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元の翻訳
[Moist Diane]x[AAA] Tie-up campaign starts!

■Project outline
[Moist Diane]x[AAA] Tie-up campaign

[Implementation period]
25 Oct 2014 (Sat) to 10 Jan 2015 (sat)

[Target shops]
Around 1300 Cocokara Fine shops throughout the country
(Please access to the website for details of the shops <http://www.cocokarafine.co.jp/healthcare/store/>)

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[Moist Diane]x[AAA] Tie-up campaign starts soon!

■Project outline
[Moist Diane]x[AAA] Tie-up campaign

[Implementation period]
25 Oct 2014 (Sat) to 10 Jan 2015 (sat)

[Target shops]
Around 1300 Cocokara Fine shops throughout the country
(Please access to the website for details of the shops <http://www.cocokarafine.co.jp/healthcare/store/>)

元の翻訳
19:00～ 「Quiz DoReMiFaSo! 300 most hit songs remained in their hearts selected by 10,000 people～」(AAA)


Programme Homepage：http://www.fujitv.co.jp/b_hp/doremifadon/
※Some areas may have different broadcasting time。

Fuji Television

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19:00～ 「Quiz DoReMiFaDon! 300 most beloved hit songs remained in their hearts selected by 10,000 people～」(AAA)


Programme Homepage：http://www.fujitv.co.jp/b_hp/doremifadon/
※Some areas may have different broadcasting time。

Fuji Television

元の翻訳
For details, please check the official website of Charming Kiss! ↓
http://chiaki.koji-honpo.co.jp/

Please also check here as we also public lot of news through twitter and our application♪

* Application
(ios:https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id668504622?mt=8)
(Android: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=li.yapp.appB09E7B30&hl=ja)

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For details, please check the official website of Charming Kiss! ↓
http://chiaki.koji-honpo.co.jp/

Please also check here as we will publish a lot of news through twitter and our application♪

* Application
(ios:https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id668504622?mt=8)
(Android: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=li.yapp.appB09E7B30&hl=ja)

元の翻訳
The internet program 「Himitsu no jyoshiryoku-chan!」in which NAOYA URATA（AAA）taking the post of MC is going to start soon!

The internet program 「Himitsu no jyoshiryoku-chan!」in which NAOYA URATA （AAA) taking the post of MC is going to start soon!

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The internet program 「Himitsu no jyoshiryoku-chan!」in which NAOYA URATA（AAA）taking the post of MC is going to start soon!

The internet program "Himitsu no jyoshiryoku-chan!" in which Naoya Urata (AAA) serves as MC will start!

元の翻訳
[联络我们] 代官山UNIT　电话： 03-3464-1012/热线或促销 03-5720-9999 （平日12:00-18:00）
*当日将按照票号顺序入场。
*摄影器材，录音或录影机器将不可带进场内。

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[联络我们] 代官山UNIT　电话： 03-3464-1012/热线或促销 03-5720-9999 （工作日12:00-18:00）
*当日将按照票号顺序入场。
*摄影器材，录音或录影机器将不可带进场内。

元の翻訳
tofubeats“First Album”release party AAA will be performing in the performance in Tokyo↵

tofubeats“First Album”release party AAA will be performing in the performance in Tokyo!

30th Nov 2014 (Thurs)
[ tofubeats“First Album”release party ]＠DaikanyamaUNIT

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SKY-HI will perform at tofubeats“First Album”release party in Tokyo.
It is confirmed that SKY-HI will perform at tofubeats“First Album”release party in Tokyo!

30th Oct. 2014 (Thurs)
[ tofubeats“First Album”release party ]＠DaikanyamaUNIT

元の翻訳
Tick​​et Pia Tel: 0570-02-9999　P code：245－273
LAWSON TICKET Tel: 0570-084-003　L code：76914
　　e+ [ http://eplus.jp ]
[Production] Moushiwake
[Operate] HOT STUFF PROMOTION [ http://www.red-hot.ne.jp ]
[Coorperation] Warner Music Japan、ONEPEACE.INC、Yoshimoto Kogyo Co., Ltd

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Tick​​et Pia Tel: 0570-02-9999　P code：245－273
LAWSON TICKET Tel: 0570-084-003　L code：76914
　　e+ [ http://eplus.jp ]
[Production] Moushiwake Limited
[Operation] HOT STUFF PROMOTION [ http://www.red-hot.ne.jp ]
[Coorperation] Warner Music Japan inc.、ONEPEACE.INC、Yoshimoto Kogyo Co., Ltd

元の翻訳
[Inquiry] Daikanyamacho UNIT　TEL：03-3464-1012／Hotline or Promotion 03-5720-9999 (Weekdays 12:00-18:00)
＊Entry to the hall will be according to the sequence of the ticket number.
＊Bringing in photographing devices, sound or video recording devices will not be permitted.

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[Contact] Daikanyamacho UNIT　TEL：03-3464-1012／Hotline or Promotion 03-5720-9999 (Weekdays 12:00-18:00)
＊Entry to the hall will be according to the ticket number.
＊Please do not bring the photographing, sound or video recording devices.

元の翻訳
I got what you mean.
We put our first priority to deliver for customers who have chosen EMS.
Please be assured that there will not be any extra charge.
Thank you for using our service.

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I got [usage] what you mean.
We put our first priority to deliver for customers who have chosen EMS [mistranslation].
Please be assured that there will not be any extra charge.
Thank you for using our service.

元の翻訳
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あなたはレンズのことについて何をご存じますか？

よろしくお願い致します。

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あなたはこのレンズのことについて何をご存じですか？

よろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
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あなたはレンズのことについて何をご存じますか？

よろしくお願い致します。

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こんにちは

あなたはこのレンズのことについて何をご存じますか？

よろしくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
We are looking for candidates who can work with the File exchange of E-bay and be able understand Japanese. Please input the data for products of our site to the Exchange file in CSV or Excel format.
There are 10000 items. You are required to complete 1 item before signing a contract. Since we have to send you a file, please let us know about necessary information. We will contact you after confirming data that you need to input.
After confirming successful upload to E-bay website, we will pay you money.
There are 10000 items.
Since we also have other candidates, please let us know the amount when you input your 100th item.

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We are looking for candidates who can work with the File exchange of E-bay and be able understand Japanese. Please input the data for products of our website to the Exchange file in CSV or Excel format.
There are 10000 items. You are required to complete 1 item before signing a contract. Since we have to send you the website address and a file, please let us know about necessary information. We will contact you after confirming the data that you need to input.
After confirming successful upload to E-bay website, we will pay you money.
There are 10000 items.
Since we also have other candidates, please let us know the amount when you input your 100 items.

元の翻訳
The exchange product has been delivered.
However, the size was wrong.
The tag was XS size but the actual item was S size.

I want to have the item sooner.
I hope you could deliver the item now.

1. I make a new purchase for the same item.
The product I have in hand will be returned, and please refund to me upon receiving the item.

2. If refund is not possible, please send me the correct item upon receiving the returned item.

I appreciate the first choice as I hope you could deliver the product sooner.
I look forward to receiving your reply.

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The exchange product has been received.
However, the size was wrong.
The tag was XS size but the actual item was S size.

I want to have the item sooner.
I hope you could deliver the item now.

1. I make a new purchase for the same item.
The product I have in hand will be returned, and please refund to me upon receiving the item.

2. If refund is not possible, please send me the correct item upon receiving the returned item.

I appreciate the first choice as I hope you could deliver the product sooner.
I look forward to receiving your reply.

元の翻訳
I have noted that you have mistakenly bought the mount.
To facilitate the goods returning process, please send the product the the following address.
Upon the arrival of the product, the amount you paid with be refunded after deducting the postage fee.
Thank you for your support to us.

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I have noted that you have mistakenly bought the mount.
To facilitate the goods returning process, please send the product to the following address.
Upon arrival of the product, we will repay the paid amount after deducting the shipping fee.
Thank you for your support.

元の翻訳
Today I received the product.
Thank you for your prompt reply.

May I ask if you have a 3ml vial bottle?
And please also let me know the unit price of ordering 10,000 3ml pump spray vial bottle.

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Today I received the product.
Thank you for your prompt reply.

As for the vial bottle, do you have those of 3ml?
And please also let me know the price per unit if I ordered 10,000 pcs of 3ml pump spray vial bottle.

元の翻訳
Today I received the product.
Thank you for your prompt reply.

May I ask if you have a 3ml vial bottle?
And please also let me know the unit price of ordering 10,000 3ml pump spray vial bottle.

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Today I received the product.
Thank you for your prompt reply.

May I ask if you have a 3-ml vial bottle?
And please also let me know the unit price of ordering 10,000 3-ml pump spray vial bottles.

元の翻訳
The product has been delivered.
However, both sides of the lighting parts of the bulb were bent.
Also, one side of the bulb was greatly damaged.

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The product has been delivered.
However, both sides of the luminous parts of the bulb were bent.
Also, one of the bulbs has a major damage on the luminous part.