haru — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
It was said that japanese consumers have the most strict demand in the world so if you win through japanese market then you can compete in the world market. However, the strict measure which reward for unreasonable demands depenging on the stuation ironically brought up lesser quality foreign parts / products to the major stage.

修正後
It was said that Japanese consumers have the most strict demand in the world so if you win through Japanese market then you can compete in the world market. However, the strict measure which rewards for unreasonable demands depending on the stuation ironically brought up lesser quality foreign parts / products to the major stage.

元の翻訳
The moment a man appeared, everything freezed in the factory. He resembled just like the man who had disappeared several years ago.

修正後
The moment a man appeared, everything freezed in the factory. He resembled just like the man who had disappeared several years before.