翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

その後お体の調子はいかがでしょうか？
こちら東京はいよいよ暑い夏がやって来ました。
９月にどうしてもロンドンに行きたいと思っています。
二週目の週末にあなたに会えたらうれしいです。
お返事できるときに、お待ちしています。


チケット料金を変更していただいたのですね？
聴衆がたくさん来やすい良い金額だと思います。

英語

How your condition lately?
Here in Tokyo, the hot summer has arrived.
I eagerly would like to go to London in September.
I will be glad if I can meet you on the second weekend.
Looking forward to your reply.

So you've changed the price of the ticket?
I think it's affordable good price for many audience to come.

レビュー ( 1 )

tani1973はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/06/30 10:31:05

元の翻訳
How your condition lately?
Here in Tokyo, the hot summer has arrived.
I eagerly would like to go to London in September.
I will be glad if I can meet you on the second weekend.
Looking forward to your reply.

So you've changed the price of the ticket?
I think it's affordable good price for many audience to come.

修正後
How is your condition lately?
Here in Tokyo, the hot summer has arrived.
I eagerly would like to go to London in September.
I will be glad if I can meet you on the second weekend.
Looking forward to your reply.

So you've changed the price of the ticket, haven't you?
I think it's affordable price that can attract a large audience.