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元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for opening the case last time.
From now I want to meet you to find out the solution.
About this time product, Please count the quantity in your stock.
And then, Could you sell me this product at the same price
If it is possible, I think i can prolong business with you.
I am looking forward to your reply.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for opening the case last time.
In the future I would discuss with you to find out the solution.
Regarding this product, please tell me the quantity you currently have in stock.
Also, can I continue to purchase it at the same price also in the future?
If possible, I hope to continue business with you for long.
I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
I purchase 50 items of Nike GPS watches in black, 47 items in blue so please sell me at $85/items and free shipping cost.
Total amount of 97 items is $8245
If you accept this condition I will make a payment via Paypal immediately
I really want to have more transaction with you in the future.
I am looking for your reply
Thank you and best regards

修正後
Since I will purchased 50 items of Nike GPS watches in black, 47 items in blue, I would like for you to please sell the product at $85 per item with free shipping.
The total is 97 items, and I will pay $8245.↵

If you accept this condition, I will make the payment via Paypal immediately.
I would like to continue to do business with you in the future.
I am awaiting your reply.
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
Thank you for your polite reply.
At present, because of fund adjustment so I think I will place an order on 15th, It is Okay?
Here is my Paypal account.
gxlc.powder@gmail.com
On ebay, I can not put a gmail.
I will be happy if you could send me an email to this address from next time.
Thank you and best regards

修正後
Thank you for your polite reply.
At present, because of fund adjustments, I am thinking of placing an order on 15th. It this all right?
Here is my Paypal account.
gxlc.powder@gmail.com
I could not put my gmail on ebay.
It would help me a lot if you could send me emails to this address from now on.
Thank you and best regards