翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

先日は長い電話にお付き合い頂き感謝してます

そこでお話させて頂いた項目の確認をお互いにしましょう

銀製のプレート製作許可　OK

インナープレートが今後全て黒になるが、銀色のタイプ発注

半金の支払いは納期１か月前で

00は今後も継続販売

次回の注文より金色の製作　（appleの金色希望）

アジア総代理権

現在00や百貨店より
オファーが多くありますが、そのが卸価格５０%を要求されます
現在私達への卸は５０%ですが、発注量もこれからも増えていきますので
次回より４５%に落として頂けませんか。

英語

Thank you for the recent long phone call.

I would us to confirm the items discussed.

Silver plate production permission OK

Although all the inner plates are black, we are ordering the silver types.

Half of the payment will be processed a month before delivery, and we will continue selling the 00.

Production of the gold for the next order (requesting apple's gold)

Sole asian representative/agency

Currently we have many offers from places such as 00 and department stores, but they are requesting a 50% wholesale price.
Up until now we have been working off the 50% wholesale price, but we plan to increase our order quantity in the future.
Would you consider dropping it to 45%.

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/08/02 03:16:49

元の翻訳
Thank you for the recent long phone call.

I would us to confirm the items discussed.

Silver plate production permission OK

Although all the inner plates are black, we are ordering the silver types.

Half of the payment will be processed a month before delivery, and we will continue selling the 00.

Production of the gold for the next order (requesting apple's gold)

Sole asian representative/agency

Currently we have many offers from places such as 00 and department stores, but they are requesting a 50% wholesale price.
Up until now we have been working off the 50% wholesale price, but we plan to increase our order quantity in the future.
Would you consider dropping it to 45%.

修正後
Thank you for the recent long phone call.

Let's confirm the items we discussed.

Silver plate production permission OK

Although all the inner plates will be black, we are ordering the silver types.

Half of the payment will be processed a month before delivery, and we will continue selling the 00.

Production of the ones in gold for the next order or larer (requesting apple in gold)

Sole Asian representative/agency

Currently we have many offers from places such as 00 and department stores, but they are requesting a 50% wholesale price.
Up until now we have been working off the 50% wholesale price, but we plan to increase our order quantity in the future.
Would you consider dropping it to 45%?