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'KODA KUMI 15th Anniversary LIVE The Artist' by TBS Channel, CS Broadcasting

From 9:00pm to 10:00 pm on Saturday, February 27th,
KODA KUMI 15th Anniversary LIVE The Artist

Her special 15th anniversary live performance will be exclusively on TBS Channel 1!
Please check the details at
http://www.tbs.co.jp/tbs-ch/item/o1760/

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'KODA KUMI 15th Anniversary LIVE The Artist' by TBS Channel, CS Broadcasting

From 9:00pm to 10:00 pm on Saturday, February 27th,
KODA KUMI 15th Anniversary LIVE The Artist

Her special 15th anniversary live performance will be exclusively delivered on TBS Channel 1!
Please check the details at
http://www.tbs.co.jp/tbs-ch/item/o1760/

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ER works well.
However, as it was repaired suddenly and we could not specify the defect clearly,
it is highly likely to stop working again.

We considered the cost for handling the customer and shipping charge
that is caused as a result of defect of the ER, which frequently occurs,
I would like you to provide me 1 ER used for exchanging at free of charge.
As there is not defect at controller, it is not required for it.
We will pay for the shipping charge.

We order 1 ER2 as our inventory.
We also order SN2.1 and HF 101.
Would you send these items with ER?
We are looking forward to your positive reply.

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ER works well.
However, as it was repaired suddenly and we could not specify the defect clearly,
it is highly likely to stop working again.

We considered the cost for handling the customer and shipping charge
that is caused as a result of defect of the ER, which frequently occurs,
I would like you to provide me 1 ER used for exchanging at free of charge.
As there is not defect at controller, it is not required for it.
We will pay for the shipping charge.

We order 1 ER2 as our inventory.
We will also order SN2.1 and HF 101.
Would you send these items with ER?
We are looking forward to your positive reply.

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The ER is working well right now.
However, it just restored suddenly, and without recognizing the exact malfunction point, so is very likely to stop working again.

I want you to provide an ER for replacement free when I think about the costs such as customer correspondence and the postage because of the malfunction of ER occurring frequently.
As the controller does not seem to have any malfunction, it is unnecessary.
We bear the postage.

Furthermore, I order an ER2 for our stock.
I order SN2.1 and HF101, too.
I want you to send out ER together with these products.

Expecting your positive answer,

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The ER is working well right now.
However, it just restored suddenly, and without recognizing the exact malfunction point, so it is very likely to stop working again.

I want you to provide an ER for replacement free when I think about the costs such as customer correspondence and the postage because of the malfunction of ER occurring frequently.
As the controller does not seem to have any malfunction, it is unnecessary.
We bear the postage.

Furthermore, I order an ER2 for our stock.
I will order SN2.1 and HF101, too.
I want you to send out ER together with these products.

Expecting your positive answer,

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Thank you for your order.

We are contacting you regarding the delivery options for the prepaid card. Please choose from the following options.

1. Via email
We will send you the card number and the picture of the prepaid card.

2. In mail
It will arrive within 1-2 weeks in Japan Postal Service mail.

We recommend the first option, via email, for you can receive the card information immediately.

We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your order.

We are contacting you regarding the delivery options for the prepaid card. Please choose from the following options.

1. Via email
We will send you the card number and the picture of the prepaid card.

2. In mail
It will arrive within 1-2 weeks in Japan Postal Service mail.

We recommend the first option, via email, for you can receive the card information immediately.

We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Thank you.

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I am disappointed that you did not like the product.
Did you open the product?
Did you nse the product?
When you have opened or used the product, please return it in the original state. (Place the product in the product box.)
I will refund the product price as soon as the product returns. Because it costed the shipment expense, I cannot refund the postage. The returned good's postage is to be born by the customer. Please accept that.

We can suggest partial refund, too, at the amount that the customer understands. Please contact me.

We do our best in the convincing way for the customer.

Because I want to confirm your intention, please contact me. Thank you very much for your help.

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I am disappointed that you did not like the product.
Did you open the product?
Did you use the product?
When you have opened or used the product, please return it in the original state. (Place the product in the product box.)
I will refund the product price as soon as the product returns. Because it costed the shipment expense, I cannot refund the postage. The returned good's postage is to be born by the customer. Please accept that.

We can suggest partial refund, too, at the amount that the customer understands. Please contact me.

We do our best in the convincing way for the customer.

Because I want to confirm your intention, please contact me. Thank you very much for your help.

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We will provide some non-alcoholic drinks,some snacks and donuts by class expense.We are also happy that you will bring something to eat and drink for sharing from your place!(going shopping is not required.)
Could I ask you to make progress of the presents exchange because presume there wont be so much time on the day?
Please remember your children may come to join with their present for exchanging on the day.

Thank you so much for arranging the date of this event.

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We will provide some non-alcoholic drinks,some snacks and donuts by class expense.We are also happy that you will bring something to eat and drink for sharing from your place!(going shopping is not required.)
Could I ask you to make progress of the presents exchange because presume there wont be so much time on the day?
Please remember your children come to join with their present for exchanging on the day.

Thank you so much for arranging the date of this event.

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We will prepare snack, drink and donuts using class funds. We welcome anything extra at home you can contribute as well! (You do not need to buy them)
On the day, I'm expecting tight schedule, so can I request you to proceed the gift exchange?
Please remember to have your child bring the give for the exchange.
Thank you for your understanding and adjusting your schedule.

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We will prepare snacks, drinks and donuts using class funds. We welcome anything extra at home you can contribute as well! (You do not need to buy them!)
On the day, I'm expecting tight schedule, so can I request you to proceed the gift exchange?
Please remember to have your child bring a present for the exchange.
Thank you for your understanding and adjusting your schedule.

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I have a bad news.
I was packing the item you ordered today, and found a defect at it.
One stone at a decoration of charm attached at strap was removed.
As I attached the picture, would you check it?

As this item has not been produced yet, I cannot find a replacement.
For this reason, if you do not mind, I will refund you 5 dollars for its defect but send it to you.
Of course, you can cancel the order and we can issue you a refund in full.
Would you select it?

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I have a bad news.
I was packing the item you ordered today, and found a defect at it.
One stone at a decoration of charm attached at strap was removed.
As I attached the picture, would you check it?

As this item has not been produced now, I cannot find a replacement.
For this reason, if you do not mind, I will refund you 5 dollars for its defect and send it to you.
Of course, you can cancel the order and we can issue you a refund in full.
Would you select it?

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We are sorry to have caused you an inconvenience since we sent the item whose manufacturing number was wrong. We apologize that we did not ask you to understand it in advance.
As we repaired this motor very carefully, the price is higher that initial period and we can promise that you↵
can use it for a long time.
As our apology this time, may we suggest you that we pay for part of repairing fee?
It is so good if you include the system in SAEC. If you need a parts for the SAEC from now,
we are sure that it will help you.
You can make any request to me. We apologize to you again.

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We are sorry to have caused you an inconvenience since we sent the item whose manufacturing number was wrong. We apologize that we did not ask you to understand it in advance.
As we repaired this motor very carefully, the value is higher than that of your initial purchased item and we can promise that you can use it for a long time.
As our apology this time, may we suggest you that we pay for part of repairing fee?
It is so good if you include the system in SAEC. If you need parts for the SAEC from now,
we are sure that we will help you.
You can make any request to me. We apologize to you again.

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Thank you for your email. We appreciate shopping with us.
We regret to hear that the goods have not arrived yet. This shipping does not have tracking number. It is possibly taking time for delivery due to the Christmas season. Could you contact us again if the goods do not arrive about 10 days later? In that case, we will resend the same goods or refund the full amount.
We would like to apologize again.
Best Regards,

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Thank you for your email. We appreciate your shopping with us.
We regret to hear that the goods have not arrived yet. This shipping does not have a tracking number. It is possibly taking time for delivery due to the Christmas season. Could you contact us again if the goods do not arrive about 10 days later? In that case, we will resend the same goods or refund the full amount.
We would like to apologize again.
Best Regards,

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Do you mean that carrying case that is listed on your page of sale is just listed and
not attached?
It is very confusing.
You should tell this kind of important information before purchasing.
One outfit in the picture is missing.
We do not have an adhesive agent as well. There is an item that we cannot understand instead.
I told you to be careful not to miss anything.
I would like you to send the carrying case and missing items to customers who purchased respectively when they purchase next time.
How much does a cheapest delivery company charge?

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Do you mean that the carrying case that is listed on your page of sale is just listed and
not attached?
It is very confusing.
You should provide this kind of important information before purchasing.
One outfit in the picture is missing.
We do not have an adhesive agent as well. There is an item that we cannot understand instead.
I told you to be careful not to miss anything.
I would like you to send the carrying case and missing items to customers who purchased respectively when they purchase next time.
How much does the cheapest delivery company charge?

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I have the following requests.
I want you to set that we can post a picture on the posting page of the screen.
I want you to change posting and URL of user name to Post ID.

May I request you? (is it hard to change the user name?)
Would you let me know file name changed at the last?
I am going to correct it by myself when the script is updated.

The items are not shown at news page.
I cannot post a message if there is / at the title name.
If a screen is large, layout of the control screen is destroyed.
After publicizing the posting, an error appears after deleting thumb nail and publicize.

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I have the following requests.
I want you to set that we can post a picture on the posting page of the motion picture.
I want you to change posting and URL of the user name to Post ID.

May I request you? (is it hard to change the user name?)
Would you let me know a changed file name at the last?
I am going to correct it by myself when the script is updated.

The items are not shown at a news page.
I cannot post a message if there is / at the title name.
If a screen is large, layout of the control screen is destroyed.
After publicizing the posting, an error appears after deleting thumbnails and publicizing it.

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You are extremely busy at the moment. And by no means I am pressing you to finish the doll. I am just going to tell you about my wish, so please do not take it bad, all right? If you say you cannot, please tell me so. You health is more important.
I would like to change the production sequence of the dolls I requested. It turned out that A can be finished until 12/15 (the reason is that I had planned to give it to my mother as a Christmas present). So, after C, I would like you to start producing R, then C, and at last, D.

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You are extremely busy at the moment. And by no means I am pressing you to finish the doll. I am just going to tell you about my wish, so please do not take it bad, all right? If you say you cannot, please tell me so. You health is more important.
I would like to change the production sequence of the dolls I requested. It turned out that A can be finished until 12/15 (the reason is that I plan to give it to my mother as a Christmas present). So, after C, I would like you to start producing R, then C, and at last, D.

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If possible, I would like to ask R, C and D to be completed by 30th November, but I think R must take a lot of time to finish. If so, I would like to as R and C to be completed by 30th November, then A to be done by 15th December. Excuse me for asking so much. Once again, please don't push yourself too much.

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If possible, I would like to ask R, C and D to be completed by 30th November, but I think R must take a lot of time to finish. If so, I would like R and C to be completed by 30th November, then A to be done by 15th December. Excuse me for asking so much. Once again, please don't push yourself too much.

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You must be very busy now. The dolls don't need to finished in a hurry. Please don't feel bad as these only my hopeful anticipations and are not a request or demand. Tell me if it is hard to meet these schedules, because your well-being is more important. I would like to ask you to change the sequence of production of the dolls that I ordered. Completion of A can be prolonged until 15th December (as I thought I can send this as a Christmas present for my mother). Then I would like to ask you to move on to completing C, then R, then C and D.

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You must be very busy now. The dolls don't need to finished in a hurry. Please don't feel bad as these are only my hopeful anticipations and are not a request or demand. Tell me if it is hard to meet these schedules, because your well-being is more important. I would like to ask you to change the sequence of production of the dolls that I ordered. Completion of A can be prolonged until 15th December (as I thought I can send this as a Christmas present for my mother). Then I would like to ask you to move on to completing C, then R, then C and D.