Mari Sano (ibimari) — もらったレビュー

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どうして電池収納部へのハッチ/扉がないのでしょうか？
あなたは販売のためそれと同様のものを提供できますか？もしそうなら、料金は幾らかかりますか？
購入者が取引を成立させない場合は、私に知らせていただけますか？
また、フィルタ画像は、標準的なドロップインまたはCPLですか？
さらに、このレンズは2倍のケースキー、レンズストラップと5または6色のドロップインフィルターを完備していますか？
私にはかなり完全であるように思えますが、もし支払いが完了していないのであれば、
（あなたが他の方法を提供してくれるのであれば）、私は個人的にあなたからそれを買うでしょう。私はオークションを逃し残念だけど、誰かが最高のベンチマーク ミノルタGレンズの1買いました。それは、おそらくAPOとして表示されて、そ表示がAPO　ではなくAPO Gにする必要があります、実際は、APO HS Gに値するオプティクスを備えています。

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どうして電池収納部へのハッチ/扉がないのでしょうか？
あなたは販売のためそれと同様のものを提供できますか？もしそうなら、料金は幾らかかりますか？
購入者が取引を成立させない場合は、私に知らせていただけますか？
また、フィルタ画像は、標準的なドロップインまたはCPLですか？
さらに、このレンズは2倍のケースキー、レンズストラップと5または6色のドロップインフィルターを完備していますか？
私にはかなり完全であるように思えますが、もし支払いが完了していないのであれば、
（あなたが他の方法を提供してくれるのであれば）、私は個人的にあなたからそれを買うでしょう。↵
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私はオークションを逃し残念だけど、誰かが最高のベンチマーク結果を残したミノルタGレンズの1つを買いました。それは、おそらくAPOとして表示されていたかもしれませんが、APO HS Gに値するオプティクスを備えていますから、APOと表記されていたとしても、実際はAPOのはずです。

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I am sorry. After discharge, was shipped luggage in a hurry. You should have arrived on the 19th. Because it is this incompleteness and discount 20% than the purchase price as an indication of the apology. Would you please make a payment of $ 36? I send an invoice from paypal. Thanking you in advance.

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I shipped the items as soon as possible after I was discharged.↵
They should have arrived by the 19th.↵
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I am extremely sorry.↵
It was my mistake, so as a token of my apology I will take 20% off the purchase price.↵
Could you please make a payment for $36?↵
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I will send you an invoice via PayPal.↵
Thank you in advance.

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We were sentenced to suspend the account from Amazon. It is because they have been exhibited your product without a marketing rights (A).
We do not have any trade exhibition also sold until now of (A).
Or anything you tell me if there are other problems?
I would like to correspond immediately.
That we can not sell on Amazon,also is stop the payment, we has become a very big damage now.

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We were ordered to suspend our account by Amazon. It is because we have been exhibiting your product, (A), without having the marketing rights.
We haven't been exhibiting or selling (A) until now.
Could you tell me if there are other problems?
I would like to deal with this immediately.
It's causing us a major loss to be unable to sell on Amazon and having our payments stopped.

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Is corresponding to that site only xxx.com?
Or do you also support such as yyy.com?

In addition to request, I think that may have the option that can be displayed side-by-side in simple.

As other person have pointed out, I think the function of category that's required. Additionally, It is good to be themselves is seen history and results history who responded.

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Is corresponding to that site only xxx.com?
Or do you also support such as yyy.com?

In addition to request, I think that may have the option that can be displayed side-by-side in simple.

As others have pointed out, I think the categorization function is a must. Additionally, It is nice if one can see his own response and result histories.

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【London】hyper japan festival
The TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE were starring determined to* hyper japan* at most famous event in london.

hyper japan will be held most largest event in london!
It is the first performance in the long-sought euro!

<events overview>
title: hyper japan festival

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【London】HYPER JAPAN Festival
The TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE is going to appear at HYPER JAPAN, the biggest "Cool Japan" event in London.

hyper japan will be held most largest event in london!
It is the first performance in the long-sought euro!

<events overview>
title: hyper japan festival

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Why your return was delayed are you to blame me?
I was allowed to return two months ago, but did not return the product is you.
  Once you have registered the tracking number on ebay but it was not actually present number.
Is it others will register the why does not exist number?　You says that do not know my address, but my address can be found in the ebay. In addition, it is mentioned in the invoice that is attached to products. Did not immediately ask why I do not know that two months ago that was allowed to return to?　The merchandise return was delayed It is your responsibility. So it is determined that the ebay may not refund officially.

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Why your return was delayed are you to blame me?
I was allowed to return two months ago, but did not return the product is you.
Once you have registered the tracking number on ebay but it was not actually present number.
Is it others will register the why does not exist number?　You says that do not know my address, but my address can be found in the ebay. In addition, it is mentioned in the invoice that is attached to products. Did not immediately ask why I do not know that two months ago that was allowed to return to?　The merchandise return was delayed It is your responsibility. So it is determined that the ebay may not refund officially.

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Why your return was delayed are you to blame me?
I was allowed to return two months ago, but did not return the product is you.
  Once you have registered the tracking number on ebay but it was not actually present number.
Is it others will register the why does not exist number?　You says that do not know my address, but my address can be found in the ebay. In addition, it is mentioned in the invoice that is attached to products. Did not immediately ask why I do not know that two months ago that was allowed to return to?　The merchandise return was delayed It is your responsibility. So it is determined that the ebay may not refund officially.

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Are you blaming me for why your return was delayed?
I allowed you to return it two months ago, but you were the one who didn't do that.
At one time you registered a tracking number on eBay but it wasn't a real number.
Why would you do that?↵
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You say that you do not know my address, but my address can be found on eBay. In addition, it is listed in the invoice that was attached to the item. If you didn't know it then why wouldn't you have asked for it sooner in these 2 months? The late return is your fault so eBay also officially determined that it would be okay not to refund your money.

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迅速な対応ありがとうございました、そして私はパッケージについては地元の郵便局と呼んでいました。彼らは、パッケージに問題は発生していませんし、記録伝票は同様にパッケージが先週の月曜日シカゴを通過したことを示していました。郵便局は、2～３日待ってから、パッケージに問題が生じているかを確認し、再度、連絡すると私につたえました。商品が米国に到着してからそう時間はかかりませんし、近郊では荒れ模様の天気などはありません。

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迅速な対応ありがとうございました、そして私はパッケージについて地元の郵便局に電話をかけてみました。彼らは、パッケージがどうなったのかまったわからないし、記録伝票は同様にパッケージが先週の月曜日シカゴを通過したことを示していちと言いました。郵便局は、2～３日待ってから、あなたか彼らに連絡して、パッケージに何か問題が生じているかを確認して欲しいと言いました。通常、商品が米国に到着してからこんなに時間はかかりませんし、近郊では荒れ模様の天気などもありません。