坂田　和子 (komenosei) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Hi,

I got a negative feedback from my buyer, but I solved the problem and the buyer agreed to revise the feedback.
However I cannot send a revision request (reached the maximum request #).
How can I request the buyer to revise the feedback in this case?

Please kindly advise.
Thanks!

修正後
Hi,

I got a negative feedback from my buyer, but I solved the problem and the buyer agreed to revise the feedback.
However I cannot send a revision request (reached the maximum request #).
How can I request the buyer to revise the feedback in this case?

Please let me know.
Thanks!

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I am living in Japan now.↵
I would like to buy your item at $1000.
Please let me know the total price including the shipping charge. I will make payment by Paypal.↵
Thank you for your consideration.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
↵
I am living in Japan now and I would like to buy your item at $1000.
Please let me know the total price including the shipping charge. I want to make payment by Paypal.
↵
I hope you contact me after checking it above.↵
↵
Best Regards,

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

I have one more item that I would like to purchase.
I believe you have YOSHIMURA's scarf. Do you still have it or is it already sold out?

Please let me know if I the scarf is still available.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.

I have one more item that I would like to purchase.
I believe you have YOSHIMURA's scarf. Do you still have one or is it already sold out?

Please let me know if I the scarf is still available.

元の翻訳
マックスビクトリーロボは新品で、箱入りでしょうか。また、イギリス向けにEMSで発送かのうでしょうか。

修正後
マックスビクトリーロボは新品で、箱入りでしょうか。また、イギリス向けにEMSで発送可能でしょうか。