dr_papa1 — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Being afraid that I think it is not good to press the 'enter' key to put a new line in the reply field. It is difficult to write.
Overall, it also seems not to have nice design or lay-out. There is no uniformity in the size of the display position and delete button on user's name.
It would be great to be able to post video clips as like YouTube.
I think, however, it is great in all its aspects and hope you refer to Social Script of PHP.

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Being afraid [awkward construction] that I think it is not good to press the 'enter' key to put a new line in the reply field [mistranslation]. It is difficult to write [投稿].
Overall, it also seems not to have a nice design or layout. There is no uniformity in the size of the display position and the delete button on user's name.
It would be great to be able to post video clips such as YouTube videos.
I think, however, it is great in all its aspects [usage] and hope you refer to Social Script of PHP.

元の翻訳
Hello.

Thank you for your inquiry.
Are you interested in goods of X?
I deal in many items of X at my store.
Also, there are many other items of X which ones have not been updated on X yet.
The current updated items on X are some parts of X only.

If you are interested in a jacket of X on the list, I could offer you some discount.

I will try to find what you are looking for with my best, so please let me know if there is any inquiry.

The goods you ordered has been checked and it is on packing process now.

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Hello.

Thank you for your inquiry.
Are you interested in X's goods?
I deal with many X items at my store.
Also, there are many other items of X which ones [grammar] have not been updated [usage] on X yet.
The current updated [usage] items on X are some parts [usage] of X only.

If you are interested in a jacket of X on the list [?], I could offer you some discount.

I will try to find what you are looking for with my best [unnatural], so please let me know if there is [awkward to use it here] any inquiry.

The goods [plural] you ordered has [s-v agreement] been checked and it [singular] is on packing process now.