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Q：私は、他の競技に勝った画像を入力することはできますか？
A ：他の大会で賞を獲得しているか、他のコンペティションに応募され、現在進行中の画像は対象となります。

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—The potential of popularization of electric 3 wheel taxis.
The hurdle for the diffusion of electric cars (4 wheel vehicles) are said to be the 3 points of cruising range, charging facilities and vehicle price, but 3 wheel taxis are used within fixed routes and do not require much cruising range. Also they don't need special equipement to be able to recharge from a house electrical outlet, their price is reasonable, so there aren't obstacles to them becoming popular.
Philippines being our main import partner and being a country that receives the main share of ODA support, japanese companies have high hopes of obtaining high quality materials and service.

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—The potential of popularization of electric 3 wheel taxis.
The hurdle for the diffusion of electric cars (4 wheel vehicles) are said to be the 3 points of cruising range, charging facilities and vehicle price, but 3 wheel taxis are used within limited routes and do not require much cruising range. Also they don't need special charging equipment since it is rechargeable from house electrical outlets, their price is reasonable, so there aren't obstacles to them becoming popular.
So from the Philippines' point of view Japan is the largest import partner and the ODA donor, and Japanese companies with high levels of reputation for quality and service capabilities have lots of prospects.