翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

日本の女性はファッションに敏感で新しいものをどんどん取り入れようとします。そんな日本日本に「verge girl」さんが上陸したら大ヒットすること間違いないでしょう。私はもっともっと沢山の人に「verge girl」さんの存在を知って欲しいのです。日本に上陸する際は、是非私も仕事に携わらせていただきたいです。私はまだ大学生でビジネス力も経済力もありませんが、熱意とやる気は誰にも負けません。一緒に働かせていただきたいのです！出来ることならお会いしてこの思いを伝えたいです！！！

英語

Japanese women are sensitive to fashions and eager to absorb new things. If "verge girl" is launched into Japan, the country with full of such women, it is surely going to be a big hit. I want more and more people to know the existence of "verge girl". When you will launch into Japan, I want to take part in the work. I'm still an university student and have neither skill of business nor economic power, but my enthusiasm and motivation is second to none. Please let me work with you! If it is possible, I would like you to meet me and let me tell this enthusiasm directly!!

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/02/16 10:02:41

元の翻訳
Japanese women are sensitive to fashions and eager to absorb new things. If "verge girl" is launched into Japan, the country with full of such women, it is surely going to be a big hit. I want more and more people to know the existence of "verge girl". When you will launch into Japan, I want to take part in the work. I'm still an university student and have neither skill of business nor economic power, but my enthusiasm and motivation is second to none. Please let me work with you! If it is possible, I would like you to meet me and let me tell this enthusiasm directly!!

修正後
Japanese women are sensitive to fashions and eager to absorb new things. If "Verge Girl" is launched in Japan, the country with full of such women, it is surely going to be a big hit. I want more people to know about "Verge Girl." When you launch in Japan, I want to get involved in the process. I'm still a university student and have neither business skills nor economic power, but my enthusiasm and motivation are second to none. Please let me work with you! If it is possible, I would like to meet you and tell you how enthusiastic I am directly!!

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