翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

社員寮の皆様

下記日程に来年度の新入社員が入居致しますのでお知らせいたします。

101号室　3月24日　＊＊＊さん
201号室　3月26日　＊＊＊さん
301号室　3月28日　＊＊＊さん

ご不明な点はお問い合わせください。

英語

To the all on th dormitory
We will let you know next year new employees will move here following schedule.

#101room March 24th ***
#201room March 26th ***
#301room March 28th ***

If you have a question ,please ask me.

レビュー ( 2 )

yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/03/24 19:19:47

元の翻訳
To the all on th dormitory
We will let you know next year new employees will move here following schedule.

#101room March 24th ***
#201room March 26th ***
#301room March 28th ***

If you have a question ,please ask me.

修正後
To the all in the dormitory
We would like to let you know new employees of next fiscal year will move in here with the following schedules.

#101room March 24th ***
#201room March 26th ***
#301room March 28th ***

If you have a question, please ask me.

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2015/03/24 23:27:26

元の翻訳
To the all on th dormitory
We will let you know next year new employees will move here following schedule.

#101room March 24th ***
#201room March 26th ***
#301room March 28th ***

If you have a question ,please ask me.

修正後
To all dormitory residents:
We will let you know next year new employees will move here following schedule [awkward].

Room 101 March 24th ***
Room 201 March 26th ***
Room 201 March 28th ***

If you have a question, please contact us.