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Related to the presented discussion, there are no corporation to be disclosed which is in relation to COI.

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Related to the speech subject, there is no corporation to be disclosed, which is related to COI.

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Since English is not my first language, I don't know if I am explaining this right but,↵
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for example, could I add internet site such as "Google", "Yahoo", "YouTube", and "iTunes"?
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Is it quite difficult to add certain sites by myself?

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Since English is not my first language, I don't know if I understand this correctly, but for example, could I add a website such as "Google", "Yahoo", "YouTube", and "iTunes", etc.?
Or, is it quite difficult to add certain websites by myself?

元の翻訳
Since English is not my first language, I don't know if I am explaining this right but,

for example, could I add internet site such as "Google", "Yahoo", "YouTube", and "iTunes"?

Is it quite difficult to add certain sites by myself?

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Since English is not my mother tongue, I don't know if I am understanding it correctly but,

for example, could I add websites such as "Google", "Yahoo", "YouTube", and "iTunes"?

Or would it be quite difficult to add certain websites on my own?

元の翻訳
Tencent はQuixeyの検索を阻止できるか？↵
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アジアのTechは、Alibabaの大手ライバル社であるWeChatの開発者であるTencent (HKG:0700)が　Quixeyの検索を阻止できるか懸念している。　Gowwrappan氏はそれを可能としながらも、そのことがTencentにとって有益ではないと語った。「ecosystemを解放せず阻止するような人は失敗するでしょう。」と氏は語る。「門戸を閉じれば、ユーザーの共感は得られません。」

Tencentがバックアップする検索エンジンのSogouは、今期の初めにWe-Chat内でのコンテンツの検索を可能にしたが、アジアのTechが調査したところによると、最もうまくいったとして平均的なしか結果しか残せなかった。↵

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Tech in Asiaは、Alibabaの大手ライバル社であるWeChatの開発者であるTencent (HKG:0700)が　Quixeyの検索を阻止できるか懸念している。　Gowwrappan氏はそれを可能としながらも、そのことがTencentにとって有益ではないと語った。「ecosystemを解放せず阻止するような人は失敗するでしょう。」と氏は語る。「門戸を閉じれば、ユーザの共感は得られません。」

Tencentがバックアップする検索エンジンのSogouは、今期の初めにWe-Chat内でのコンテンツの検索を可能にしたが、Tech in Asiaが調査したところによると、最もうまくいったとして平均的な結果しか残せなかった。

元の翻訳
荷物を送付いただいたようですが、荷物に明記された、もしくは、同封の請求書に書かれた価格を具体的に教えてください。

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荷物を送付いただと理解しておりますが、荷物に明記された、もしくは、同封の請求書に書かれた価格を具体的に教えてください。

元の翻訳
Received product.
However, a button on the shirt was broken.
Also, the button on the sleeve fell off.
Seems as it can be fixed, so I will not return the product, but would like to ask for partial refund.

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Received the product.
However, a button on the shirt was broken.
Also, another button on the sleeve fell off.
Seems as it can be fixed, so I will not return the product, but would like to ask for partial refund.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your response.

I am very sorry for the inconvenience.

It seems that the arrival has not been made within the due date, so I would like to propose 2 alternate plans.
Let me know which you prefer.
1) Get a refund.
2) We will send you the same item with track record.

I am sorry again to cause you extra effort.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Shipping with track record

Will be shipped by EMS

Weight

For female

For male

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Thank you very much for your response.

We apologize for any inconvenience this transaction has caused.

It seems that the arrival has not been made within the due date, so I would like to propose 2 alternate plans.
Let me know which you prefer.
1) Get a refund.
2) We will send you the same item with track record.

I am sorry again to cause you extra effort.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Shipping with track record

Will be shipped by EMS

Weight

For female

For male

元の翻訳
I am sorry the message had not been properly send to you.

The product is SA-2 for T3, not SA-1.

We will receive your canceled product.

Please send the product to the address below.

Once we receive the product,we will pay you back the product cost deducting the mailing fee via PAYPAL.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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I am sorry the message had not been properly sent to you.

The product for T3 is SA-2, not SA-1.

We will receive your canceled product.

Please send the product to the address below.

Once we receive the product, we will pay you back the product cost deducting the shipping fee via PAYPAL.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
I am sorry the message had not been properly send to you.

The product is SA-2 for T3, not SA-1.

We will receive your canceled product.

Please send the product to the address below.

Once we receive the product,we will pay you back the product cost deducting the mailing fee via PAYPAL.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

修正後
I am sorry it seems that the message had not been properly send to you.

The product is SA-2 for T3, not SA-1.

We will receive your canceled product.

Please send the product to the address below.

Once we receive the product,we will pay you back the product cost deducting the mailing fee via PAYPAL.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
ebates1について

お手紙をありがとうございました。　Ｅｂａｔｅｓは、eBayでの買い物のキャッシュバックを　特定のデパートで行っております。
現在対象となっているデパートのリストを参照される場合は、以下のリンクをご覧ください。http://www.ebates.com/ebay.htm

対象のカテゴリーは随時変更されますので、定期的にご確認ください。

eBayでの購入のキャッシュバックを希望される場合、購入カゴに商品を入れて購入する前に、Ebates.com の"Shop Now”ボタンをクリックして購入希望カテゴリーを選んでください。

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ebates1について

お手紙をありがとうございました。　Ｅｂａｔｅｓは、eBayでの買い物のキャッシュバックを　特定の部門で行っております。
現在対象となっている部門のリストを参照される場合は、以下のリンクをご覧ください。http://www.ebates.com/ebay.htm

対象のカテゴリーは随時変更されますので、定期的にご確認ください。

eBayでの購入のキャッシュバックを希望される場合、購入カゴに商品を入れて購入する前に、Ebates.com の"Shop Now”ボタンをクリックして購入希望カテゴリーを選んでください。