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日本語

今日は朝からお風呂の大掃除。マスクを二重にしても鼻に残る塩素の臭い。新鮮な空気を求めてバルコニーに避難。空はゴージャスな夏空。週明けには台風がやって来るというのに、青空は、悪い事なんて一つも起こらないよ！と言ってるみたい。でも、私は知ってる。この島の空はいつも地上の事など素知らぬ顔だと言う事を。戦争で大地が血だらけになっても、大きな波に沢山の命が流されてしまっても、空はいつも何も無かったかのように美しい。でも、それで良いのだと思う。私にとって汚れ無き者とはそう言うものだから。

英語

Today I'm cleaning the bath from this morning. Smell of chlorine remains my nose in spite of doubling masks on my mouth.
I go out to the balcony for fresh air. The sky is gorgeous, feeling summer. Though the typhoon will come here next week, the blue sky seems to say bad matters never occurs! But I know this sky of the island doesn't know matters on the earth anytime. If the earth would be drenched in blood or a lot of lives would be swept up by a big wave, the sky is always beautiful as nothing occurs. But that's good. I think the one without blot is like that.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/05/11 16:32:46

元の翻訳
Today I'm cleaning the bath from this morning. Smell of chlorine remains my nose in spite of doubling masks on my mouth.
I go out to the balcony for fresh air. The sky is gorgeous, feeling summer. Though the typhoon will come here next week, the blue sky seems to say bad matters never occurs! But I know this sky of the island doesn't know matters on the earth anytime. If the earth would be drenched in blood or a lot of lives would be swept up by a big wave, the sky is always beautiful as nothing occurs. But that's good. I think the one without blot is like that.

修正後
Today I've seriously been cleaning the bath since morning. The smell of chlorine lingers on in spite of having worn a double mask.
I go out to the balcony for fresh air. It's a gorgeous summer sky. Although a typhoon will come here at the beginning of the week, the blue sky seems to say that not even one bad thing will happen! But I know this island's sky has never cared about what's going on the land. Even If the earth would be soaked in blood, or a lot of lives would be swept away by a big wave, the sky will always be beautiful as if nothing had happened. But I think that's ok. Because for me, that's just the way it is for something so absolutely pure.

[anna_claba]

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