翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

ご連絡ありがとうございます。
研修資料に記載があったかと思いますが、アクションプランを作成したら、研修の受講報告を兼ねて部長に報告し、大所高所からのアドバイスを受け（修正し）たのち、総務に提出するという手順です。

部長のチェックを受けたらご提出くださいますよう宜しくお願い致します。

英語

Thank you for contacting me. When you finish making the action plan, which is stated in the training document, please inform the department manager with a report of training session. After revising the plan taking his/her overall advice, submit it to the general affairs division.

Please hand in the plan being checked by the department manager.

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/27 12:55:55

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. When you finish making the action plan, which is stated in the training document, please inform the department manager with a report of training session. After revising the plan taking his/her overall advice, submit it to the general affairs division.

Please hand in the plan being checked by the department manager.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me. When you finish making the action plan, which is stated in the training document, please inform the department manager with a report of training session. After revising the plan taking his/her overall advice, submit it to the general affairs division.

Please hand in the plan after being checked by the department manager.