Atsuko-S (atsuko-s) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
わが友よ、こんにちは。

このグラスの最終価格はいくらでしょうか。

割引をしていただけますか。
エジプトへ輸送費用込みで440ドルにしていただけますか。私はこの価格で日本から３つ購入しましたし、毎週入荷の対応はできます。
「書留郵便のみ」で送って下さい。

私は７０パーセントの税金と輸送費を私の責任において支払いますので、税関送り状に３０ドルの品物と記載してください。問題はありません。

お返事をお待ちしています。

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こんにちは。

このグラスの最終価格はいくらでしょうか。

割引をしていただけますか。
エジプトへ輸送費用込みで440ドルにしていただけますか。私はこの価格で日本から３つ購入しましたし、毎週入荷の対応はできます。
「書留郵便のみ」で送って下さい。

私は７０パーセントの税金と輸送費を私の責任において支払いますので、税関送り状に３０ドルの品物と記載してください。問題はありません。

お返事をお待ちしています。

元の翻訳
I reserved the air ticket by expedia, but they mistook my name and reserved the ticket. I asked them to change the ticket but they say they can't.
Expedia says I have to cancel the ticket once and purchase it again.
However, there is only the ticket for 2800 USD. I'm looking for another ticket with Vietnam Airlines.
Please wait for reservation of the hotel and ticket, which I asked you to make, for a while. I'm not sure I can go to Vietnam as scheduled.

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I reserved the airline ticket on Expedia, Inc., but they reserved the ticket for me under a wrong name. While I asked them to change the ticket, they replied to me that they could not.
According to Expedia, Inc. I have to cancel the ticket once and purchase a new one.
However, there is only one ticket that costs 2800 USD. I'm looking for another with Vietnam Airlines.
Please wait a while before you book the hotel and ticket, which I asked you before. I'm not sure if (whether) I can go to Vietnam as scheduled.

元の翻訳
*****の注文分もキャンセルされましたでしょうか？
私はその注文分をpaypalにてすでに支払っております。
お返事いただきますようお願いいたします。

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*****の注文もキャンセルされましたでしょうか？
その注文分はすでにpaypalにて支払い済みです。
お返事いただきますようお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
1
There is a large black spot on the seating face in the yellow circle at your left hand picture.

2
There are a few black spots in leather of the connected part on upper side of backrest in the white circle at your right hand picture,

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1
There is a large black spot on the seating face in the yellow circle at your left hand picture.

2
There are a few black spots in leather of the connected part on upper side of backrest in the white circle at your right hand picture.

元の翻訳
通訳者として、私たちは佐藤氏に再度依頼しました。佐藤氏は来週末まで多忙であり、８月１３日には予定が空いているそうです。
私は友人のサトル氏に連絡しました。サトル氏は８月６日であれば通訳の手伝いが可能だそうです。
御社側ではこのスケジュールと担当者で了解いただけますでしょうか？
アドバイスをいただければ私たちはお申し付けいただいた通りにいたします。

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通訳者様、私たちは佐藤氏に再度依頼しました。佐藤氏は来週末まで多忙であり、８月１３日には予定が空いているそうです。
私は友人のサトル氏に連絡しました。サトル氏は８月６日であれば通訳の手伝いが可能だそうです。
御社側ではこのスケジュールと担当者で了解いただけますでしょうか？
アドバイスをいただければ私たちはお申し付けいただいた通りにいたします。

元の翻訳
ギフトとして注文分を申告するもしくは最終的にギフトとして申告することは可能でしょうか？ベルギーに現在いまして、あなたの製品をいくつか購入したいと思います。しかし私の国では税金が非常に高いのです。。。それから衣服はあらかじめ洗濯してあるかどうかが知りたいです。

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ギフトとして注文分を申告し、最終的にギフトとして申告することは可能でしょうか？ベルギーに現在いまして、あなたの製品をいくつか購入したいと思います。しかし私の国では税金が非常に高いのです。。。それから衣服はあらかじめ洗濯してあるかどうかが知りたいです。

元の翻訳
I appreciate you purchase the product, but can I confirm some points to place this trade safly and have you satisfied with it.
You mentioned the addressee is India which is different from that of firstly indicated. Does it match with your registered address in paypal?
(As I confirm it from my side, it looks like same.)
You firstly would like to ship it to US, but you suddenly changed it. So, I wonder why you changed. In the rule, we can't ship the items the different address from the registered one. Also, the item will be usually delivered in 4 days from Japan to US, but it is delivered in 10 days at earliest, sometimes about a month.
Would you agree with this?

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I appreciate your purchasing the product, but may I confirm a few points to place this transaction safly 〔?〕and have you satisfied with it.
You mentioned the addressee is India which is different from that of firstly indicated. Does it match with your registered address in PayPal?
(As I confirm it from my side, it looks the same.)
You firstly would like to ship it to the US, but you suddenly changed it. So, I wonder why you changed. As a rule, we can't ship items to an address different from the registered one. Also, the item will be usually delivered in 4 days from Japan to the US, but it is delivered in 10 days at the earliest, in some cases, about a month.
Would you agree with this?

元の翻訳
I suppose you may hear from Shigeki, I need 136 pieces of AC adapter with PSE for table tennis machine. It writes 9V2A, but I heard it can be correspondence to 12V2A.
D you need any other information?

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I suppose you may hear from Shigeki, I need 136 pieces of AC adapter with PSE for table tennis machine. It writes 9V2A, but I heard it can be correspondence to 12V2A.
Do you need any other information?

元の翻訳
Check this album of limited period now!
(*July 27th (wed) 0:00 to September 6th (tue) 23:59　Limited period delivery on the internet\9

"a-nation 2015 BEST HIT SELECTION"
(Recorded songs / Artists)
1. Time goes by / Every Little Thing
2. Poppin' love cocktail feat. TEEDA / KUMI KODA
3. SUMMER DAYS / Do As Infinity

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Check out this album of limited period now!
(*July 27th (wed) 0:00 to September 6th (tue) 23:59　Limited period delivery on the internet)

"a-nation 2015 BEST HIT SELECTION"
(Recorded songs / Artists)
1. Time goes by / Every Little Thing
2. Poppin' love cocktail feat. TEEDA / KUMI KODA
3. SUMMER DAYS / Do As Infinity

元の翻訳
The release of ”a-nation 2015 BEST HIT SELECTION" which is limited to internet deliveried and compilation album has fixed!

The biggest summer festival in Japan, "a-nation" is held this year, too!
In commemoration of this festival, it is fixed to deliver the limitd to internet deliveried compilation album of a-nation, which was received very well, for limited period this year, too!
"a-nation 2015 BEST HIT SELECTION" recorded the songs of great-flamboyant artists starts to deliver on the internet from July 27 (wed).

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The release of ”a-nation 2015 BEST HIT SELECTION" which is limited to internet deliveried and compilation album has fixed! [this sentence makes no sense]

The biggest summer festival in Japan, "a-nation" is held this year, too!
In commemoration of this festival, it is fixed to deliver the limitedd to internet deliveried [this expression makes no sense]compilation album of a-nation, which was received very well, for limited period this year, too!
"a-nation 2015 BEST HIT SELECTION" recorded the songs of great-flamboyant artists starts to deliver on the internet from July 27 (wed).

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for a-mail.
I'd like to estimate roughly the shipping budget, so please kindly let me know the total weight of the ordered product this time.
Although you informed me the cost is $1.25/kg, I can't estimate roughly unless you inform me the total weight.
So, please kindly inform me the total weight.

Thank you very much for your cooperation in advance.

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Thank you very much for your email.
I'd like to estimate roughly the shipping budget, so please kindly let me know the total weight of the ordered product this time.
Although you informed me the cost was $1.25/kg, I can't estimate the budget roughly unless you inform me the total weight.
So, please kindly inform me the total weight.

Thank you very much for your cooperation in advance.

元の翻訳
Firstly, I appologize I offended you. I am really sorry. I don't know about the product in details. Since the label of 1600 was put on, I can't make a judgement whether it is really 1500 or 1600. So, I sent the product back to you. I would like you to understand the situation. I have purchased the products from you for many times. I made a payment immediately every time, and I haven't complained about the delivered products. I would like to continue to build the good business partnership from now. Would you please continue to deal with me in the future?

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Firstly, I apologize for offending you. I am really sorry. I don't know about the product in details. Since the label of 1600 was put on, I can't make a judgement whether it is really 1500 or 1600. So, I sent the product back to you. I would like you to understand the situation. I have purchased the products from you for many times. I made payment immediately every time, and I have never complained about the delivered products. I would like to continue to build the good business partnership from now on. Would you please continue being my partner in the future?

元の翻訳
バターを部屋に常温で起き、佐藤を加えて小麦粉をふるいにかけてダマにならないようにします。

そして卵と牛乳を用意し加えます。

お好みの濃さになったら、レモンの皮とふるいにかけてベーキングパウダーを１袋加えます。

全ての材料を生地がなめらかになりダマがなくなるまで混ぜます。
型に油を塗り、小麦粉をよくまぶします。そして混ぜたものを型の三分の二まで入れます。

オーブンで200度で45～50分間焼きます。最初の20分間は扉を閉めてください。オーブンの中を見る場合には、扉の穴から覗いて、調理の状況と火の通り具合を確認します。

私達がよく知っているデザートになる前に、つまようじで何度か刺して、出来上がっているかどうか確認します。

簡単で早くて美味しいよ。

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バターを室温で置き、砂糖を加えて小麦粉をふるいにかけてダマにならないようにします。

そして卵と牛乳を用意し加えます。

お好みの濃さになったら、レモンの皮とふるいにかけてベーキングパウダーを１袋加えます。

全ての材料を生地がなめらかになりダマがなくなるまで混ぜます。
型に油を塗り、小麦粉をよくまぶします。そして混ぜたものを型の三分の二まで入れます。

オーブンで200度で45～50分間焼きます。最初の20分間は扉を閉めてください。オーブンの中を見る場合には、扉の穴から覗いて、調理の状況と火の通り具合を確認します。

私達がよく知っているデザートになる前に、つまようじで何度か刺して、出来上がっているかどうか確認します。

簡単で早くて美味しいよ。

元の翻訳
I'd like to report the detail.
Our company sells and construct LED lights and so on.
Due to diversification of business, we will tackle with selling mortor cycle and the equipments which we have been selling for a long time.
We are now selling the equipments in the auction web site, the url is XXXX.
Our shopping web site is under construction, the url is XXXXX.
The name of auction web site is XXXXXXX, and it will be integrated into XXXX after the shipping web site is completed.
The URL of our company is XXXXXXXXXX.

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I'd like to report the details.
Our company sells and constructs LED lights and so on.
Due to diversification of business, we will tackle with selling equipments for motorcycles, which we have been selling for a long time, but now on a full scale.
We are now selling the equipments on the auction website, the url is XXXX.
Our shopping website is under construction, the url is XXXXX.
The name of auction website is XXXXXXX, and it will be integrated into XXXX after the shipping website is completed.
The URL of our company is XXXXXXXXXX.