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日本語

今日は朝からお風呂の大掃除。マスクを二重にしても鼻に残る塩素の臭い。新鮮な空気を求めてバルコニーに避難。空はゴージャスな夏空。週明けには台風がやって来るというのに、青空は、悪い事なんて一つも起こらないよ！と言ってるみたい。でも、私は知ってる。この島の空はいつも地上の事など素知らぬ顔だと言う事を。戦争で大地が血だらけになっても、大きな波に沢山の命が流されてしまっても、空はいつも何も無かったかのように美しい。でも、それで良いのだと思う。私にとって汚れ無き者とはそう言うものだから。

英語

Today, I heavily cleaned my bathroom up. I still smelled chlorine although I double wore cotton masks. I escaped to a balcony to get fresh air. The summer sky was gorgeous. It seems like to say "Everything gonna be alright!" while a typhoon will hit here after this weekend. But I know. This island's sky has never cared about what's going on on the land. If war makes the land so bloody, or if a tidal wave kills thousands of lives, the sky is always beautiful as if nothing was happened. But it should be so. Because I think something absolutely pure is like that.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/05/11 16:26:28

元の翻訳
Today, I heavily cleaned my bathroom up. I still smelled chlorine although I double wore cotton masks. I escaped to a balcony to get fresh air. The summer sky was gorgeous. It seems like to say "Everything gonna be alright!" while a typhoon will hit here after this weekend. But I know. This island's sky has never cared about what's going on on the land. If war makes the land so bloody, or if a tidal wave kills thousands of lives, the sky is always beautiful as if nothing was happened. But it should be so. Because I think something absolutely pure is like that.

修正後
Today I seriously cleaned my bathroom since morning. I still smell the chlorine although I wore a double-layer mask. I escaped to the balcony to get some fresh air. The summer sky was gorgeous. It seemed to say something like "Everything's gonna be alright!" even though a typhoon is going to hit at the beginning of the week. But I know. This island's sky has never cared about what's going on the land. Even If war turns the land bloody, or if a tidal wave were to take thousands of lives, the sky wil always be beautiful as if nothing had happened. But I think that's ok. Because for me, that's just the way it is for something so absolutely pure.