Conyacサービス終了のお知らせ (11月25日更新)

翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/05/23 22:16:20

kazuhiro_uozumi
kazuhiro_uozumi 52 翻訳は現在スクールに通って勉強中ですが、英検1級、TOEIC960点と英語...
日本語

2. ヒューマントラストシネマ渋谷
13:05の回 上映後舞台挨拶

3. シネ・リーブル池袋
15:30の回 上映後舞台挨拶


【会場での握手会に関して】
「ヒューマントラストシネマ渋谷」と「シネ・リーブル池袋」においては、
当日各会場にて以下の対象商品をご購入いただきましたお客様を対象に、舞台挨拶後に握手会を行います。

■対象商品
・『十字架~映画「学校の階段-呪いの言霊-」Ver.~』
・『怖い曲集 +「学校の怪談 -呪いの言霊-」オリジナルサウンドトラック』

英語

2. Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya
After the screening at 13:05, greetings from the stage.
3. Cine・Reeble in Ikebukuro
After the screening at 15:30, greetings from the stage.
【Regarding the Handshake ceremony at the venues】
At "Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya and "Cine・Reeble in Ikebukuro”, Handshake Ceremones will be held after the greetings at the stage for the customers who purchased the following items at each venue on that day.
■Object items
・『A Cross~Cinema"Horror Stories at schools- the soul of language of the spell " Ver. ~』
・『Tune Collections of horror tunes + "Horror stories at Schools - the soul of language of the spell" Original Sound Truck』

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ] 66 I've translated as a hobby for many y...
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/24 22:15:21

元の翻訳
2. Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya
After the screening at 13:05, greetings from the stage.
3. Cine・Reeble in Ikebukuro
After the screening at 15:30, greetings from the stage.
【Regarding the Handshake ceremony at the venues】
At "Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya and "Cine・Reeble in Ikebukuro”, Handshake Ceremones will be held after the greetings at the stage for the customers who purchased the following items at each venue on that day.
■Object items
・『A Cross~Cinema"Horror Stories at schools- the soul of language of the spell " Ver. ~』
・『Tune Collections of horror tunes + "Horror stories at Schools - the soul of language of the spell" Original Sound Truck』

修正後
2. Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya
After the screening at 13:05, greetings from the stage.
3. Cine Libre in Ikebukuro
After the screening at 15:30, greetings from the stage.
【Regarding the handshake event at the venues】
At "Human Trust Cinema in Shibuya and "Cine Libre in Ikebukuro”, Handshake event will be held after the greetings at the stage for the customers who purchased the following items at each venue on that day.
■Object items
・『A Cross~Cinema"Horror Stories at schools- the soul of language of the spell " Ver. ~』
・『Tune Collection of horror tunes + "Horror stories at Schools - the soul of language of the spell" Original Sound Truck』

It's a serviceable translation, though it needs to be cleaned up a little.

kazuhiro_uozumi kazuhiro_uozumi 2014/05/25 08:55:02

Hi, Mavri san, thank you for your kind comments. I am still in the process of learning translation and I would say I am still a beginner of translation, so your comments are super helpful for me. I would like to ask for your continued support.

[削除済みユーザ] [削除済みユーザ] 2014/05/25 09:23:21

Forgot to correct "Sound Truck" to "Soundtrack." I regret the error.

kazuhiro_uozumi kazuhiro_uozumi 2014/05/25 11:24:21

Thank you again !!

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