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biribiri — もらったレビュー

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12年弱前
オーストラリア
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hummingchie この翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語
2014/02/21 06:30:03

元の翻訳
The Chuugoku Region↵
From its highest and most beautiful mountain, the broad vistas of Tottori and Shimane can be viewed.
Unzen (Kyushu and Nagasaki)
Not only the magnificent Unzen, but the prefectures of Saga, Fukuoka, and to the east, the coast of Kumamoto Prefecture are clearly visible.
We can say without fear of contradiction that the variety of scenes on view from carriage windows are iconic of train travel in Kyushu.
Turning our attention further south to Kagoshima, (or “Sakurajima”, meaning “Cherry Blossom Island”, as it is called), where a particular mountain makes its presence felt.
If your journey takes you to Kagoshima, you can experience the sight of the columns of smoke issuing from the Volcano on the far side of Kumgang Bay. ↵

修正後
This is the highest and most beautiful mountain in the Chugoku Region that can be viewed fron the broad vistas of Tottori and Shimane.
Unzen (Kyushu and Nagasaki)
Not only the magnificent Unzen, but the prefectures of Saga, Fukuoka, and to the east, the coast of Kumamoto Prefecture are clearly visible.
We can say without fear of contradiction that the variety of scenes on view from carriage windows are iconic of train travel in Kyushu.
Turning our attention further south to Kagoshima, everyone recalls the “Sakurajima” (meaning “Cherry Blossom Island”, as it is called, and it is a mountain itself), which makes its presence felt.
If your journey takes you to Kagoshima, you can experience the sight of the columns of smoke issuing from the Volcano on the far side of Kinkou Bay.