Thuy Nguyen (ep_ntt_thuy) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Have you checked the email?
If you still want to buy guyatone WR-2,
I can directly give you an offer via ebay.

The price is $110+shipping charge $15.

If I receive a response from you, I will give you an offer A.S.A.P.
It may turn sold out, as it is a popular item.

I would love you to purchase this item.
Please kindly reply to me.

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Have you checked the email?
If you still want to buy guyatone WR-2,
I can directly give you an offer via ebay.

The price is $110+shipping charge $15.

I will give you an offer as soon as I receive your response.
It may turn sold out, as it is a popular item.

I would love you to purchase this item.
Please kindly reply to me.

元の翻訳
I broke it up, did internal cleaning and lubrication on exhibiting, and overhaul it, so please be relieved.
I dismantled the foot controller and finished the contact cleaning

All the accessories are genuine products.

・ Width 38* height 32* depth 18cm
・ Weight 10kg
・ Foot controller
・ 14 kinds of practical sewings and 20 kinds of designs
・ Seam length adjustment, amplitude adjustment dial
・ Double forwarding design function, free arm and 2 spot illumination light
・ Carrying case
・ Lacing wire
・ Large table
・ Foot controller
・ Knee advance lever
・ Japanese original instruction manual

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I am breaking it up, doing internal cleaning and lubrication on exhibiting, and overhauling it before delivery, so please rest assure.
I also dismantled the foot controller and finished the contact cleaning

All the accessories are genuine products.

・ Width 38* height 32* depth 18cm
・ Weight 10kg
・ Foot controller
・ 14 kinds of practical sewings and 20 kinds of patterns
・ Seam length adjustment, amplitude adjustment dial
・ Double forwarding design function, free arm and 2 spot illumination light
・ Carrying case
・ Lacing wire
・ Large table
・ Foot controller
・ Knee advance lever
・ Original Japanese instruction manual

元の翻訳
I have disassembled the item to clean up and lubricate the inside, and completed the overhaul. Please rest assured.
I also disassembled the foot controller, and cleaned the contact.

All of accessories are genuine, and all of them come together with the item.

- Width 38 x Height 32 x Depth 18 (cm)
- Weight 10Kg
- Foot controller
- 14 variations of practical sewing pattern, 20 kinds of patterns.
- Adjustment of the length of the stitching, Adjustment dial for the wodth of swinging.
- 2X fast forwarding pattern function, free arm, 2 spotting lights
- Carrying case
- Harness
- Large table
- Foot controller
- Lever to raise knee position
- Original Japanese edition of instruction documents

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I willhave disassembled the item to clean up and lubricate the inside, and completed the overhaul before sending it. Please rest assured.
I also disassembled the foot controller, and cleaned the contact spot.

All of accessories are genuine, and all of them come together with the item.

- Width 38 x Height 32 x Depth 18 (cm)
- Weight 10Kg
- Foot controller
- 14 variations of practical sewing pattern, 20 kinds of patterns.
- Adjustment of the length of the stitching, Adjustment dial for the wodth of swinging.
- 2X fast forwarding pattern function, free arm, 2 spotting lights
- Carrying case
- Harness
- Large table
- Foot controller
- Lever to raise knee position
- Original Japanese edition of instruction documents

元の翻訳
Please be assured that the product has already been dismantled and then cleaned internally, lubricated as well as overhauled by the time it is sent out.
The foot controller has also been dismantled and the contact cleaning of it is completed.
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The attachments are all official products and complete.

・Width 38 × Height 32 × Length 18 cm
・Weight 10 Kg
・Foot Controller
・14 types of useful sewings and 20 types of patterns
・The length of the seam is adjustable and the machine is with a dial for the adjustment of the amplitude of vibration.
・The number of patterns doubled・Free arm　・2 spots of light for illumination
・Carrying case
・Pressing Foot
・A big table
・Foot controller
・Knee Lifter Lever
・The original copy of the instruction manual in Japanese

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Please be assured that the product has already been dismantled and then cleaned internally, lubricated as well as overhauled by the time it is sent out.
The foot controller has also been dismantled and the contact cleaning is completed.

All of the attachments are official products and in full set.

・Width 38 × Height 32 × Length 18 cm
・Weight 10 Kg
・Foot Controller
・14 types of useful sewings and 20 types of patterns
・The length of the seam is adjustable and the machine is with a dial for the adjustment of the amplitude of vibration.
・The number of patterns doubled・Free arm　・2 spots of light for illumination
・Carrying case
・Pressing Foot
・A big table
・Foot controller
・Knee Lifter Lever
・The original copy of the instruction manual in Japanese

元の翻訳
Please let me know the due date of the delivery regarding the two orders below.
As they need to be taken care of in a hurry, please make delivery by 22nd.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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Please let me know the date of delivery regarding the two orders below.
As they need to be taken care of in a hurry, please make delivery by 22nd.
I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Please let me know the delivery date of the following two projects.

And because it is the hurry project, please delivery the goods before 22th.

I am waiting for your reply.

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Please let me know the delivery date of the following two projects.

And because it is the urgent project, please delivery the goods before 22th.

I am waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
No. 4 Learning for Speech

Date: from 16:00 Turthday, June 23rd
Venue: main building 4F AV conference room on the fourth floor of the main building
We invited Ms. Orina Kanda who is the professional storyteller to improve our ability of speech and the seminar was held with around forty participants.

Storytelling content
1. The memory of elementary school
2. Kintaikyo bridge

I think I learned the importance of the speech and the first impression and lucidly .
I am going to hold next seminar, so I would like you to participate it.

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No. 4 Learning for Speech

Date: from 16:00 Turthday, June 23rd
Venue: main building 4F AV conference room on the fourth floor of the main building
We invited Ms. Orina Kanda who is the professional storyteller to improve our ability of speech and the seminar was held with around forty participants.

Storytelling content
1. The memory of elementary school
2. Kintaikyo bridge

I think I learned the importance of lucid speech and the first impression.
I am going to hold next seminar, so I would like you to participate it.

元の翻訳

Vol4 Lecture of how to speak

June 23rd(Thur) 16:00- (at Main hall 4F AV conference )
We will welcome Sion Kanda of a storyteller for lecture improving speaking skill.
40 people attended this lecture.

Lecture content
1 memory of elementary school
2Kintai bridge

I learned the importance of first impression and way of talking clearly.
Please join next lecture as we are planning to hold the lecture again.

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Vol4 Lecture of how to speak

June 23rd(Thur) 16:00- (at Main hall 4F AV conference )
40 people attended this lecture of story teller Sion Kanda to improve speaking skill.


Lecture content
1 memory of elementary school
2Kintai bridge

I learned the importance of first impression and way of talking clearly.
Please join next lecture as we are planning to hold the lecture again.

元の翻訳
I am a big fan of products of your company. Since I am living in Japan, I purchase your products via ◯◯.com to receive packages in my country.

I would like to ask about the present model of this product. I suggest that the shape and the color of tag is a little different to a picture of this product on the webpage of your company.

If I purchase this product now, which type of this product will be delivered?

I would appreciate your prompt reply.
Thank you and regards,

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I am a big fan of products of your company. Since I ama Japanese living in Japan, I purchase your products via ◯◯.com who handle international shipping.

I would like to ask about the present specifications of this product. The design and the color of tag in the picture on ◯◯.com is a little different to the picture of this product on the webpage of your company.

If I purchase this product now, which type of this product will be delivered?

I would appreciate your prompt reply.
Thank you and regards,

元の翻訳
I am fan of your products and purchase them sometimes.
I'm a Japanese living in Japan, and I'm pruchasing your product from ○○.com which ships internationally.
I have a question about the current product specs of this item.
The product photo posted on your web shop and that on ○○.com are slightly different on design and tag color.
If I purchase the product via ○○.com, which will product of the pictre be arrived?
I'm happy if you will reply me as soon as possible.
Thank you for your help in advance.

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I am fan of your products and purchase them sometimes.
I'm a Japanese living in Japan, and I'm pruchasing your product from ○○.com which ships internationally.
I have a question about the current product specs of this item.
The product photo posted on your web shop and that on ○○.com are slightly different in design and tag color.
If I purchase the product via ○○.com, which product of the pictures will be arrived?
I'm happy if you will reply to me as soon as possible.
Thank you for your help in advance.

元の翻訳
CT group in general affairs department is considering the system of calculating transportation fee by using IC card (Suica and Pasmo). The purpose of consideration is to reduce work time required for calculating the transportation fee by using the data of transportation route in the IC card and increase its productivity.

As its image, by using card reader (device reading content of IC card), we forward his or her data to the system in crowd. As we can see the forwarded data on website, it is a flow where we select the data of calculating the transportation fee and apply it.

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ICT group in general affairs department is considering the system of calculating transportation fee by using IC card (Suica and Pasmo). The purpose of consideration is to reduce working time required for calculating the transportation fee by using the data of transportation route in the IC card and increase its productivity.

As its image, by using card reader (device reading content of IC card), we forward his or her data to the system in crowd. As we can see the forwarded data on website, it is a flow where we select the data of calculating the transportation fee and apply it.

元の翻訳
Regarding the topic which I sent you an e-mail about, what is the current status after that?
Once the credit of the picture is corrected, I will announce the article. So, I appreciate if you can address it.

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Regarding the topic which the other day I sent you an e-mail about, what is the current status after that?
Once the credit of the picture is corrected, I will publish the article. So, I would appreciate it if you can address it.

元の翻訳
About the case I emailed you the other day, how is it going?
Once the credit in the picture is corrected, I would like to publicize the article. Therefore, I would like you to respond to it.

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About the case I emailed you the other day, how is it going?
Once the credit of the picture is corrected, I would like to publicize the article. Therefore, I would like you to handle it.

元の翻訳
I went to see their two days live in Tokyo. I saw him after a while, but he was so cute and attractive in the same way as used to be.
Have you seen the picture of the paper fan this time? Isn't he too cute?
Did you buy any goods?
I do not like Singapore cuisine very much.
I would like you to tell me English which is available in the hospitality business.
I cannot see the facial expression today because my seat was too far, but I could enjoy myself.

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I went to see their two-day live show in Tokyo. It has been a while since I last saw him, but he was so cute and attractive in the same way as used to be.
Have you seen the picture of the fan this time? Isn't he too cute?
Did you buy any goods?
I do not like Singapore cuisine very much.
I would like you to teach me some English for hospitality business.
I cannot see their facial expression today because my seat was too far, but I could enjoy myself.

元の翻訳
I went to see their live performance for 2 days in Tokyo. It's been a while I saw them last time but they were still cute and attractive.
Did you see the photo of the Uchiwa fan? Isn't he too cute?
Did you buy any goods?
I don't like Singapore food so much.
I would like to learn useful English skill for service industry.
I couldn't see the face expression because my seat was far but I enjoyed.

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I went to see their live performance for 2 days in Tokyo. It's been a while since I last saw them but they were still cute and attractive.
Did you see the photo of the Uchiwa fan? Isn't he too cute?
Did you buy any goods?
I don't like Singapore food so much.
I would like to learn useful English skill for service industry from you.
I couldn't see the face expression because my seat was far but I enjoyed it anyways.

元の翻訳
I went to their live concert in Tokyo for two days. I had not seen him for a long time, but he was atractive and cute as always.
Did you see the picture of him on the fan this time? He is too cute, isn't he?
Did you buy any goods?
I don't like Singaporean food so much.
I wanted you to teach me useful English for customer service.
Today I enjoyed it even though my seat was too far for me to see their facies.

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I went to their live concert in Tokyo for two days. I had not seen him for a long time, but he was attractive and cute as always.
Did you see the picture of him on the fan this time? He is too cute, isn't he?
Did you buy any goods?
I don't like Singaporean food so much.
I want you to teach me useful English for customer service.
Today I enjoyed it even though my seat was too far for me to see their faces.

元の翻訳
I would like to retain the account, A.
This is because I need to access to the invoice and the documents about custom clearing.

But, I will not make shipment using the account A.

Is Monthly Fee charged on the account?

If yes, can I change the plan without Monthly Fee?

I appreciate your confirmation.

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I would like to retain the account, A.
This is because I need to access the invoice and the documents about custom clearing.

However, I will not make shipment using the account A.

Is Monthly Fee charged on the account?

If yes, can I change into the plan without Monthly Fee?

I look forward to your confirmation.

元の翻訳
In the invoice you sent to me which the total amount was different from the amount I have paid. So I can not go through at the customs. You have to rewrite the unit value 55 dollars to 72 dollars.Could you please send the new invoice which is rewrited for me?

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In the invoice you sent to me, the total amount was different from the amount of $18,000 I have paid. So I can not go through at the customs. You have to revise the unit value from 55 dollars to 72 dollars.Could you please send the revised invoice to me?

元の翻訳
It will not be able to pass through Customs because total amount of money written in INVOICE that has sent in is not the $ 18,000 which was actually paid for goods. UNIT VALUE described as a $ 55, must be corrected to $72 .
Could you send a revised INVOICE?

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It will not be able to pass through Customs because total amount of money written in INVOICE that has been sent in is not the $ 18,000 which was actually paid for goods. The UNIT VALUE written as $ 55 but must be corrected to $72 .
Could you send a revised INVOICE?