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元の翻訳
Merci pour le message.
Je suis désolé de vous déranger à cause de notre erreur.
Nous remboursé tout l'argent plus 2 €,

Nous vous remercions de votre compréhension et coopération.

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Merci pour votre message.
Nous sommes désolés de vous avoir dérangé par notre faute.
Nous vous avons entièrement remboursé et 2 € en plus.

Nous vous remercions pour votre compréhension et votre coopération cette fois.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the purchase.
We checked before the shipment and found a screw feel off from the handle.
However, this part is sewed to the handle, so it will not be a problem. (check the picture)
*The inside part of the bag is torn off, so it must be fixed. This is totally my mistake.
If you will purchase this item at its current condition, so I will send it right now with $100 refund.
If you cancel it, I will refund all the money right now.
Please tell me which works better for you.
I'm sorry for my mistake.

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Thank you for the purchase.
We checked before the shipment and found that one of the screws fell off from the handle.
However, this part is sewn on the handle, so it will not be a problem. (Please check the picture)
*The bag cannot be used as the interior of the bag is detached, and sticky. So it must be fixed. This is totally my mistake.
If you will purchase this item with its current condition, I will ship it to you right now with a $100 refund.
If you cancel it, I will immediately give you a full refund.
Please tell me which works better for you.
I'm sorry for my mistake.

元の翻訳
We announce about the extension of best before date. We talked about it with the maker and they told us that if they let them be drier than before, it is possible to set the best before date as one year. But it might become close to cookies. It makes them to make a sample again, but do you still want the sample?

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We announce about the extension of best before date for "Kiako energy bars". We talked about it with the manufacturer, and they told us that if they let their moisture level lower, it is possible for us to set the best before date as one year. But they might become something close to cookies. It will require them some time for them to make the samples again, but do you still want the sample?

元の翻訳
Can I send money directly to your paypal account because I don't want to pay through ebay.

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Can I send money directly to your paypal account because I don't want to pay through ebay?

元の翻訳
I'm sorry. I forgot to send you the manual. It is in the DropBox.

I haven't received your e-mail address. Please tell us as soon as possible.

In this project, $50 will be paid for 50 items uploaded on commerce. But it might be hard for beginners to upload 50 items all at the same time, so I will pay for the amount you uploaded within that period.

For example, according to our agreement, $20 will be paid for 50 items.

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I'm sorry. I forgot to send you the manual. It is in the DropBox.

I haven't received your e-mail address. Please tell us as soon as possible.

In this project, $50 will be paid for 50 items uploaded on commerce. But it might be hard for beginners to upload 50 items all at the same time, so I will pay for the amount you uploaded on Sunday every week..

For example, according to our agreement, $20 will be paid for 50 items.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry for the late reply.
The dimension of the product is 36 (US4) × 42 (US10).
If you want bigger sizes, expand it before you print or print in the original size and cut it open.

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We are very sorry for the late reply.
The size range of this product is 36 (US4) to 42 (US10).
If you want bigger sizes, make an enlarged print or cut it open after you print it out the original size.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry for the late reply.
The dimension of the product is 36 (US4) × 42 (US10).
If you want bigger sizes, expand it before you print or print in the original size and cut it open.

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We are very sorry for the late reply.
The sizes of the product are available between size 36 (US4) size 42 (US10).
If you want bigger sizes, enlarge it before you print or print in the original size and cut it open.

元の翻訳
Then we will be waiting in our company's building at 2:30 on May 10th.

And for the start-up in the UK, we are available on these days below.

5/19 (Thu) at 4-6pm
5/20 (Fri) at 3-6pm

Please choose one of them.
We have other appointments in our schedule, so it will help if you can reply by tomorrow.

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Well then, we will be waiting in our company's building at 2:30 on May 10th.

And for the start-up in the UK, we are available on these dates below.

5/19 (Thu) at 4-6pm
5/20 (Fri) at 3-6pm

Please choose one of them.
We have other appointments in our schedule, so it will help if you can reply by tomorrow.