Helen (helena0416) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
リーホルダーするコストは25ドル、CGCへ発送しCGCから発送されるコストは約30ドルです。もし、商品を私たちに返送する費用をカバーしていただければ、リーホルダーとCGCの送料をあなたと分けて、無料であなたに返送いたします。

修正後
リーホルダー費用は25ドル、CGCへの発送および返送コストは約30ドルです。商品の発送費用を負担いただければ、リーホルダー費用とCGCの発送送料を分割し、無料であなたに返送いたします。

元の翻訳
- Know what kind of person the interviewees are and have your questions ready.

-> (Rule #1) It is mandatory for everyone to participate as the interviewer at lease once even if they are not good at speaking in English.
-> (Rule #2) Enter the interview room three minutes before the time of interview. If there are multiple teams, discuss with fellow students to decide who should take the initiative to thank the interviewees and explain about the interview and in what order the questions should be asked to ensure a smooth interview.

修正後
- Know what kind of person the interviewees are and have your questions ready.

-> (Rule #1) It is mandatory for everyone to participate as the interviewer at least once even if they are not good at speaking in English.
-> (Rule #2) Enter the interview room three minutes before the time of interview. If there are multiple teams, discuss with fellow students to decide who should take the initiative to thank the interviewees and explain about the interview and in what order the questions should be asked to ensure a smooth interview.

元の翻訳
I want the facilitator to let the students know the following things tomorrow morning.
Interview etiquette:
1. There is a general lack of consideration for the interviewees
- First and foremost, the interviewees are nervous about what they are going to be asked.
- Thank them for taking their time for the interview.
- Let the interviewees know the background and purpose of the interview by telling them about your own background and what kind of questions you are interested in asking. (it is rude to start an interview by asking questions)
- Be mindful to use simple English that the interviewees can understand.
2. Not enough preparation has been made beforehand

修正後
I want the facilitator to let the students know the following things tomorrow morning.
Interview etiquette:
1. There is a general lack of consideration for the interviewees
- First and foremost, the interviewees are nervous about what they are going to be asked.
- Thank them for taking their time for the interview.
- Let the interviewees know the background and purpose of the interview by telling them about the background and what kind of questions you are interested in asking. (It is rude to start an interview by asking questions)
- Be mindful to use simple English that the interviewees can understand.
2. Not enough preparation has been made beforehand