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評価: 52 / ネイティブ 日本語 / 1 Review / 2015/02/18 00:35:37

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3_yumie7 52 英語、フランス語、スペイン語、ポルトガル語から日本語への翻訳をしています。...
日本語

このおむつは初期費用は高いですが、病院と連携することによって、長期的に費用を節約できるかもしれません。赤ちゃんの健康に異常がある場合、赤ちゃんの健康データがかかりつけの病院に転送されます。それによって、病院側は赤ちゃんが病院に到着する前にデータをチェックすることができ、診療を効率化することができるので、このおむつが普及するにつれて診療費が下がるかもしれません。また、webサイト上で専門家に相談して解決できる症状の場合、病院に行かなくて済むので医療費の削減にもつながります。

英語

The initial investment of this diaper may be high, but you can save money in the long term by collaborating with hospitals.
If babies have health problems, health data of babies are transferred to a private medical doctor in a hospital. A hospital can check the data of babies before they arrive the hospital and make medical examinations more efficient. So the medical fees may decrease with the spread of this diaper. In addition, if the a case is solved by consulting to a medical professional on website, parents do not need to go to hospital, so it leads to the the reduction of healthcare expenditures.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/19 03:30:21

元の翻訳
The initial investment of this diaper may be high, but you can save money in the long term by collaborating with hospitals.
If babies have health problems, health data of babies are transferred to a private medical doctor in a hospital. A hospital can check the data of babies before they arrive the hospital and make medical examinations more efficient. So the medical fees may decrease with the spread of this diaper. In addition, if the a case is solved by consulting to a medical professional on website, parents do not need to go to hospital, so it leads to the the reduction of healthcare expenditures.

修正後
The initial investment of this diaper may be high, but you can save money in the long term by collaborating with hospitals.
If babies have health problems, health data of babies are transferred to a private medical doctor in a hospital. A hospital can check the data of babies before they arrive the hospital and make medical examinations more efficient. So the medical fees may decrease with the spread of this diaper. In addition, if the a case is solved by consulting a medical professional on a website, parents do not need to go to hospital, so it leads to the the reduction of healthcare expenditures.

3_yumie7 3_yumie7 2015/02/19 03:31:10

Thank you for your review!

[削除済みユーザ] [削除済みユーザ] 2015/02/19 03:35:31

You're welcome. It's an excellent job.

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