kazuhiro uozumi (kazuhiro_uozumi) — もらったレビュー

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"Revoltec Danbo Mini" known as a smash hit item made by Kaiyodo,which is a mini size action figure of Danbo cosple charactor showing up on "Yotsubato" originated by Kiyohiko Azuma, now has "Wonder Sowcase" version.

The black colored carton box marked Logo type of Wonder Showcase is set up at the head place, so it looks stylish but somewhat an enigmatic memorial item, which add some flowers on the ceremony of the 5 years of anniversary since "WonderShowcase" was established.

It is a far rare item you can get only at OneFes site and is a completely limitted item which is very likely to be a premier item in the near future.

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"Revoltec Danbo Mini" known as a smash hit item made by Kaiyodo,which is a mini size action figure of Danbo cosplay charactor showing up on "Yotsubato" originated by Kiyohiko Azuma, now has "Wonder Sowcase" version.

The black colored carton box marked Logo type of Wonder Showcase is set up at the head place, so it looks stylish but somewhat an enigmatic memorial item, which add some flowers on the ceremony of the 5 years of anniversary since "WonderShowcase" was established.

It is a far rare item you can get only at OneFes site and is a completely limitted item which is very likely to be a premier item in the near future.

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I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packaging.

We are planning to place next order at the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to see your new products on your site.
We would like to develop longterm relationship from our heart.
Thanks with my very best regards.

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I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packing.

We are planning to place next order by the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to seeing your new products on your website.
We would like to develop a long-term relationship from our heart.
Thank you and best regards.

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I would like to purchase 50 pieces.
Please send it to the following address.

I would like to use Pay Pal for this payment.
PayPal address:
Please send me the invoice.

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I would like to purchase 50 pieces.
Please send it to the following address.

I would like to use Pay Pal for this payment.
My PayPal address:
Please send me the invoice.

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Smapho x Projection Mapping / Evolving graphic image.

As for the projection mapping technology that has been booming since around 2012, the desk top size projection mapping tapping into Smapho is showing a sign to be trendy.

French Digital Agency "Auditoire" has produced Greeting Card that can display the projection mapping on the screen by connecting with Smapho.

It is amazing that it can display on the screen so vividly only by light volume from Smapho.

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Smapho x Projection Mapping / Evolving video expression.

As for the projection mapping technology that has been booming since around 2012, the desk top size projection mapping tapping into Smapho is showing a sign to be trendy.

French Digital Agency "Auditoire" has produced Greeting Card that can display the projection mapping on the screen by connecting with Smapho.

It is amazing that it can display on the screen so vividly only by light volume from Smapho.

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■Note;
* " Commemorative Photo Event" can finish even in the case that some customers are still standing in the line.
* Please refrain from making inquiries to the venue, which could cause cancellation of the live event.
* It is strictly prohibited to try to secure some spaces by placing your lugguages or sit-in. We would like you to understand in advance that our staffs may ask you t o relocate.
*Please note that the admission tickets for the comemorative photo event can not be reissued for any reasons including loss and theft.

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■Note;
* " Commemorative Photo Event" can finish even in the case that some customers are still standing in the line.
* Please refrain from making inquiries to the venue, which could cause cancellation of the live event.
* It is strictly prohibited to secure some spaces by placing your luggage or sitting in. Our staffs may ask you to move to a different location.
*Please note that the admission tickets for the comemorative photo event can not be reissued for any reasons including loss and theft.

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2. Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya
After the screening at 13:05, greetings from the stage.
3. Cine・Reeble in Ikebukuro
After the screening at 15:30, greetings from the stage.
【Regarding the Handshake ceremony at the venues】
At "Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya and "Cine・Reeble in Ikebukuro”, Handshake Ceremones will be held after the greetings at the stage for the customers who purchased the following items at each venue on that day.
■Object items
・『A Cross～Cinema"Horror Stories at schools- the soul of language of the spell　" Ver. ～』
・『Tune Collections of horror tunes + "Horror stories at Schools - the soul of language of the spell"　Original Sound Truck』

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2. Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya
After the screening at 13:05, greetings from the stage.
3. Cine Libre in Ikebukuro
After the screening at 15:30, greetings from the stage.
【Regarding the handshake event at the venues】
At "Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya and "Cine Libre in Ikebukuro”, Handshake event will be held after the greetings at the stage for the customers who purchased the following items at each venue on that day.
■Object items
・『A Cross～Cinema"Horror Stories at schools- the soul of language of the spell　" Ver. ～』
・『Tune Collection of horror tunes + "Horror stories at Schools - the soul of language of the spell"　Original Sound Truck』

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You may not be satisfied with the number of sales clerks I would designate judging from products line-up you want to display. Then I set up new manuals on the box.
For instance, supposing a sales clerk whom I designate sold Radio Control, RC, I would strongly suggent you to try to find out if RC was sold within two weeks by using the devise called "Tella Pique" .
Actually a lot of RC were sold like this. Please display the particular items of RC sold on the commerce.
I would like you to take note that the merchandises purchased at high prices are important but the items which were purchased multiple number of times should be regarded as more important.

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You may not be satisfied with the number of sales clerks I would designate judging from products line-up you want to display. Then I set up new manuals on the box.
For instance, supposing a sales clerk whom I designate sold Radio Control, RC, I would strongly suggest you to try to find out if RC was sold within two weeks by using the devise called "Tella Pique" .
Actually a lot of RC were sold like this. Please display the particular items of RC sold on the commerce.
Please note that the merchandises purchased at high prices are important but the items which were purchased multiple number of times should be regarded as more important.