翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

御返事ありがとうございます。
私は今、日本に住んでいます。
私は貴方のアイテムを1000＄で買いたいです。
送料込みの金額を請求して頂ければpaypalで支払います。
ご検討してください。よろしくお願いいたします。

英語

Thank you for your reply.
I am living in Japan now.
I would like to buy your item at $1000.
Please let me know the total price including the shipping charge. I will make payment by Paypal.
Thank you for your consideration.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/06/30 01:07:34

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I am living in Japan now.↵
I would like to buy your item at $1000.
Please let me know the total price including the shipping charge. I will make payment by Paypal.↵
Thank you for your consideration.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
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I am living in Japan now and I would like to buy your item at $1000.
Please let me know the total price including the shipping charge. I want to make payment by Paypal.
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I hope you contact me after checking it above.↵
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Best Regards,

[komenosei]

丁寧な語添削ありがとうございます。とても勉強になります。