手代木快 (caylen72) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello

I live in Japan.
I've received the item you sent today.

You said the item was new, unused and unopened.
However I saw that the item was damaged and a wire fastened electrical cord was removed.

I doubt whether this item is unopened.

I planed I would use this item for a present,but I cannot do that because of the bad condition as described above.

Please refund me 30% of the price of this item ($39),because I unwillingly take some time and money to return the item.

If you don't contact me,I'll directly consult paypal.

Please treat me well↵

修正後
Hello

I live in Japan.
I've received the item you sent today.

You said the item was new, unused and unopened.
However, the outer box is damaged and a wire fastening the electrical cord was removed.

This item is not unopened.

I planned to give this item to someone as a present,but I cannot do that because of the condition of the item.

Please refund me 30% of the price of this item ($39), as it takes time and money to send the item back to America.

If you don't contact me,I will directly consult paypal.

Please treat me well

元の翻訳
I'm interested in this item.
Would you mind if I ask a question?
It's about the nib at the tip of the pen.
May I know if the back part is flat,
or are the two vertical lines carved?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Thank you very much.

修正後
I'm interested in this item.
Would you mind if I ask a question?
It's about the nib at the tip of the pen.
May I know if the back of the nib is flat,
or are there two vertical lines ?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Thank you very much.