blue lagoon (blue_lagoon) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We wanted to send products to you, but we couldn't do that.
We advised Amazon that this kind of error should never be happened.

You estimated our store 1, but the reason we couldn't sell the product is Amazon system error and not our mistake.
If it's OK, could you delete the rating?
We would appreciate if you could.

If you have any questions, please contact us.

修正後
We wanted to send products to you, but we couldn't do that.
We advised Amazon that this kind of error should never happen again.

You estimated [word choice] our store 1 [awkward], but we couldn't sell the product because of Amazon's system error and not because of our mistake.
If it's OK [informal], could you delete your rating?
We would appreciate it if you could.

If you have any questions, please contact us.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

The address
support@dares.jp
is not used any more, so please send mails to
support@hammock-rest.com

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.

The address
support@dares.jp
is not used any more, so please send mail to
support@hammock-rest.com.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

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素晴らしい一日を。

修正後
こんにちは。

ご連絡ありがとうございます。価格設定の確認をして、もし何の変更もなければ請求書を、もし価格に変更があればEメールを送付します。間もなくご連絡できると思います。

素晴らしい一日を。