graceoym (graceoym) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
As I mentioned in the notes, the item will be shipped in 14-21 working days by standard shipping. The arrival can be delay due to the process in the Customs.
I would refund all the price including the shipping fee if you want to cancel the order.
Please refuse to receive the item on arrival and contact us in that case.
The refund will be after our confirming the refusal of the item of after the item would be arrived to us.
It is already being shipped. Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.
As I mentioned in the notes, the item will be shipped in 14-21 working days by standard shipping. The arrival can delay due to the process in the Customs.
I would refund all the price including the shipping fee if you want to cancel the order.
Please refuse to receive the item on arrival and contact us in that case.
The refund will be made after our confirming the refusal of the item or after the item has arrived to us.
It is already being shipped. Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Hi, thank you for contacting us.

I have this item in stock but it is used in pretty good condition.

I can offer you a discount.

Please check the picture, if you like it or not.

Thank you very much.↵

修正後
Hi, thank you for contacting us.

I have this item in stock but what we have now is only a used one; it is in a very good condition, though.

I can offer you a discount.

Please check the picture, and let me know if you like it or not.

Thank you very much.