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元の翻訳
Thank you for answering my continuing questions.
Can the size of the top and bottom of this item be ordered separately?
And please do let me know about the postage charges.

修正後
Thank you for answering my continuing questions.
Is it possible to make separate orders of the large and small (items)?
And please do let me know about the postage charges.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your prompt reply.
I am planning the subsequent bidding for the below items.
A
B

If I can win all the bidding, the items become six (6) pieces in total, but would you pack them in single box?
And, please inform me the shipping charge for the package. I’m sorry for taking your time.

Thank you for your continuing assistance.

修正後
Thank you for your prompt reply.
I am planning the subsequent bidding for the below items.
A
B

If I can win all the bidding, the items become six (6) pieces in total, but would you pack them in single box?
And, please inform me the shipping charge for the package. I’m sorry for taking your time.

Thank you for your continuing assistance.
Thank you for your prompt reply. I intend to bid for the following items:↵
A↵
B↵
If my bids are successful, there will be six items in all. Would you send them as a single package, and advise me of the shipping costs please? With apologies for any inconvenience, and thanking you for your continuing assistance.